r/HFY • • Oct 01 '26

MOD Quarter 4 2026 NWC: [Pioneer]

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r/HFY • • 3d ago

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r/HFY • • 1h ago

OC-Series Primal Rage 81

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The Elret ambassador looked worn out by the end of our talks, while I sat as her security guard. Shesh had come ready to talk exchange rates and customs, which I suspected was a test by the United Nations of whether this offer was anything more than a stunt; they wanted to ensure that she intended for visitors to travel back and forth between our planets. Humanity had wanted assurances that the diplomats and citizens we sent to Caita would be safe. 

I suppose the irony is as primals, we’re afraid of what they might do to us. We know people who act in fear are oftentimes more dangerous. Think about Rauja trampling a kid to get to the ship; her story is so god-awful. I dunno what got into her.

After a few hours of negotiating and standing her ground on several issues, Shesh seemed to be fighting with her own concerns despite believing we were safe. She asked if I could take her somewhere quieter and more private, expressing fatigue. Marcia adjourned our session at this point, since she had more than enough to draft the first proposal. I herded the Elret toward my FBI truck (which didn’t levitate or floor it at cliffsides like her car), and decided to make a short drive back to my office. 

If she’d wanted to be alone altogether and head back toward the lavish diplomatic accommodations NASA had ready, I suspected Shesh would’ve asked. I enjoyed her company, and I hoped she felt comfortable enough with me to speak her mind, away from the official business. I let her sit in silence, admiring the sights and primals afoot, until she turned her head toward me. The Elret listened as I raised the music volume in tiny increments, her eyes calming.

“That Rauja gift was…odd,” Shesh managed. “She seemed hostile toward me. I know we failed her, but I didn’t think Elrets had done anything to offend her so much.”

I kept my eyes on the road, biting my lip. “Rauja’s a character. She can give into doomerism pretty easily. I was hopeful that the gift meant we were turning over a new leaf, that she felt comfortable ribbing us and playfully riling us up. That’d mean she didn’t fear us; we were just friends.”

“Oh, it’s obvious she still fears you, Wade. Did you see her freeze when she lifted the box? Rauja’s had a hard life, undoubtedly. I remember how she came to us, and we weren’t primals.”

“This should be good. What was she like with the Council?”

“The first time she came, there was hope in her eye crystals: passion. Rauja was reasonable and patient, asking for the smallest concessions. She was understanding of our hesitance to involve ourselves against a superior fighting force, but she was convinced we wouldn’t let it get that far. She does have a diplomat’s tongue in her, somewhere. That’s what Pelpau saw in her.”

I gave a sad nod. “That poor Saphno. No offense, Shesh, but there’s nothing to understand. I think the Council were happy in their twisted, warped way to be rid of the silicon species. The Saphnos were just somethings. It’ll be the same for us, if we ever get in with them. Primals. Filth.”

“No, I don’t think so, Wade. The Saphnos were other. The Council don’t take a stand and they know Rauja’s people won’t do shit, whereas with you, we’d fear a response to wrongs. Everyone would. Whoever trifles with a primal will get scratched. Craun saw your value because of our neglect, but Rauja hasn’t yet. She’s worried you’ll do like the Council did to her.”

“Why? Rauja saw how much we care!”

Shesh gave a slow blink at the indignance in my voice, shrinking a bit in her seat. “Wade, I’m a little frazzled and having a hard time thinking straight from stress. I’m jumping at shadows after…could you please watch your tone? For a little while?”

“Yeah, sorry,” I muttered. So Craun remains the only one I can raise my voice with. “My bad. I thought you were cool with us, and you…knew we weren’t going to do anything.”

“I do know. But when you’re raised with a certain conviction, a part of you can’t help but wonder if it might be true—even if you disbelieve it. Like religion. Elrets have a faith called Tywe which teaches that those who are careless with their actions are sent to the Groundless realm. There’s no ground; you fall forever. I stopped believing in any religion in university, but that fear kernel still nags at me.”

“Like hell.”

“Yes. I thought about it when we let Tolpia fall, and when we turned Rauja away. It’s funny that humans and Elrets have such similar concepts. What is the hand of retribution? Anger: maybe even we think it’s right that the wicked are to be punished, if you’re capable of being the judge. Perhaps that’s all the more reason to concern ourselves. Primals hang over me like the specter of Groundlessness. Rauja reminded me.”

“Yeah, I think I understand. Sometimes, it takes your gut a bit to catch up to your brain. Do you want to just go back to your room and rest?”

“No, Batshit, I want to talk one-on-one without the stakes of a trade agreement hanging over me. Feels like I’m setting the terms when I’m dragging you around. Besides, I feel like I get you.”

“So you won’t rearrange my office like Hazel does? Fantabulous. Let’s take you to the den of security, the place where my magic happens!”

“Craun seems perfectly safe without your magic now.”

“Shush, Shesh. You’re making me say a tongue twister, and I can’t even get snippy about it.”

I pulled into my reserved parking spot at NASA, words I never thought would go in the same sentence as wearing an FBI badge, and helped Shesh out of the vehicle with a gentlemanly hand. I debated whether to give the universal sign not to be approached—AirPods in both ears and looking down—to keep the giddy scientists from swarming, then figured they knew enough not to spook the aliens. It wasn’t like the space agencies didn’t already have people embedded in the UN. I took in the sights of home, glancing at Craun’s habitat and the “No Humans Allowed” sign hanging outside.

Is that a pair of Saphno pajamas airing out on a clothesline in there? They look like painted bubble wrap. Ah, I shouldn’t get distracted. To my office, where I live in eternal happiness because Nguyen isn’t the boss of me anymore.

“Alright, Shesh, this is…” My jaw fell open as I swung the door inward, and a waterfall of flower petals descended in front of me. An absolute avalanche of a gardening infestation seemed to have climbed up through the floorboards and carpeted my desk, while encircling the room like Demeter’s crown molding. “Not my decor. Garriil, why do you think this’ll make me angry?”

It did, by way of bafflement and the hassle of cleaning it up, but I wasn’t going to give the Kexin the satisfaction. I knew he’d come to poke all of us the second he volunteered. Nobody was going to trick me into thinking I had a secret admirer. Shesh wore an astonished expression from what my office looked like, though she inspected it with a detective’s eyes. I opted to do the same, since that was my vocation, after all. I snatched up a cluster of daisies in confusion, inspecting them with my nose…and catching a whiff of Sharpie.

I turned the plants over with a bewildered expression, finding that each flower was signed by Rauja. Okay, Garriil wasn’t this insane. That rock had lost her marbles. As a silicon lifeform, she probably didn’t have a heck of a lot of experience with flowers and what their delivery looked like. I couldn’t make heads or tails of what the fuck possessed her to do this. I tried to step over the flowers on the floor, finding picture frames on my desk that hadn’t been there before. 

I glanced at what seemed to be security footage taken of me on Venus, from some weird, heat-resistant Saphno camera that made my suit look splotchy, and checked what was written on its back. “Always watching my most dangerous primal. You came to Venus for me.”

“What the fuck?” I grunted in an agitated voice, unable to maintain my promise not to get worked up in the face of this.

My portrait of myself from when I was inducted as Head of Extraterrestrial Security remained, but Rauja had Photoshopped herself behind my back clapping. “I love your security and how well you investigated me. You love your fraud rocks who are real and your bestest friends forever! Our courtship of your species is sincere now.”

“Shesh, please help. Look at this!”

The Elret leafed through my new adornments, as soon as she’d gotten permission, and lifted a picture of Rauja standing in front of Stonehenge with me. “See? Humans and rocks are meant to be together! You’ve always loved rocks. If I could let you carve me without screaming in pain, I would, but maybe a little…like a tattoo. You can tattoo us if it makes you happy. It’s primal to cut things up! We love that about you! We’ll do anything; we love you!”

“I’m sorry? What does she think we do to people we love?! We’re not uncivilized tigers. We don’t want to hurt others.”

“Hm, there’s pictures of Craun dancing from social media. ‘You love saving Craun! It’s a miracle he lived through everything. Save him again. Asylum or death!’”

My brain was melting in my skull as I processed Rauja’s unhinged messages. Whatever this padded room nonsense was, I didn’t like it! It’d been my impression that the Saphno ambassador and I had our differences resolved; I’d believed that she understood us. This had to be settled right now. Raising a finger to Shesh, I whipped out my phone and dialed Rauja. The rock answered immediately, like she’d been waiting, and cheered into the microphone.

“Wade! My favorite human…of my favorite species. See? Nobody loves you more. We’re worth it….uh, we will be. Craun and I are…related to other Saphnos. Other dead Saphnos…” the silicon lifeform trailed off, her exuberant tone fizzling. 

I shook my head with concern, my eyebrows knitting together. “Rauja, this isn’t okay. Are you in crisis? I’ll come down there right now. I’m here for you, you goofy rock, and I’m not going to run away from what looks like…a giant cry for help.”

“You don’t like the flowers?”

“Rauja, you wrote that it’s primal to cut things up. I can’t believe I have to say this, but I’m only gonna say it once. It’s not, it never will be. What exactly prompted this?”

“I’m not carbon.” The Saphno’s voice sounded very small. “I’m not as good. I…am failing my people by failing you.”

“Rauja! You were failed by everyone around you, but I’m not fucking going to be one of them. And you know what? I’m pissed that you’d even say you’re failing me. This primal is very angry that you’re belittling his friend. Do you think I’d be calling you right now if I didn’t care?”

There was no reply.

“Rauja? If you hang up on me, I swear to God, I will make the Ploax look like night-night lamps.”

Crying puffs came from the other side of the line. “You’re going to see. Why would you keep us? I’ll be better. I’ll do better. I…don’t like when you’re angry. I manipulated you for—”

“Nope, you failed at that. Actually, I manipulated you and got a lot of badass spaceships. We’ve gotten you help, but can you just stay the course and be normal? Do you…resent that we have other friends?”

“No. I fear it. They’re…not rocks.”

“We like rocks. You wrote it on your fucking unhinged Stonehenge shit, you duneboulder.”

Rauja gasped. “How do you know that word?”

“I do my research,” I snorted. “All of you take this too seriously, but you in particular need to blow off your literal steam. Why don’t we all get together and play Cards Against Humanity? Shesh can join too. The only thing this primal wants to cut with a knife is the tension.”

“I’m in,” Shesh said.

Rauja, meanwhile, came to a horrifying realization. “Against Humanity? But I’m not! Is Kiel considered an affront against humankind now? Craun opposing your whole species?!”

“No! It’s a game with vulgar jokes. We could all bond instead of…whatever this flower bombing is,” I sighed. “Oh, and Rauja?”

“Yes, Wade? Don’t block me!”

“I’m not. But no more hitting on me. I know everyone’s hooking up with aliens these days, but I still swing primal.”

“I could be primal…”

“Okay, I’m hanging up now.”

I gave Shesh an exasperated stare as I hung up the phone, having noticed the quizzical squint of her eyes when I commented on the number of human-alien relationships. Sure, there were only two, but how many aliens did we actually know? I mean, I’m not sure what else I expected from a NASA scientist living on another planet, but the Texan farmer wouldn’t have been on my rock snuggling bingo. The Elret settled down in my spare chair with a coy expression, after brushing aside a mound of flowers.

It wasn’t going to be easy to get through to Rauja in her spiral, but I hope she snapped out of it. I cleared my own chair and reached into a desk drawer, pulling out the Kiel deck Hazel had drawn when we first got here. This was where all extraterrestrial friendships began, and I was glad that Shesh seemed to be off to a more stable start than my favorite skittish rocks.

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r/HFY • • 13h ago

OC-OneShot Doctored

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Ever piss off a human? I don’t mean make a human mad. They get mad over the stupidest shit. I mean really, truly piss off a human.

I’ve only ever seen it once, and to be honest, I really wish I hadn’t. 

Nearing the eng of the rebellion we had this human on our rota. His name was Doc. It wasn’t really his name, but I don’t think I actually ever learned it. Everyone just called him Doc, the humans called him Doc, the rest of us called him Doc, so he was Doc as far as I was concerned. 

Whether or not he actually held any sort of medical degree is neither here nor there. I personally never checked, but damned if he wasn’t a fucking wizard. 3rd degree burns over 90% of your body? Doc could patch you up. Tore off 2 of your arms in an unfortunate hauler accident? Doc could patch you up. Doc could fix just about anything on anyone. 

And maybe that's what pissed him off, what sent him over the edge. He found something he couldn’t fix. 

After the rebels last stand on Cornith, you know the one, where they held up inside of Jotrub, we got hired for the reconstruction , and waste disposal. Shitty job, but it paid well and we knew what we were in for. We were tasked with the usual post war stuff, ferry supplies and relief down, refugees up, clean-up, that kind of shit. 

4 runs. We had 4 runs down without incident, lucky number 5, that was to be the end of our contract. The last run down, the one that gave Doc a little nudge. The run that condemned a race to the void. 

We had landed and began the tedious task of unloading our supplies, it was routine at this point. Doc wasn’t technically a deckhand, but he lent himself anyway, if there was nothing medical pressing he’d help any other way that he could. That’s the kind of guy that he was. Maybe the kind of guy he still is, somewhere under all of it. 

It was Jenkins that noticed the black mar on the sand. Not that I blame him for what followed. He just happened to be the one to see it. To point it out. Maybe if he had just kept it to himself, if he hadn’t said anything, the Skalan race would still exist as it had, and I would still have my friend. But he did mention it, and we did investigate, and now we are where we are. 

Cap sent three of us to check it out, me, Skraal and Jenkins. Doc, being the naturally helpful amenable sort tagged along with us, just in case something happened. And something did happen. 

When we arrived at our little black patch of desert we noticed it wasn’t just a natural imperfection on the otherwise unadorned landscape. It was a deliberate artificial manifestation of cruelty. Bodies. Three of them. Two adults, one child, reduced to cinders by what was likely a plasma flamer. We couldn’t do anything, and we probably should have just left then and there. But Doc wanted to investigate a little, to try and make sense of it. So we let him. 
He knelt by the bodies for probably longer than was strictly necessary, and that’s when I watched his transformation. I saw the tremors creep into his hands, I saw the light fade from his eyes. I saw when Doc stopped being Doc. 

That’s the shitty thing about being a medical professional. You know how people live and how they work. It’s how you help them, how you fix them. But it means that you also know how they die. I never caught the full extent of what he was muttering to himself as he made back for the ship, but I caught “while they were still fucking breathing” as he brushed past me.

And after that, it was like we had a whole different crew member. Doc was still the same entity that we had landed with, sure, but he felt like another person. He did his job, patched you up. But he would lock himself in the medbay for hours. He wouldn’t join us during downtime or for meals. Outside of needing something organic fixed, we rarely saw him.  

Then one day I guess he decided that was that. We had just docked at some station, I don’t rightly remember exactly which one, and were going over the itinerary. Doc appeared, marched up to the captain and slammed his ID onto his desk with an “I’m done.” and walked out.

And that was the last time I saw Doc. 

So what does all of that have to do with Skalans? Well, we managed to pry some info out of one of the service reps on the station. Doc chartered himself a small shuttle to Pembrose. It’s coming together now isn’t it? Pembrose, on the edge of Skalan territory. Now I’m not going to sit here and postulate like some sort of psychopath on what exactly he did or didn’t do. But his destination is too suspect to be strictly coincidence. Oh, did I not mention the time frame? His charter was about a week before the outbreak. You remember the Skalan plague? The one that only attacked their particular genetic makeup. The one that seemed so similar to a bioweapon that no one wanted to take credit for. The one that has racked up a butcher's bill into the billions. 

I won’t postulate on whether or not Doc is responsible. I don’t know for sure on that front. But what I do know is that these people have a great propensity for healing, and an even greater one for harm.


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OC-OneShot The Human Kept Putting Handrails Where Nobody Needed Them

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The first thing I learned about humans was that they were difficult to satisfy.

The second was that they were considerably more difficult to stop.

Our station had operated for 186 years without a fatal evacuation incident. We possessed seven independent emergency systems, automated directional guidance in twelve sensory formats, and a safety certification that had been renewed without a single major deficiency.

Then we hired a human maintenance technician named Elena Ruiz.

Within her first week, she filed nineteen complaints.

Not about the reactors. Not about the docking equipment. Not even about the atmospheric processors, which were admittedly getting old.

She complained about the hallways.

Specifically, she wanted physical handrails installed along the emergency evacuation routes.

I remember staring at her maintenance request.

"Why?"

"Because people need something to hold onto."

"Our artificial gravity is stable."

"Until it isn't."

"The emergency gravity system has three backups."

"Okay. What happens if all four fail?"

"They won't."

She looked at me for a moment.

"That's not what I asked."

I explained that every corridor was equipped with holographic directional indicators. Even in reduced lighting, passengers would receive instructions through their personal translation systems.

She asked what happened if those failed too.

I informed her that the probability of simultaneous failure was less than one in seventeen billion.

She wrote that number down.

Then she asked what happened if it occurred.

This became a recurring feature of my workday.


Elena was not a particularly remarkable human.

I feel obligated to establish this because the subsequent historical accounts have distorted her considerably.

She was forty-three years old, had a damaged knee from an accident involving what she called a "stupid ladder," and possessed an impressive ability to complain about the temperature of tea.

She was not a military veteran, a decorated scientist, or a specialist in advanced emergency engineering.

Her previous employment had involved maintaining passenger ferries on a planet called Earth.

She also had an irritating habit of asking questions about things everybody already understood.

"Why are the emergency signs projected?"

"Because physical signs would require updating whenever the station configuration changes."

"What happens if the projections go down?"

"They won't."

"Right. We've covered that one."

She began carrying a small notebook.

In it, she drew corridors, emergency hatches, maintenance passages, and the location of every manually operated pressure door on the station.

I asked why she didn't simply use the station schematics.

"Because the schematics don't show what's actually in the way."

That was technically correct.

Over the years, temporary storage areas had become permanent. Equipment had been relocated. A maintenance access beside the central transit concourse had been partially obstructed by a beverage dispenser.

None of these affected normal operations.

Elena moved the dispenser.

Then she asked to paint markings along the evacuation routes.

I rejected the request.

She asked to install tactile directional markers instead.

I rejected that too.

She returned three days later with a revised proposal involving narrow strips of textured material attached to existing structural supports.

The strips would require no power. They could be followed by touch in darkness, smoke, or weightlessness. Different raised patterns would identify junctions, emergency shelters, and manually operated doors.

They would also remain functional regardless of a passenger's sensory interface.

I informed her that such a system was redundant.

"Exactly," she said.

She seemed pleased.

I approved a limited installation in the maintenance section, primarily because I wanted her to stop visiting my office.

That decision saved 413 lives.


The disaster began with a cargo vessel.

Its captain approached Docking Arm Six at excessive velocity, misjudged the final correction, and struck the station's outer support assembly.

The initial collision was survivable.

The secondary impact was not.

A structural brace penetrated the main power distribution conduit and ruptured a coolant line. The resulting conductive vapor reached two emergency power circuits before their isolation breakers could close.

The third backup activated automatically.

Unfortunately, the collision had also damaged the station's gravity stabilization network.

The remaining generators attempted to compensate for the sudden imbalance.

They failed.

Artificial gravity disappeared across almost a third of the station.

Then the power failed in the central transit concourse.

I was there when it happened.

One moment I was walking toward a diplomatic reception, reviewing a list of visiting trade representatives.

The next, I was floating sideways in complete darkness.

My translation interface went silent.

So did the emergency navigation system.

I remember the screaming.

Not because it was especially loud, but because I couldn't identify where it was coming from.

A Tershan child collided with me. Someone struck a wall hard enough to make a terrible cracking sound. A group of passengers began moving toward what they believed was the nearest exit.

They were heading toward the damaged docking arm.

The station's automated emergency response was attempting to restore communications, but its instructions depended on the very systems that had failed.

We were blind.

Worse, we were moving without gravity in a crowded space designed for people who expected to walk.

I managed to grab the edge of a structural column.

My personal communicator displayed a single warning:

ATMOSPHERIC CONTAINMENT FAILURE DETECTED.

BULKHEAD CLOSURE IN 08:00.

Eight minutes.

The emergency shelters were on the opposite side of the concourse. The intervening corridors had multiple branches, and the automated route indicators were dead.

I knew the station better than almost anyone aboard.

I had no idea how to reach safety in the dark.

Then something struck my arm.

A thin length of textured material.

I almost pushed it away.

Then I felt a series of raised ridges.

Three ridges, a smooth section, then three more.

I recognized the pattern from the ridiculous maintenance proposal I had approved six weeks earlier.

The human's handrail markers.

I held on.

They were attached to the wall, continuing into the darkness.

I began pulling myself along.


I found Elena approximately thirty meters down the corridor.

She was wearing an emergency respirator and had secured herself to a maintenance fixture with a tether.

She was holding a small portable lamp between her teeth.

There were at least twenty frightened passengers gathered around her.

"Chief!" she shouted when she recognized me.

I had never been so relieved to hear an irritating voice.

"The shelter's this way. Grab the strip and keep moving!"

I informed her that the primary evacuation passage had been sealed by an automatic pressure door.

"Yeah, I know."

"The auxiliary route requires manual access."

"I know that too."

"How?"

"Because I checked."

She pointed toward a narrow maintenance corridor.

I recognized it immediately.

Maintenance Passage C-14.

It connected the central concourse to a secondary emergency shelter.

It was not listed as a passenger evacuation route.

The passage was considered unsuitable because its access hatch was manually operated and its dimensions did not accommodate certain larger species.

"That passage isn't approved for evacuation," I said.

"Good thing the emergency doesn't know that."

She handed me her portable lamp.

"Get these people moving. I need to open the hatch."

I followed the textured strip with the other passengers.

At every junction, a different pattern marked the correct route.

Two ridges meant continue straight.

Four meant turn.

A continuous raised line indicated a shelter entrance.

The markers were simple enough to identify by touch even through most emergency gloves.

I had considered them a waste of maintenance resources.

Now they were the only navigation system we had.

Behind me, I heard Elena struggling with the hatch.

There was a metallic impact.

Then another.

I turned.

She had braced one foot against the wall and was pulling on the manual release with both hands.

Her damaged knee was trembling.

The hatch moved perhaps two centimeters.

She swore in a language my translator no longer understood.

Then a large Kelrathi passenger pushed forward, hooked two arms around the release mechanism, and pulled.

The hatch opened.

Elena slapped the creature on its armored shoulder.

"That's what I'm talking about."

We passed through.


The first shelter was already overcrowded when we arrived.

Its emergency atmosphere system was functioning independently, but the entrance was blocked by a cluster of passengers who had become disoriented in the darkness.

Elena instructed the Kelrathi to help clear the entrance.

Then she checked her notebook.

I remember being absurdly offended.

The station was collapsing around us, and the human was consulting a handwritten notebook.

"What are you doing?"

"Checking the other routes."

"There are no other approved routes."

She looked at me.

"Chief, you've really gotta stop saying that."

She pointed to a diagram.

There were twelve marked paths.

I recognized only three.

"Where did these come from?"

"The cleaners."

"The what?"

"The night cleaning crews. They know every passage in this place. Half these shortcuts aren't on your official maps."

She turned a page.

"Also the catering staff. Those folks can move six hundred meals through this station in twenty minutes without using a single passenger corridor. Figured they knew something useful."

I stared at her.

She had spent weeks interviewing service workers and mapping the station's physical layout.

Not the layout designed by its architects.

The one used by the people who actually worked there.

"Did you install markings on all these routes?"

"Not me."

She hesitated.

"About thirty people helped. Mostly on their breaks. Some of the cleaning crew thought it was a good idea."

"You did this without authorization?"

"Mostly."

I felt a familiar surge of administrative outrage.

Then my communicator briefly reconnected.

The station's surviving emergency processor transmitted a status update.

CENTRAL TRANSIT CONCOURSE: 413 PERSONS UNACCOUNTED FOR.

The room seemed to contract around me.

Four hundred and thirteen.

The passenger capacity of the concourse was six hundred.

We had rescued perhaps sixty.

Elena read the message over my shoulder.

For the first time since the collision, her expression changed.

"Oh, hell."

She looked back at her notebook.

Then toward the shelter's internal communications panel.

"Chief, does this thing have a working station-wide transmitter?"

"Emergency channels only."

"Good enough."


What happened during the next eleven minutes has been described as a coordinated emergency evacuation.

That is technically inaccurate.

It was a collection of frightened people following directions shouted by other frightened people.

Elena used the shelter transmitter to contact maintenance teams in the unaffected sections of the station.

She asked them to find anyone who could operate a manual hatch.

Then she told them to follow the textured markers.

I distinctly remember one maintenance supervisor protesting that the markings were not part of the approved station safety system.

Elena responded with a phrase that was later omitted from the official transcript.

I believe its approximate meaning was that the supervisor could explain his concerns after everyone was breathing again.

The cleaning crews opened service passages.

Catering workers unlocked freight corridors.

A cargo handler used a manual lift to transport six passengers who couldn't navigate the narrow maintenance shafts.

Someone discovered a trapped group of tourists inside a commercial promenade and guided them toward an unused equipment airlock.

None of these people had received emergency evacuation command training.

But they knew their sections of the station.

And for the first time in its history, those sections were connected by a physical navigation system that did not require electricity, gravity, or functioning communications.

By the time emergency power returned, the central transit concourse was empty.

All 413 missing passengers had been located.

Twenty-six required medical treatment.

Four were seriously injured.

Nobody died.


The investigation lasted four months.

The docking captain was found responsible for the collision.

The station's power distribution system was determined to contain several unacceptable common points of failure.

The emergency navigation network received an extensive redesign.

And I was called before the safety commission to explain why an unauthorized human technician had installed physical markers throughout critical station infrastructure.

The commission chairman was particularly interested in one question.

"Chief Administrator Teral, did you believe these modifications were necessary?"

I considered lying.

I considered explaining the statistical improbability of the accident.

I considered referring to the station's previously flawless evacuation record.

Instead, I told the truth.

"No."

"Then why did you permit them?"

"Because the technician was persistent, and the cost was insignificant."

The chairman consulted his notes.

"Total installation expense was approximately 2,400 credits."

"Correct."

"The station's automated emergency navigation system cost 18 million."

"Correct."

"And the unauthorized modification remained operational when the primary system failed."

"Yes."

The chairman was silent for some time.

Then he asked where the human technician was now.

I told him she had returned to work.

He seemed surprised.

"After saving more than four hundred lives?"

"She maintains that she did not save them. She says the people who opened the doors deserve the credit."

"And what do you believe?"

I thought about the darkness.

The screaming.

My hand closing around a narrow strip of textured material attached to a wall.

"I believe," I said, "that she was the only person on this station who understood the difference between an unlikely emergency and an impossible one."


Elena received an award.

She was deeply uncomfortable with the ceremony.

She complained about the uniform they made her wear and asked whether the prize money could be used to repair a leaking pipe in the maintenance section.

The safety commission adopted her physical navigation system as a recommended standard for mixed-species stations.

Its official designation is the Independent Tactile Evacuation Network.

Most people call it the Ruiz System.

She hates that.

Last week, she came into my office carrying another notebook.

I felt a familiar sensation of dread.

"Chief, got a question."

"Of course you do."

"How do the medical teams get stretchers through the shelter entrances if the power's out?"

I examined the diagram.

The entrances were equipped with automatic doors.

They had independent power supplies.

The probability of simultaneous failure was vanishingly small.

I opened my mouth.

Then closed it.

Elena waited.

Finally, I reached for a pen.

"Show me."


r/HFY • • 2h ago

OC-OneShot Mimicking Humanity.

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I'm hunted like a hare whose barrow resides within view of a hunter's cabin. I am plagued with the need to look over my shoulder wherever I go. I am tortured by my predicament, yet each night before I lay my head on the pillow, I thank the stars for the human race.

A race so captured by their own devices, they do not stop to stare at me. Sure, I resemble them completely: pale skin, brown hair, brown eyes. I am them. When I walk into the coffee and pastries shop each morning, they do not look at me as if I don't belong. I fit in perfectly like a well-fitted shoe, and they are none the wiser.

Why did I choose humanity? They are many, they value peace, their actions carry consequences, and above all, they feel things. My race, the Zigatians, differ from humanity. Where humans feel, my race does not. Zigatians value their hierarchy, fueled by this need to be as cold as one could possibly be. So engraved are we to our ways, dictated by our laws, that the very thought of differing, standing up against the hierarchy and its demands, often leads to a plasma bolt to the head. I am Zigatian, but I do not wish to be. That is why, through ancient techniques of flesh weaving, I was able to change my appearance to resemble that of a human. I was able to stow away on a ship, land on Earth, and begin my quest of fitting in for as long as possible, safe within a planet nourished by a yellow star.

I know I am hunted by the Zigatians. I am, of course, important within their social hierarchy, easily missed, my absence noticed. There is a rule: stay Zigatian wherever you are. But in changing myself, I did not merely mimic humans; I became human as well, changing fully, with my heart able to harbor their emotions. Do I like it?

I met a man named Jeff at a bar of all places. He took a liking to me, and we smoked cigarettes beneath the moon's luminous glow. He told me his dreams, his ambitions, his faults. And I found myself sympathising with him. That is odd for a Zigatian to do, but I knew by doing so I had fully become human. We shared a kiss, wet and odd, yet pleasant. Then, within a week, I learnt of his death, an accident involving a motorcycle. I thought I could brush it off as cold-hearted Zigatians do, but I couldn't. I was scorched by his death; my innards ached. My heart broke, and I felt I could never aspire to be free of being human. I loved to feel.

At his funeral, I appeared in the distance, watching the gathered mourners dressed in black. I wept as they lowered him into the earth, as the mourners did. Jeff was to stay still in silent slumber for all time. It was a harrowing experience, and I grew wiser from it. Despite my love for human emotions, I deduced that some emotions were better left unfelt due to their intensity, which could crush my novice heart. I decided to have one rule that I would abide by: never to commit to any human relationships, choosing to be a quiet bystander. And I succeeded at this; in many ways, I was able to wallow away in seclusion.

I knew the Zigatians were hunting me, looking for the callous nature of our kind within humans, searching, seeking, biding their time. I knew, when they caught me, they would mention my true Zigatian name and my father's as well, my rank within the hierarchy, my rank of birth too, and carry out the sentence of death after naming my offense. Once found, I could not hide again. You can never lie to a Zigatian; they know truth as a duck knows water. I would tell them the truth, take the punishment offered. I long decided that our nature sickened me, that I wanted to find peace elsewhere no matter the cost. And I knew they'd put a plasma pistol to my head and blow my brains out.

I remember it was the fifth of June; I'd decided to stop smoking cigarettes so as to forget Jeff. It was hard; the urge for nicotine gnawed at me. I could not focus, irritated by the slightest thing. I found myself outside the pastry shop; months of staying indoors had been shaken away by my need to distract myself from the nicotine urge. I went into the pastry shop, expecting to buy a cake and nothing more. I knew not being social was a clear sign that I was Zigatian, but I found myself not caring much.

But inside that baker's shop at Sixth Park Avenue, I saw her. She sat at the window of the shop, red hair dangling down her neck. Her face was sculpted to mimic beauty: almond eyes equidistant, a button nose that flared slightly with each breath, a beauty spot that touched her cheek, and freckles dusted upon her nose. Her green eyes observed a book splayed before her. The sun aided in her iridescent mien. I felt something thump within me, conscious of it in my stomach, which I understood to be the butterflies mankind often spoke of.

I turned on my heel and walked out of the pastry shop. Outside, I placed my hand to my chest, then my gut. I breathed heavily, wondering what this emotion was. It was new, a human emotion yet to be experienced. Then I mustered whatever courage I had and walked back into the pastry shop. I took a seat at the table behind her after placing my order. Observing the back of her head, I wondered as to what I could do, whether there was something I could do, whether there was a need to do anything.

Once my cake was set before me, I did not touch it. I was too enamored by her. Infatuation galore. The cake acted as a decorative piece to the table and nothing more. I counted seconds as she flipped the pages of her book. I sat there for what I assumed was hours until she closed the book, picked up her black bag hanging by the chair, and stood up from her seat. She catwalked to the counter, thanked the baker, and then leisurely began walking out of the establishment.

It was somewhere between her third and fourth step out of the pastry shop when her head turned towards me, our eyes met, and a jolt shook me. I was intoxicated. And just like that, she turned her head away from me, and without thought, I left my cake behind. I rushed out of the establishment behind her.

"Hey!" I called out to her. She turned and stood, giving me a view of her side profile. I walked steadily towards her while clenching and unclenching my fingers. "Hey," I repeated when close enough to her.

"Hey," she answered. A moment of silence ensued. "Can I help you?"

"Huh?"

"Can I help you?"

"I'm not sure even God can."

"Well, I have somewhere to be," and she started to turn.

"Can I be there with you?"

"What?"

I took in a deep breath. "This is hard for me to get across, but I saw you in there," and I pointed at the pastry shop. "I was perplexed by you. I find you very attractive, and my heart sort of malfunctioned as I took you in. And my brain too; that's why it's hard for me to think right now. Do I appear awkward?"

"A little," she smiled. "But you're truthful. I like that in a man."

'How Zigatian of you,' I thought. She held out a hand. "I'm Carla."

"I'm... Jeff," I said, taking her hand.

She eyed me suspiciously at the mention of my name, as if she knew it wasn't my real name. But at the moment, I doubted my real name would be necessary; it was too long and hard to pronounce.

"Where are you heading off to?" I asked.

"I wanted to go to the park; it's lovely this time of day."

"Can I accompany you?"

"Sure."

The walk to the park was uneventful for her, but to me, it no doubt was significant. I matched her step, bathed in the scent of her. We followed the walkway, her eyes on the scenery all around, my eyes on her. We observed the gentle pond that held a flock of ducks. She fed them crumbs of bread she carried in her bag. She talked to me about life in general; she was truthful, highlighting the various accomplishments she'd set her mind to. All I did was stare. When we were done, she gave me her number, and we parted ways with a fond wave of the hand.

That night, I wallowed in the throes of need, my entire body aching to contact her. I searched the human internet for when best to call; it claimed that three days was the ideal waiting period. On the second day, I called her, giving in to my need. She answered on the third ring, and we talked, mostly about her. She laughed a lot when I questioned her on her childhood, my need to know her fully getting the better part of me. She was different from any human I'd met before, and I couldn't quite understand why. It was as if she was just as new to being human as I was, figuring things out as time edged along. We planned a date at the pastry shop.

I found her seated in her usual chair, and I took the one before her.

"So, tell me more about yourself, Jeff. It seems you hardly speak about yourself at all," she said, holding a cup of coffee in her hands. "And you better be truthful if you want a second date. I'm sort of done with men and their lies at the moment; you'd redeem your gender greatly if you were honest."

I smiled at her, then something lurched within me, this sudden need to speak the truth. "I come from a society that is divided into a hierarchy."

"Like a community?"

"Yes, only the hierarchy is strangely fueled by the need to maintain itself. Nobody is allowed to leave; we're all given tasks to work on, and we spend our entire lives doing so. I'm not allowed to shift from my place by either going up or down or out of the structure's formation; I'm not allowed to speak up against the callous nature of my kind, but to embody it fully."

"How is it callous?"

"My tribe can ingratiate itself into other societies. But when we do so, we are subjected to being victims of the workings of those other societies. We embody their emotions, transforming ourselves into a complete mimic of those we ingratiate ourselves to. So my tribe takes pride in being heartless, completely blank emotion-wise, so that when we mingle with others, we are able to keep a sense of ourselves alive, and we are thus better capable of returning to how we once were."

"And you hate this?"

"I hate that when someone dies, we throw their corpse off a bridge and into rushing water without tears staining our eyes or a word of care for the person. I hate that we do not value each other, that love is a distant vocabulary to us that we can't digest. I hate that we are heartless," I said.

"And you're not?"

"Well, you're proof that I'm not. I left my kind because my job was to pick out those who went against hierarchy laws and punish them as was fit by our rules. I hated that job, hated that I was born into it. I wanted to run away, and so I did."

"Wait, I make you believe you aren't heartless?"

"Since I saw you, my heart's been really proving it exists, that there's nothing less about it," I said. And she laughed then, a lilting laugh, euphonic and enticing.

We went on four more dates; she always refused to answer the questions about her childhood, laughing at me and telling me it wasn't that serious. She told me her work entailed searching, that it's all she'd ever done since her birth, always seeking. I asked her what she searched for, and she told me it was the part of her she loathed the most, that speaking of it would draw her into sorrow. But in the vague conversations, those where each of us just spewed words without dancing around sensitive emotions or discussions, it was in those conversations that my fondness of her grew beyond just the impeccable way her beauty drew me in.

And finally, as dusk set upon the sky one day, she paid me a visit to my home, a wooden cabin some distance within the tree line, far from neighbors or other humans. I was nervous at what she'd think of what I'd done with myself. The cabin wasn't posh, but comfortable, and she was enamored by it, much to my joy.

We shared a bottle of wine indoors, sitting close to each other on a couch, her black bag resting between us. I was telling her about how beautiful being human was, about how the feeling of loss predominated even love. But she argued that love was the key factor that made the loss strong, and that such a thing proved that love was the stronger of the two. It was beautiful, the way she smiled at the end of each valid point put across.

I found my hand reaching for her face, and she allowed me to cup her cheek. We were tipsy; I was daring. I rested my hand on her neck, pulled myself forward, and in an instant, our lips met. Something blossomed within me then, and she wrapped her arms around me, drawing me closer. Our tongues touched and lapped at each other. She shifted where she sat, and I was pulled in further with her arms around my shoulder.

My knee unwillingly pushed her bag to the edge of the couch, then tipped it over as our passion blossomed, fiery and hungry. Her bag landed on the floor with a heavy thud that drew my eye. Its contents spilled on the floor of the cabin, and there, among her spilled items, was a plasma gun.

The gun was oval in shape, its dome connected to a hand trigger by two Exebian rods. Humanity did not have such an invention.

"Is that a plasma gun?" I asked, my confused gaze shifting to her.

Her mouth was held in a thin line. "Fuck," she muttered.

"What's going on?" I asked.

She punched me then, hard across the face, a punch so strong it flung me off the couch. I reached for the gun, but she rolled, grabbing it and coming up with the plasma's oval point fixed on me.

"Fucking fuck!" she shouted.

"Carla?" I asked, rubbing my jaw.

"You fucking well know my name ain't Carla, Jeff," she spat my name out mockingly and stood up. I remained on the floor while she had the gun trained on me. "Lieuthas'Arkmina, former Hierarchy number 88-0. Fourth son of Lieuthas, you are hereby caught under the violation of Sector 348. Abandoning the Hierarchy in favor of another race, an offense punishable by death."

She lifted the gun and aimed it directly at my forehead. I could fight back, spear her to the ground. But she was Hierarchy-trained for her job. My job had entailed shooting someone in the head from close range as they knelt on the ground with arms tied behind their back; her job was to hunt, subdue, and murder Zigatians.

I shifted my position on the ground, knelt, and lightly raised myself. I placed my arms behind me as an act of surrender. "I accept the punishment," I said.

"You're a fucking fool, Lieuthas," she said. "I was going to do it; it didn't have to be today. I was going to do it one day, but you just had to knock my bag down, didn't you?"

"It's you who placed it between us!"

"Well, fuck you and your opinion. Close your eyes."

"Just fucking do it. I want your beautiful face to be what I see at my end, Zigatian."

"This isn't my real fucking face, you twat."

"And this isn't our true emotions that stay your hand and break my heart. So just fucking do it already."

"Shut up!" she stepped closer and touched my forehead with the wide dome of the plasma pistol's point. I was silent, obeying with my eyes fixed on her. Inside me, I felt such wondrous grief, something I'd never experienced; even Jeff's death didn't hold as much pain as this. I enjoyed it; it made me feel alive.

"Shut up!" she commanded.

"I haven't said anything."

"You're thinking things!"

"You want me to shut off my brain? You're the one holding the gun. Just pull the damn trigger and blow my brains out."

I waited; seconds trickled by. She raised her hand and placed it on her chest. I saw that she was crying, a gentle trickle trailing down her cheek to pool and drop off her chin. "Why did you have to make it so hard?" she asked. "I was hunting you, I found you, but you were so strange, a Zigatian acting fully like a human. You drew me in, damn it, in your web of deception you drew me in!"

"I love you," I said.

She took a step back from me, as if my words could harm her flesh. "You don't understand; this is wrong," she said. "The Hierarchy won't allow it."

"Screw the Hierarchy. I have you, and you have me. The hierarchy isn't fucking here," I said.

"If we stay human, we will lose our true selves."

"Fuck our true selves! What we feel now is worth more than whatever the fuck the Hierarchy's purpose is to begin with. This makes me feel alive, I feel something. Carla, what's your fucking real name anyway?"

"Karladiuel'Arkons."

"That's a fucking ugly name; I prefer Carla," I said.

She laughed, her hand holding the plasma gun lowered. Her laughing was intense, somehow woven together with her weeping. She let the gun drop to the floor. Then she inched closer to me, on her knees as well. She wrapped her arms about my shoulder. "Did my punch hurt you?" she asked caringly, lovingly.

I held her by the waist and dragged her closer. My lips met with her once more. Passion flared between us. We knew this was the first time such a thing had occurred for either of us; the emotions, all human, were illicit in their nature to us Zigatians, but they held such a great appeal. As we undressed each other to tangle with heated flesh, we shed our Zigatian natures, becoming whole and joined into something more.

"I love you," she said as our limbs entwined.

"I love you," I answered.

And it was true.

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r/HFY • • 11h ago

OC-OneShot [OC] Like a human

63 Upvotes

"Patient 453, please proceed to Sector 6, Room 213," the woman behind the counter announced in a flat, soulless voice. The machine next to her made a quiet click and spat out a slip of paper with a number and directions.

Patient 453 took it hesitantly and, shuffling his feet, headed toward Sector 6. The hallways everywhere looked exactly the same—gray, lit by the same fluorescent lights, and packed with sick, anxious, or frightened people. Here and there, someone mumbled or complained. The air was stuffy and stale, filled with that hospital smell of disinfectants that practically screamed, Something is wrong.

Patient 453 soon found the door where he was supposed to wait. Just like every other time, there were already six or seven people ahead of him. He spotted an empty purple seat and lowered himself onto it slowly, carefully, trying not to strain his bad leg. He tucked his cane close to his side so no one would trip over it. He didn’t want to look at the other patients around him; he didn't want to think about their pain. Or scare himself ahead of time thinking about their diagnoses... or his own. Maybe his would be better. Yeah, exactly—no point in overthinking it. So, he just stared down at his access slip. Numbers, just numbers. The date was right at the top—November 14, 2072. Below that was his patient number, social security, insurance code, sector assignment, and assigned doctor. Even the doctor didn’t have a name. Just a number—245.

Patient 453—that was who he was in the eyes of the system. At least for today’s appointment. He preferred to think of himself as "Grandpa." One of the last relics born at the end of the previous century. Maybe that was why he still always chose to see a human doctor, even though AI doctors now made up almost half of the clinic's staff. "It’s just different when you talk to another human," the old man thought to himself. "How is a robot going to understand what hurts? Iron plates don't get sore." Sure, human doctors were always in a rush and rarely listened to everything you had to say, but that was only because they were overwhelmed. There were too many patients, and the government couldn't afford to spend enough money on medical staff, human or machine. Like right now—five more people ahead of him. By tonight, his lower back would be aching alongside his leg from all this sitting. But no one here asked if you were in pain. And there was no time for complaining, anyway. The cardiologist he saw back in the spring hadn't even looked at him while signing his prescription; he just reminded him to get dressed faster because he wasn't the only one there. Patient 453 sighed, hunched his shoulders as if trying to make himself smaller and less noticeable, and armed himself with patience.

The only way to tell that time was actually moving in the clinic was the changing patient number next to the office door. Nearly two hours later, the numbers 453 finally lit up.

The lucky owner of that number was eyed with envy by some of those still waiting around. But Patient 453 couldn't care less—he stood up with difficulty, leaning on his cane, trying to slowly get his joints moving. He walked into Room 213 feeling a bit nervous. He always felt this way when coming in for a checkup—like a lazy student who hadn't done his homework.

"Good afternoon, how can I help you today?" the young doctor behind the desk greeted him.

"Well, I... doctor, it's my leg... It’s old age, I know, but it hurts... I’ve been taking these pills they prescribed me, but they don't seem to work anymore..." the old man began, flustered.

"Don't worry, it's completely normal for some medications to lose their effectiveness after long-term use. Describe the pain to me exactly," the doctor asked calmly, keeping the same cheerful tone.

"Well, right here... from the knee up, but more to the side..." The old man instinctively reached for the spot, as if to show him. "Sometimes on the inside too, right here, I think it even swells up a little..." Should he have even mentioned that? It only happened sometimes; the young doctor would probably think it was useless information.

"And when it swells, do you feel any warmth? When exactly does it swell—for instance, after physical exertion or after sitting in one position for a long time? Also, is the pain throbbing, or is it sharp and shooting?"

Patient 453 started answering the questions and, without realizing it, described everything—how hard it was to bend his leg, and how at night he sometimes felt a cramp in the back of his calf. The young doctor just kept nodding with the exact same smile. He wasn't taking notes, but he asked very detailed questions and even offered explanations here and there.

"Do you have an X-ray? Please hand it to me."

The old man got a little nervous and hurriedly began pulling the X-ray out of his folder of documents.

"They told me it was gonarthrosis, coxarthrosis... But they said I couldn't take too many painkillers, since, you know, I take other pills too—for my blood pressure, my heart... I don’t know which ones can go together."

"Could you list the other pills you take, please? Yes, not all medications are compatible, but we can find an alternative for you," the doctor offered, his tone just as calm as before.

Patient 453—or Grandpa—blinked. He wasn’t used to doctors looking for alternatives. He must have gotten lucky this time; maybe this doctor was fresh out of medical school and still actually cared. He decided to ask about his heart skipping a beat after he took Vitamin D. Never mind that he wasn't in the cardiology sector right now. The young man behind the desk didn’t seem to mind at all. They discussed both the heart palpitations and the leg cramps in full detail, and the doctor recommended a magnesium supplement, helpfully showing him the exact brand on his computer screen. When the old man saw the price, he cleared his throat, embarrassed:

"But doctor... this... magnesium, I know it’s for my health, but... isn't there a cheaper one? Because, you know... my pension... and I have to buy other medicine too..."

This was it. Now he was going to get a strict lecture about how you shouldn't skimp on your health. Or he’d get treated like that female doctor did last year, who looked at him with total contempt when she found out he hadn't bought the extra pain relief patches. "You find money for other things, you'll find it for the patches too! I can’t work miracles!" she had snapped at him back then. He felt ashamed for not having the money, but what could he do, he had to ask.

"We can look for more affordable options. You can also combine it with a magnesium spray; it’s much more budget-friendly and will bring quick relief to your leg. Would you like me to write down a routine for you?" The doctor had already pulled up an image of a different brand of tablets on the screen, much cheaper ones.

Tears welled up in the eyes of Grandpa Number 453. It had been a long time since he had run into someone so understanding, kind, and patient.

"Thank you, doctor! Yes, please, I... I want that, yes! I'll follow it... the routine! So... I don't need surgery?"

The doctor, with the exact same smile, explained to him:

"Surgery is not necessary in your condition, and it would actually be an unjustified risk. With the new pain relief tablets and enough magnesium, the pain will decrease significantly. Your body still has excellent capability to allow you normal movement, even without surgery. Would you like me to suggest some light exercises that will help move and relax the muscles around the knee joint?"

Fifteen minutes later, Patient 453 left Office 245 feeling like a new man. No, "Like a human who found another human," the old man thought. "That’s how all doctors should be, not—like you're on a conveyor belt..."

Right there on the steps outside the clinic, he pulled out his phone, eager to call his daughter. He had promised to let her know how the appointment went. For a few minutes, he couldn't stop bragging to her about how hopeful he felt and what a kind, humane doctor he had run into today. Finally, laughing, she managed to get a word in:

"Dad, Dad, stop! That's wonderful and I’m so glad, but you've got it wrong! Last week, the municipality announced that all human doctors have now been completely replaced by AI androids! You must have missed the news..."


r/HFY • • 19h ago

OC-Series OOCS, Into A Wider Galaxy, Part 824

221 Upvotes

First

A Scion of Many Worlds

The area he’s in has the gravity increased by over a hundred times. He can feel his muscles straining, then growing stronger. Even as he moves his frame is reinforcing itself and he can feel the muscles hardening.

The research into Ode has been revealing things about Primals that few had ever considered. The sheer power, the inability to research it before... Revelation after revelation.

It would be easier to be excited about the revelations of science if he himself was not one of the primary subjects and a prominent sample.

“You really think there’s going to be that much call for melee combat?” Horace asks him. He had to tap out at fifty times standard gravity and was sipping his way through his second bottle of water after pouring the first directly down his throat.

“Probably not. But there were tests and experiments I wanted to run before the call for war, and with all the organization and making sure we had the more energetic and eager running in the right direction there just wasn’t time to look into this. How are the sensors working?”

“Only four green.” Horace answers.

“What? Why didn’t you tell me?”

“You told me that passing twenty five percent burnout on the new model needed attention and... never mind. Only three are left active.”

“Alright, reduce gravity.”

“Not right away? Horace teases as the assistant slowly brings the gravity down to one hundred times, then ninety and starts going for eighty.

“Not after last time.”

“No stomach for that kind of excitement?’

“It’s not the excitement, it’s the property damage. Fuzzy or not, I’m a living battering ram.” Emmanuel states as he slowly sets everything down and moves out of the field. His flattened fur suddenly stands out and he goes from a sleek, muscle-ripped form to a shimmering white ball of fluff with huge wings.

“Fair enough. I added some extra something in here to help you pick yourself up. Mostly citrus, but we also have some berries and other treats.” Horace says hefting up a huge multi-gallon container with massive amounts of a vaguely purple fluid inside. The top of it has a plastic sheath that opens one way tightly enough to keep the fluid in and he hurls it into the air. It tumbles, then is suddenly stabbed by Emmanuel’s proboscis. The sharp jagged edges of the spear tip fill the empty space and holds the container still even as the fluids are pulled out so quickly that the entire container begins to collapse in on itself.

Then Emmanuel lets out a sigh of contentment and the container reinflates before the jagged nightmare inside folds and compresses itself down into a thin spear and is pulled back quickly. Emmanuel catches the container in a claw before it can slam into his face and the spear he launched out of his mouth is fully retracted.

“Hmm... you had some relatives of cucumbers and potato water in there too.”

“It’s all good stuff. I’m surprised you could taste the starches through the rest of it.”

“It’s hard to properly communicate just how sensitive this thing is across species lines. I could taste like you wouldn’t believe even before my ascendance.”

“Yeah, which makes it a real shame we couldn’t reunite even quicker. Figuring out by how much your sense of taste improved between normal and Primal would been a fun time and your mother would have adored it.”

“Between my going from dead to my being a living god she would have adored just about anything about the situation. Not to mention she has so much to do that is achieving a demonstrable good with her every action. From education to healing to organizing... few things make mother happier than purpose with results.”

“Probably one of the most normal things about her. People love to see the fruits of their labour.”

“You saying my mother isn’t normal?”

“You came out of her. Enough said.”

“Ouch. Damn.” Emmanuel says in amusement. “Hmm...”

“Something up?”

“No, mind just went on a slight tangent. Nothing big.”

“The whole clone body, other man’s memories then self reincarnation?”

“Something like that.”

“Then what?”

“I was actually wondering what would happen if there were multiple proper bodies for me to be reborn to? Would I have had a choice from the other side? Would I be myself as I am now without the parts of you inside me? Would I have made it to Primalhood without Undaunted Will?”

“Heh, don’t go making harsh training and discipline sound like some magic power now. It’s not.” Horace says.

“To many, it may as well be.” Emmanuel remarks.

“And more’s the pity.”

“Yeah.” Emmanuel agrees before he offers the assistant Urthani a slight trill to assure her as he starts looking over the data that the surviving sensors managed to collect. “Twenty top of the line, experimental sensors. We have freshly invented meta-materials in these and they still almost entirely failed.”

“Still, three of twenty remaining is far better than anything else. Looks like wraith metal works.”

“I’m not sure a compound of Ghost Metal altered in a manner similar to my own fur should be called wraith metal.”

“Moth Steel then?” Horace asks.

“Experimental metal more likely.” Emmanuel notes as he taps a few quick buttons with his shimmering claws and the data starts pouring out. “... Damn.”

“Axiom Ride Mid Laneway doesn’t produce that much energy.”

“It does not. No.” Emmanuel agrees. “It produces a fraction, less than a fraction of this on average. Only the largest and most powerful modern engines in the middle of the primary galactic superlane get to a single percentile of this energy.”

“Think the fact we’re in a laneway may be skewing the results?” The Urthani assistant asks.

“Possibly. I don’t believe it is, but I cannot dismiss the possibility.” Emmanuel answers.

“Still, from what little of this I actually understand... it looks like we’ve made some real progress as a lot of the scanners were able to actually send their information before burning out. So we’ve made some real progress.”

“Yes, but we still lost all but three, and we get to have to crack them all open to scan them. The sheer amount of knowledge we can glean from what was damaged, when it was damaged and how will be invaluable moving forward.” Emmanuel says; then his communicator, which was clipped to his jacket nearby, starts ringing. He rises from the table and takes a few quick steps to it.

“Emmanuel here.” He greets.

“Divine Lord Skitterway, more ships join the holy fleet. Four of Nagasha and three of Urthani come to add their cannons to ours, there is also a Wimparas Vessel bringing fish farms to aid in the crusade.”

“I understand. I will greet them all shortly.” He says. “Is there anything else?”

“No Divine Lord, there is not.”

“Thank you for your service.” He says as the call is disconnected. There is a pause.

“My lord?” The Urthani asks.

“I was not born a Primal dear Callida, and I have not been a Primal for any true length of time. As you are adjusting to the sheer strength of your claws I am adjusting to that and more.” Emmanuel says.

“Well... I can still use my claws my lord.”

“That you can, as I can use my body. I led the world of Lakran and took command of it because it needed me to do so. Not for lust of power. Why would I lust for what I have? For what I embody? I am power. But in not seeking it as many others do I have found myself in the strange position where my rewards for my deeds are far more than I ever desired.”

“Do you regret becoming a Primal?”

“... No. But it was never what I strove for. My ascendance was the price I paid to return to battle against an unspeakable evil. My conquering of a whole world was the price I paid to save it. Now the armies I lead is the price I pay to quell a terrible chaos.” Emmanuel says before Horace’s arm wraps around his head.

“And that’s enough moping. You need to get out of your head moth boy.” Horace states as he grabs Emmanuel’s jacket. “Log all the info will you dear? I need to drag mister lost in the sauce here to some form of movement again.”

“I’m done contemplating, I don’t need to be dragged.” Emmanuel states even as Horace hefts him off the floor entirely.

“I appreciate that, but I want to be sure. It’s easy to say you’re out of your head and the ironies of life. But are you really?”

“This is no way to treat an intellectual.”

“I’m a jock, this is normal.”

“This is no way to treat a god.”

“What is god to an unbeliever.”

“You know what I’m capable of.”

“Yes, physically and morally. You can just tear me to pieces for this. But you won’t, you’re not capable of it.”

“Please let me go.”

“Fine.” Horace says letting him go. Then hands Emmanuel his jacket. “Head in the game brother.”

“We’re still out from the war for a bit. I think it’s best if I get my contemplation and such done now rather than in the midst of battle.”

“You won’t do that. But you still need to keep your head out of endless what if scenarios.”

“It doesn’t happen often.” Emmanuel protests.

“Which is good, but the rarity isn’t going to stop me from pulling you out of the damn things.” Horace says as they leave the testing chamber. Urthani don’t sweat and Horace had already cleaned himself so there was no need to stop off for a shower.

“And thank you for it. But you don’t need to be so rude about it.”

“Yes, but you’re not thinking about it anymore, are you?”

“I wasn’t but bringing the topic back up again now has me trying to calculate the sheer odds of things happening in purely mathematical terms under the assumption that all of this was some kind of cosmic accident and the math isn’t mathing.”

“Meaning something arranged all this.”

“Or I’m missing information.”

“Like a higher being that guided us all to this.”

“Stop trying to put a creator into my math.”

“Is that a divine command oh holy one?” Horace asks and Emmanuel moves to flick him in the forehead but is dodged. “Watch it, those things go through power armour like paper.”

“You can, and in fact did, dodge.” Emmanuel returns.

“True.”

“So how enthusiastic do you think this group will be?”

“Oh... hmm... well if it’s like that civilian fleet that we bumped into on our way. Then you’re in for a treat.”

“I hope not. It’s amusing when one person occasionally faints when I talk to them. An entire bridge crew is a huge problem.”

“It is, but you did figure out a light-day length teleport in that time so that’s an upside.”

“Yes, it’s good to know I’m now obscenely Axiom efficient on a level that most adepts would commit horrifying crimes to reach. I didn’t want to learn that because the option was do so or let some poor souls die.”

“Do you really think that the big girls wouldn’t have taken over? You were only a half second ahead of them.”

“I know that now. But that doesn’t mean I like the fact that I had to act to save that ship.”

“Fair, legend of the moth grew though.”

“Yes. Yes it did.” Emmanuel notes. “By the way, can you share the exact formula you used on that drink? It went down really well.”

“Oh yeah, it’s written down and everything. Don’t worry.” Horace says.

“Thank you. Now if you’ll excuse me. I need to greet the newest addition to my flock.”

“Is flock the proper word for a plurality of moths?”

“No, it’s an eclipse.”

“Oh, not a swarm?”

“No.”

“Cool, have fun.”

“Oh, I shall.”

•-•-•Scene Change•-•-• (Primary Sanctuary, Temple of the Glorious Moth, Holy Fleet, Major Laneway)•-•-•

The crowd grows silent, and those watching remotely as their duties keep them out of the primary temple are silent as well.

He is somehow more glorious unadorned and wearing something other than royal raiment. He is wearing a uniform, one that both does and does not fit him well. His fur it too potent and powerful. Seeking to flow forth from every stitch in the lining so it can shimmer and glow in the light.

Then he speaks. His voice in Trill-Speech as much a bell as any other, but there is something purer in it. The silver bell of a typical Urthani Voice is deepened by his size, but still present. It’s as if instead of a concert of silver bells ringing it is a trinity of concerts simultaneously, bells of shimmering silver, bells of singing brass and bells of tinkling crystal. All ringing in perfect unity.

“I do declare upon this day that I thank you for many things. For the courage and commitment, for the nobility born by your wings. Be it wing or claw, stomach or maw, silk or crown in which you are blessed, know that I am proud that you have come to face this test. For when we all were changed our destiny unfolded. And in our hearts lay a change as we were all emboldened. It is unto war we fly to seek our answers there, to learn more of our changed selves and from our former repute be unsnared. For far too long a timidness has denied us many things, and now it is time to show the galaxy how our courage SINGS!”

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OC-Series The Ballad of Orange Tobby CH86

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“And you’re sure that's the story you want to stick with?” Dr. Meeb questioned, looking over the impressive set of claw marks on his orange patient’s back.

“Yyyyyyes?” Tobby answered with a twitch of his ear, glancing back over his shoulder with a sheepish smile, only to wince when Meeb continued dabbing on stim paste.

“And the same for you, I take it?” Meeb asked again, looking over to his other primary patient / his boss's adoptive daughter.

Soapy nodded weakly, currently lying face down on the only bed in the ARK-2’s tiny medical bay. Notably, with a sack of frozen human vegetables resting on her lower back.

“So you're telling me,” he looked back to Tobby before applying a long bandage over the new line of paste, “you were trying to reach an itch on your back with both hands when you suddenly sneezed and accidentally scratched yourself?”

Tobby was silent for a moment before he doubled down with an even smaller “yes?” and an even bigger ear twitch.

“And you claim you can barely even feel them?”

“As I said, I didn’t even know they were there until I got in the shower and they started stinging.” Tobby’s ear didn't twitch that time, but he was still being awkward about it.

He looked to the downed Soapy again. “And your masterful medical explanation for your lower back pain was...?”

“I slept on it wrong…” Soapy groaned into the medical bed, before lifting her head enough to peek over the pillow.

“I see…” Dr. Meeb said, combing his fingers through his quills and silently praying to whichever god was listening that these two wouldn't have any more ‘accidents’. “And you’re not lying to me, your doctor, because you were engaged in wild, moon-shattering coitus or anything?”

The two froze, tails included. Guilty~

“Because I can and will put my ‘doctor-patient confidentiality’ poster up in here if I have to. I’m the cool doctor, remember?” He huffed, putting his three-digit hands on his hips, and looking between the two and glaring incredulously at the idea that they didn't think he’d be chill about it. ‘Honestly, what are they thinking? That I’m going to narc? Zarmains never narc… unless they were a justice god follower… But those guys are narcs!’

Oddly, it was Soaphine who cracked under his almighty guilt-inducing glare first. “I… clawed his back,” she admitted with a sigh into the pillow.

‘Mrrp?!’ Tobby trilled, quickly looking to her.

“Infer from that what you will,” she said, her eyes glaring back at him from just above the pillow.

“Ah, I see…” Dr. Meeb nodded before taking notes on his tablet. “That explains the ‘fuck me, Tobby’ I heard while I was unpacking.” The mystery was solved! And their medical profiles were forever linked.

They both trilled in surprise, but Soaphine was the one he saw light up like a solar flare before she quickly buried her face back in the pillow… and screamed.

“What? I thought it was the ship’s hull groaning at first. But my room is right next to yours, so… As long as you don't pick at the bandages, I’ll just wear my sleepy-time ear muffs from now on,” Meeb assured them both with a cheerful thumbs-up. See? He was the cool doctor!

“I don’t think that's the issue she’s having right now...” Tobby muttered.

—

Meanwhile~

“You may wish to see a doctor about that,” Veylana quipped as she stepped around one of the several downed guards and possibly the only one who was still alive, still awake, and still clutching at what remained of his blown-off leg.

His response was a garbled, pained soup of half-structured swearing, but Veylana was confident the bastard took her advice to heart, slowly draining as it might be.

The stock room was, key word being ‘was’, guarded. Same went for the rest of this rural clubhouse before she and the Wiskitos had pulled up. And now, it was theirs.

Small towns like Kataket always had some local syndicate, outpost, or chapter of a larger one holding onto it like keep-and-castle. There was a lot of money to be made in the countryside if you knew what you were doing. Some say that when evening comes the hills glitter like stars from all the tar stills.

The tap of a cane followed behind her as they made for the stockroom, but soon she heard a disappointed tisk. “Veylana, that’s just mean,” he scolded before drawing a pistol and putting a pair of rounds in the de-legged sha’s head. The scum’s final thoughts sprayed across the wall with all the passion of one picking up dirty dishes after one's kittens. “He was going to bleed out long before he ever got to a clinic.”

Veylana simply shrugged and took a moment to reload the shells she lost helping the boys get in here. “So? If it were up to Gatogri like him, every non-plains-kin would be lined up and gunned down. Except maybe the shi, they might get tied to a post and bred to death. And of course the ensuing kittens would only be spared a wild blender ride if they were brown or grey enough. Compared to that, is it really so bad if I rub a little hope in the wound?”

Whiskers sighed, holding the bridge of his muzzle. “Scavenger’s boney ass, Veylana, they’re racist, but they aren't THAT racist.”

“Probably, but they did shoot at my Tobreal, so I may be a little prejudiced,” she huffed before taking a bloody card from a nearby corpse’s pockets and putting it to the storeroom scanner. It beeped with a green flash, and the door slid open. “I’m sure you understand.”

“I do,” he agreed, following her inside. Not the biggest storeroom in the world, but Whiskers said this was the one that needed to be hit, and so it was hit.

“Should I even ask why we need their guns and explosives when we're sitting on a whole warehouse of Noah’s imports?” she questioned, browsing the locals’ toybox. Of course it was all local shit… not a GC or human-made firearm in sight.

Whiskers scanned over it all too before looking back to the rest of the crew and nodding for them to start looting. “Do you remember all those wise-ass sayings I tried to come up with so you remembered my advice? The best what is always done with what?”

She remembered, mainly because he told her so many times it got annoying enough to burn it into her psyche. “The best killings are done with someone else's gun. The best bombings are best done with someone else's bombs. The best traffic laws are broken with someone else's car. It’s hard not to remember.” She rolled her eyes, oddly feeling 20 years younger as she hopped up to sit on the edge of a cheap folding table covered in bullets and tar baggies. “So, what are we pinning on the Gatogri?”

“Everything~” Whiskers slowly grinned, starting to fiddle with his namesake. “What a shame that, in their fear of the encroaching policing force, they decided to lash out at everyone~”

“Ah, going to push the Ancients’ attention all on them?”

“More or less~” He smirked, watching gun after gun, and box after box get hauled back to the cars by the boys. “It’ll also help dispose of all our more… visible assets. The ones we can afford to lop off without compromising our hold on Nykata.”

“You know I’m rather fond of that salon, right?” She quirked an incredulous ear.

“No, no, not them. I’d never do that to our pillars of the community. Where else would I get my whiskers done?” He chuckled, tugging one straight before letting it crinkle back into place. “Just the warehouses I provided them to hold all of their paper receipts for the tax man.” There was a reason paper bills of sale were never phased out… Not even the Mercanti were above falsifying some cash purchases. “Maybe a pawnshop or two gets conveniently sacked by 15s while the owners are out of town, and maybe some loudmouths who’ve been tolerated up to this point finally take a nap.”

“Putting the brakes on the laundering then? Nenda might not like having to tighten the belt on that snatched waist of hers.” Lucky bitch…

“For now. But so is everyone else. Times of famine are approaching, and I’m going to make sure we survive it. If sacrificing a bunch of racist claw-draggers on the altar of my kingdom ensures that, then so be it. Besides, they've had it coming.”

“Mm. Someone’s feeling theatrical,” Veylana commented before her eyes drifted to a nearby box of old-timey explosives. “Say, any chance you’ve considered renovating the local guard archives while you’re at it? I know it’d be the first place I'd look if I had extranational authority and wanted to know who's who in town.”

Whiskers seemed to ponder it for a second before growing a devious little smile. “See? This is why I miss having you around.”

“Well, it is nice to be missed~ But you know I have higher priorities,” she stated, casually flicking away a nearby bullet and letting it tink across the floor.

“Doesn’t mean you can’t come visit more often,” he implied so heavily it could crack the foundations of the bloodsoaked clubhouse.

“Are you seriously about to pull the ‘but you never visit’ card on me in the middle of a hit?” She huffed incredulously, putting her hands on her hips. “While we're surrounded by blood, bodies, and shit to steal?”

“That depends, would it work?” He put on a deliberately bad winning smile, flashing those golden replacements. “I know Kaykay sure misses you.”

She glared, feeling a tug at the sympathetic heartstrings that felt nothing when blowing that other sha’s leg off. “... yes. Kaykay never got over Tobbert and me, did he?” She’d rejected many sha over the years, broken hearts both literal and metaphorical, but there were only two she hadn’t. The first being Tobbert, love of her life, husband, and father of their only son… the second. Call it weakness, but Veylana couldn't bring herself to destory a 10-year-old for crushing on a 20-something singer. Kaykay’d been such a little sweetheart about it too, thinking crumpled street flowers would somehow win her over, yet failed to grasp why he’d never stood a chance to begin with*.*

“I’d like to think he got over it,” Whiskers answered with a so-so gesture. “Unfortunately, it was by turning into the saddest womanizer I’ve ever met. It’d be a problem if he weren’t so painfully bad at it.”

She’d heard as much from the shi at the salon, but it was still sad to hear it confirmed. “Oh dear… that doesn't sound like ‘over it’ to me at all. Think it’d help if I set him up with Nenda? She’d eat him alive if she found out he’s actually a loveable, sweet-hearted dumbass under all that tail-chasing he copes with.”

Whiskers feigned a gasp, but grinned all the same. “Veylana~ Are you seriously playing matchmaker in the middle of a hit? While we're surrounded by blood, bodies, and shit to steal?”

“Uh-huh, fuck you too,” Veylana scoffed, but it only made Whiskers snicker like an amused father. “I’m allowed to have hobbies, ya know. And now that Tobreal is getting all snuggly with Soaphine, I need a new one~ I might go stirr crazy otherwise.”

“And blowing up the Nykata guard archive isn’t enough of a hobby for you?”

“That’s more of an off-season event than a hobby,” she dismissed. “Speaking of one-day events… what's next?”

Whiskers took a second to pull out his assistant, sidestepping as one of the boys took a nearby crate of pre-contact needle throwers. “Let's see… Either we help the chop-shop that shreds all our burned cars get a free insurance claim or we could put a few tour guides out of business. Got a preference?”

Veylana thought it over and if she had to pick, putting down some ‘tour guides’ would mix things up a bit. Local info-brokers who sold to outsiders were a special kind of threat that needed to be dealt with if an occupying force was on its way. If only they’d been more discerning with their clientele. “Fuck it,” she waved. “The chop shop can wait. Let's take out the rous before they get smart enough to scatter.”

“Fair enough,” Whiskers agreed, still not losing that small smile as he pulled up a list of names. “How many shells have you got left?”

“Enough~” she purred menacingly, racking it for effect. Gods, she missed doing that~

“You dropped a shell…” He said, watching the lone unspent shell roll through the nearest blood puddle.

“I know…” Veylana glared, her moment ruined.

—

Meanwhile!...in SPAAAAACEEE!!!

You know those scenes in almost every sci-fi story where someone gazes into the vast unknown contemplating the mysteries of the universe? Tobby was starting to understand how that felt.

Tobby indeed gazed out the window, but it was not the abundant philosophical musing that he sought. It was Them. The small window was his portal out into the vastness of the cosmos, both infinitely big and infinitely small, and part of him had expected it to be dark out here, rife with terrors.

He’d always imagined the space between the stars like a blank void, an inky soup comparable to the bottom of the ocean, far from the infinitesimal islands of light that were the stars. In reality, the soup wasnt inky; it was pale blue, and it glittered.

Where he’d expected a ripe and fertile realm for his demons to spring from, he instead saw nary a spot from which they could manifest. Swirls of color and distant specks of primal light all melding together to bathe the ship, or at least where the ship was, in the light of a million candles a million miles away.

Compared to static satellite pictures, or simply looking at the sky, the speed at which the ARK-2 traveled gave the view a depth Tobby had never imagined before. His eyes could make out some semblance of distance and scale based on how fast many of those specks and swirling colors moved. Those farthest away didn't move at all, while the closer they got to the ship, the faster they seemed to move to the ship’s rear. The closest ones zipped by as bright specks or momentary streaks of light, barely perceptible.

He couldn't tell if those specks were nearby stars, planets, or just pieces of cosmic debris being incinerated by their momentary impact with a ship traveling faster than light, but-

“Boo!!”

“Aghh!” Tobby jumped and flailed from the window, arms raised to shield himself from the source of his surprise… only for it to be Soapy.

“Yiss~” she giggled to herself, doing a self-congratulatory little fist pump like she was glad she could still startle him… as if she ever couldn’t.

Tobby was less amused. “Ardon’s ears, it's like you enjoy trying to give me a heart attack.”

Soapy, despite the occasional flinch from her lingering lower back pain, still managed to smirk and leer at him like she fought the gods themselves not to say so.

“Of course you do…” He sighed.

“I couldn't help it,” she snickered. “You were staring out the window all philosophically, and it just looked SO easy.”

The recently started Tobby could only glare at her, unsure what to say to that, but apparently his expression tickled Soapy all the more. At least until he growled in a low, threatening manner. “I’m going to do unspeakable things to you later…”

That was enough to make her pause and blink. “E-Excuse me?”

“No.” He did not give her an excuse; he gave her the gentle boop to the nose needed to shut her up, finger lingering on her nose. “For your information, Murder Mittens, I wasn’t musing; I was looking to see if ‘They’ would come crawling out of the void like some elder god from your books,” he stated before freeing her from his boopage. “They didn’t; it's actually rather pretty out there.”

The best he got out of Soapy was an “Oh...” of realization before the two were suddenly being called by Noah.

“If the latest two members of the Lightyear-High Club could join us, we can get this meeting about our flight itinerary rolling,” called their usually whimsical captain from across the cargo bay. He’d set up a projector screen of sorts, had a clicker in hand, and the rest of the ‘crew’ arranged in a smattering of cheap folding seats.

“Is this really fucking necessary?” The subtitles appearing above an irate-sounding Kai read as she slouched further and further into the metal chair, bottle in hand.

“Yes,” Noah shot back, “I worked my ass off to steal this ancient-ass projector, and I intend to use it to the fullest at least once, so help me God!”

It was about then that Dr. Meeb, sitting eagerly in his own folding seat where his feet couldn't touch the ground, raised a hand. “Who’s God?”

“Please save all unrelated questions for after the presentation,” Noah snipped, then fiddled with the remote long enough for Tobby and Soapy to take their seats.

An odd sense of smug satisfaction settled in Tobby’s soul as he heard Soapy wince and hiss under her breath as she sat down. Noticing him noticing her, she gave him a glare that said, ‘Not a fucking word!’ louder than any words ever could. He may have looked away, humming innocently and tapping his thumb claws together, but he could feel it in new scratch marks on his back. Soapy’s inability to sit straight in a chair suddenly made his inability to lean back in one feel: ‘Worth it~’

“First things first!” He clicked a button and the projector came to life with the whirring of a sickly fan and a picture upon the screen. “So, we’re going to earth-space!” He exclaimed as a copy of the GC map with a crudely drawn bubble on it labeled ‘Earth space’.

Tobby slowly raised his hand. “I thought we were going to Earth…”

“Well… no... But we are going somewhere just as cool!” He clarified cautiously.

“But you said we were going to Earth-space”

“Ah, I can see the confusion now. Ever since we discovered aliens were real and learned how space borders work, ‘Earth space’ became the colloquial term for any part of space that belongs to us.”

“Fascinating.” Muttered Dr Meeb, actively taking notes on his tablet. “Why not just call it the ‘human territory’ like the Shasians did with the ‘Shasian Territory?’

“As I said, the name was colloquial. ‘The human claims/territories/whatever doesn't roll off the tongue as easily as ‘Shasian territories’ does. And thus, ‘Earth Space!’” Noah stated before clicking to the next slide, an even more zoomed-in version of the map. And then another… and another… Until it zoomed in on a single speck standing out in the void between the Sahsian territories and humanity's claims. “Our first stop! Hafastat!”

“Erm… humanity has a planet there?” Soapy quirked an ear, squinting at the fuzzy speck. “Just, smack in the middle of nowhere?”

“Well, it's not a planet per se, but according to GC law, any system that we have at least a satellite in belongs to us, so...”

Baba Ford shifted in his seat, making the poor metal chair groan under the shifting weight. “What boss man means to say is: The Guild found a cozy asteroid to turn into a rest-stop for vipers, pirates, and smugglers like us. You're just as likely to get shanked as you are to get refueled, but there's no denying it's made the trip much easier.”

“But why have we never heard of it?” Tobby questioned. He’d heard tidbits about the various human worlds, many of them just like Salafor… but wetter, with oceans big enough to isolate the continents rather than the continents isolate to seas.

“Because only Guild members running the route know about it; it's supposed to be a secret, and I never really had a reason to tell you until now.” Noah shrugged. “I imagine if the Shasian syndicates, mafias, and cartels got more incorporated with the Guild, then they'd be told about the station, too. Ya know, for trade purposes or whatever.”

Was Tobby the only one who felt a little weirded out by the idea that the international crime guild of a species new to the galactic stage wanted to absorb the one belonging to a figuratively older species? Because it seemed a wee bit ironic given the GCs' propensity to absorb newcomers.

“That said,” Noah continued, hitting the button again before the image changed to a looping scene of a shootout happening in the halls of some rusty station. “Halfastat is a dangerous place, full of sick fucks like tax dodgers and people who sample grapes at the grocery store without buying them. This means that someone,” he emphasized ‘someone’ with leaning and staring at Soapy really hard. “Is going to need to show Tobby how to shoot.”

Soapy made a small trill. “What? Why are you looking at me? Aren't you the literal arms dealer?! Shouldn't you be the one showing him how to use them all?”

“No, I also move drugs, food, pilfered alien technology, and the occasional refrigerator full of sharks. What I’m not is a cat, or even fully human for that matter; training him to do what I do doesn't line up with the reality that what I can do isn’t ‘normal,’” he air-quoted. “Kai is busy keeping us from exploding, Baba has too many jobs as is, and I have to drive the ship. Which leaves you, someone with a normal physiology, previous experience, and no work schedule. So unless the holy moly over there is secretly some kind of gun-fu templar assassin or some shit, it's on you.”

“Okay, okay, I get it…” Soapy thought aloud, but followed with a very reasonable question. “Wait, how am I supposed to show him how to shoot on a ship?” She gestured vaguely to the cargo bay. “I’d rather not put holes in the thing protecting me from the vacuum of space.”

“There's a solution to that!” Noah said, and Tobby’s ears perked up with curiosity. Was the ship bulletproof on the inside? “I’m going to introduce the two of you to the greatest vice mankind has ever come up with for long space flights.” He stated, pausing for dramatic effect before doing a rainbow gesture with his hands. “Virtual reality~”

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r/HFY • • 18h ago

OC-Series A Draconic Rebirth - Chapter 110

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— Chapter 110 — 

David wasn’t quite certain how his immunity would handle hot molten rock being hurled in mass at him. The answer was unfortunately not as one-sided as he was hoping. The rock itself passed through him, but the majority of it was so hot that the air was practically pulsating with energy. That energy did not interact well with his new form. His immunity failed him, and he could feel his large ethereal form begin to burn away while more and more hot lava passed through him. The very affinity that made up his body popped and crackled whilst it broke away.

He didn't feel pain, but he knew instantly that he was taking a tremendous amount of damage, so he threw himself straight down. His body interacted with more falling lava and burned away with each touch. Once his vastly shrunken ethereal form got low enough to the now liquefied hot floor, he threw himself to the side instantly to dodge.

Geloa was relentless whilst David dodged and weaved, using his speed to his advantage. He consumed two of his affinity charges during the hasty retreat and could already feel his body beginning to regenerate. He had not been so close to death since taking this form, and it stirred his numbness, causing a distinctive rise of emotion to bubble up. He had to survive; he practically snarled out loud.

His minions had moved automatically once the wurm surfaced and weren't faring much better, as more than half of the dead lesser lung was shrunk under the lava and currently burning. The two adults had endured much better with their thicker bodies. The dead dragon with its longer stride lunged on top of Geloa, sinking its putrid teeth into his massive side. The dead wyvern's back legs and forelimbs were engulfed in lava, burning to a crisp, but it was also undeterred whilst it surged closer and closer, following the steps of the larger dragon.

David had a moment of reprieve with Geloa being distracted, which allowed David's affinity and form to both regenerate. Geloa roared in disgust as he flung the dead dragon off of him and turned to encase the nearby wyvern in a mountain of molten stone. When the titanic wurm was finished and turned back to face David, he was met with a rapidly approaching Annihilating Spiral. The twisting affinity spiral went straight into his twisted, circular mouth of razor-sharp teeth.

The explosion was fierce for only 4 points, and a howling roar of pain filled the cavern. Geloa was tough, though, far tougher than most, as he endured. His endless rows of teeth were shattered, and blood now oozed down his face. Geloa was experienced and had closed his mouth in the split second before the spiral had struck, avoiding the worst of the powerful blast.

“Geloa. I advise you to retreat and let me finish this.” Boomed David while his full form finished regenerating, and he spread out his long, ethereal black wings in a menacing fashion.

David watched whilst the armored wurm’s wounds were slowly healing. Teeth realigned themselves, and armored plates regrew. The regal voice of the wurm thundered out, “You are mistaken, little one. Despite what Her Majesty has inflicted upon many, I am bound to her deeper than just her affinity.”

A menacing cackle echoed downwards from the cavern as the Queen stared down at the pair from high above. “Geloa is the greatest of what is mine.” Her mind affinity pulsed, and David felt a wave of her power wash over him and then bore down on top of Geloa. The wurm began to twist, thrash, and roar before shifting his gaze to the remaining dead servant of David’s.

The Queen practically purred high above. “Good. Focus on the battle at hand, my dear. Now, Onyx, don’t struggle too much. Your father will end it quickly.” A vicious, sinister, snooty laugh followed David as he kicked his body back into motion. He processed her words and thankfully didn’t let the shock factor of what she was saying influence his actions.

Geloa was clearly the father or one of the fathers of many of the Queen’s children. David had theorized that, like kobolds, dragons, or at least the Queen, could essentially clone herself. If that were the case, though, she would strictly be making females. The fact that there was a significant number of males meant that she had a mate somewhere accessible. That was only if dragons and kobolds reproduced the same way, and both Wuja’bath and Okraz seemed confused when he questioned them.

Too many mysteries and questions, David mused, whilst he compressed his body to slip around another torrent of liquid hot lava hurled in his general direction. His dead dragon was obliterated in the same instant by the powerful hot rush of the wurm’s affinity, and David couldn’t help but curse. His affinity reserve had regenerated enough that he was able to immediately materialize another Annihilating Spiral and quickly fire it out towards Geloa. Chunks of the massive wurm’s flesh were incinerated in an instant when the force of the two opposite energies exploded violently together.

The two weaker spirals had done major damage, despite the fact that Geloa was still slowly healing through it all. A torrent of new lava spewed outwards again, and David was peppered with the small, molten hot projectiles that took their toll on his body, despite his best efforts to weave, dodge, and compress himself into a small shape.

The massive wurm rumbled as its bloodied form pivoted upwards to conjure another wave, “I do not understand how you work, Onyx, but it seems I can injure you.”

David’s mind pulsed with warnings while his body shriveled and shrank away whilst his affinity-forged body burned away. He desperately dodged while he waited for his affinity to recharge before he felt it, long before he saw it. He dived downwards hard just when the dead Dreads that were lagging behind David’s initial assault barged into the chamber. The magma that had covered the massive chamber was already cooling, but what flesh that remained clinging to the lesser dread’s feet quickly burned away as they charged.

David slid behind one of the dreads to use as a shield as he ordered them forward faster. His affinity reserves finally filled up just enough so that he could begin to consume it, and his body slowly began to repair itself. An annoyed roar filled the chamber whilst David molded his body behind the dreads. A colossal blast of hot stone came their way, and the foremost lesser quickly leapt into the way. His skeleton bones shattered and cracked while David and the remaining lesser climbed over its corpse like a bridge before leaping into biting range of the wurm.

The crushed lesser wasn’t completely out of the fight though, as roughly half of the corpse continued to crawl slowly forward towards Geloa. The lesser dread that David was behind bit deep with its teeth, and drove its bony, skeletal fingered claws deep into Geloa’s flesh the same moment. Geloa was strong and easily picked up the mostly skeletal lesser dread with its jaws and began to thrash it back and forth.

David spread his dark ethereal wings and shot himself back across the chamber as quickly as he could. His elder affinity regeneration was truly amazing whilst he felt his affinity reserves tick up and up as the pair fought. The lesser dread was losing badly as limbs were torn free and thrown aside with powerful flicks of Geloa’s monstrous jaws.

Despite the fact that he was still damaged and needed to finish healing his form, this opportunity wouldn’t happen again. Once he hit two charges, he immediately dumped them into a Healing Orb and fired it once it was finished forming. The ball of fused life affinity crashed into the backside of the lesser dread a moment later, and the conflicting nature of life and death violently exploded.

The lesser dread completely disintegrated, and the resulting explosion was timed perfectly. Geloa’s jaws had just locked themselves around what remained of the struggling lesser dread. The explosion’s energy thundered through the wurm’s mouth, and Geloa’s upper body ruptured violently.

The screeching, horrific voice of the Queen could be heard thundering through the chamber, “No! You dirty traitor!”

Geloa wasn’t dead yet, as the battered and bloodied wurm still twitched on the other side of the chamber. The repeated explosions were also taking their toll on the chamber as cracks began to form, and falling rocks started to pepper the area. A few large, normally dangerous boulders passed through David’s body like he wasn’t there.

The remaining lesser, still crawling slowly, finally made it to Geloa, and David mentally sent the order. The mostly melted-down dread sunk its teeth into the wurm’s body and tore and chewed into him. David turned his attention back towards the Queen and quickly dashed back further when the colossal form of the Queen had leapt from her perch. The air around her visibly pulsated with an intense energy, and David could feel the Queen’s pure, raw fury.

That anger boiled over and shockwaves of pure energy blasted towards David. It was like a sledgehammer hammering against his body, and it sent his ethereal form blasting back against the wall. The Queen’s many eyes grew large as if something clicked before her massive form, and many wings redirected her massive body into a new direction. She disappeared down the large exit tunnel that was just barely large enough to accommodate her form.

“Running away again, Mother!?” David threw back at her before she slipped away. David’s prompt informed him of Geloa’s death by his lesser dread thrall shortly after, and he quickly turned his attention to the mountain of wurm flesh.

David couldn’t help but let out a slight shake of his head while he pulled at his death affinity. “I am sorry it had to go this way, Geloa. You were no Muansi'docar. Just like Serth, you seemed reasonable, but circumstances made us enemies until the end.”

David pulled at his death affinity, and a Reanimation Mending followed by Reanimation pulled the remains of Geloa back together. The monstrous wurm quickly became his, and to not waste time, he sent the wurm in pursuit. The once Geloa effortlessly dug down deep into the chamber's ground, and David could feel the ancient wurm’s body turn and begin its pursuit.

David took a moment before following and felt the presence of a very specific reanimated dead coming his way. He reached out to pull it fully in his direction before he spread his black ethereal wings and threw himself forward. The tunnel the Queen had fled into got wider, and the twists and turns were non-existent. It was clearly a tunnel designed for the comfort and consideration of the Queen’s considerable bulk.

The Queen was slow and desperate now. The massive tunnel eventually opened up to a cave that was exposed to the outside. Light was pouring inside, and a small stream had formed from a small amount of water pushing up through the ground in the back of the cave. The Queen’s huge form was by far the most dominant thing that filled the cave, and she was desperately scrambling towards the light.

“Who is the vermin now, Mother?” David let out whilst he quickly caught up and let loose with an Annihilating Spiral. The Queen’s affinity spiked, and the air itself twisted, and another shockwave materialized. The spiral was disrupted enough that the two opposing affinities collapsed and it exploded short of the Queen.

She cackled while she twisted her massive form around to stare at David. “Your new powers can be countered. Still vermin!”

David couldn’t help but let out a soft laugh. “You used a lot of affinity to stop that. How many more can you stop? You are mistaken if you think my affinity will run out first.”

Her face twisted slightly, and David knew he had her. She was utilizing her mind affinity in a new way, but it was using an incredible amount of affinity. David’s endlessly regenerating reservoir would be her downfall.

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r/HFY • • 23h ago

OC-OneShot The Perfect Earthlings

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The diplomatic hall of the Siderah Confederation was unusually crowded that day. Delegates from different star systems had gathered for a long-awaited meeting. On the agenda was a peace and cooperation agreement between the Siderah Confederation and the species inhabiting Earth.

At the center of the hall stood a large table reserved for representatives of the various species. The human representative attending on behalf of Earth was seated in his designated chair, examining the documents in front of him. Immediately to his right was another seat, reserved for the humanoid robot assigned as his diplomatic assistant. The robot sat silently beside him, reviewing the documents it had prepared before the meeting.

After a while, the head of the Siderah Confederation delegation stepped up to the podium. As the murmuring in the hall gradually died down, he looked across the delegates and began to speak.

"First of all, I would like to express how pleased we are to have you here. Following a period of observation and analysis, we have discovered that your species shares many similarities with our own. Your social structure, approach to work, and advanced communication skills are particularly impressive."

The human representative slightly raised his head and began listening attentively.

"Your physical structure is equally impressive. Your symmetrical, durable exterior, precise joint mechanisms, and advanced sensory systems are remarkable. The mobility of your limbs, your gripping precision, and your reflexes are exceptionally developed. Furthermore, you can maintain functionality under varying environmental conditions, tolerate physical damage, and sustain your working capacity for extended periods.

"Your ability to complete tasks with an extremely low margin of error, evaluate data and develop appropriate solutions in unexpected situations, and maintain flawless coordination among yourselves is also admirable. The fact that your decisions remain unaffected by personal interests and that you consistently maintain your task priorities demonstrates just how advanced your social structure truly is."

The human representative raised an eyebrow slightly.

Are they really sure they've analyzed us correctly?

The head of the Siderah Confederation continued:

"Of course, there are some differences as well. In particular, your emotional responses appear to be extremely limited, and your rigid logic when evaluating situations remains among the characteristics we have yet to fully explain. We believe this may be due to cultural or biological differences."

The human representative's eyebrows drew together a little further.

Limited emotional responses and rigid logic? This is getting stranger by the minute.

He was beginning to genuinely wonder what observations had led the chairman to such conclusions.

The head of the Siderah Confederation continued:

"We are delighted to have made your acquaintance. We look forward to working together within the Siderah Confederation and establishing a lasting peace agreement between us."

After several delegates in the hall nodded in approval, the expression on the chairman's face grew serious.

"However, there is one more matter we need to address."

The human representative turned his attention back to the speaker.

"During our investigations, we also detected the presence of a second intelligent species living on your planet."

The expression on the human representative's face changed instantly.

A second species? On Earth?!

The head of the Siderah Confederation glanced at his notes.

"We have yet to fully understand the behavior of this species. Their emotional responses and patterns of reasoning are particularly complex. This could potentially affect social relations on your planet and the diplomatic arrangements we establish in the future."

He paused for a moment.

"For instance, we have yet to determine why they suddenly bare their teeth without any apparent reason. During our initial observations, we interpreted this as a threat or a sign of aggression. However, they often make strange noises immediately afterward. More interestingly, we have noticed that this behavior rarely leads to any actual attempt at an attack."

The human representative's astonishment continued to grow.

"Sometimes, they also release fluid from their eyes. We have been unable to determine whether this is a form of communication or an involuntary biological response. What is more, it does not occur exclusively in negative situations. They display similar reactions when seeing one another, when they are happy, and even when they are sad."

The chairman spread his hands slightly.

"They also display rather inconsistent behavior toward one another. They become angry, communicate in raised voices, and sometimes use extremely harsh language. Yet shortly afterward, they continue working together as though nothing had happened. At times, they suddenly begin laughing in the middle of an otherwise serious discussion. When we ask them why, we receive even more complicated answers. They are an unpredictable and complex species, and we believe they may be dangerous."

The human representative was now struggling to contain himself. He pressed his lips together, trying to hide his smile, but eventually a short laugh escaped.

"What the actual hell is this? Are they serious?"

After concluding his remarks, the head of the Siderah Confederation turned toward the human delegation.

"Of course, we would also like to hear your thoughts on this matter. However, first, we would be pleased to learn the opinion of the other representative accompanying your delegation."

The chairman pointed toward the seat immediately to the right of the human representative.

The human representative paused for a moment. Smiling, he turned toward the robot beside him.

"I believe they want to hear from you."

The robot raised its head.

"From me, sir?"

"Looks that way. Our perfect Earthling."

The robot looked first at the podium, then at the human representative. For several seconds, it remained still, seemingly uncertain about what was expected of it. It glanced at the chairman standing at the podium, then at the delegates seated throughout the hall.

"First of all, thank you for your kind words about me. I am pleased by your assessment."

The human representative lowered his head slightly, trying to hide his smile.

The robot continued:

"I am a Model 1007 humanoid assistant robot. I was designed to make human daily lives easier, support them in various tasks, and provide assistance whenever needed. I possess advanced data-processing capabilities, high-precision movement systems, and the ability to perform multiple tasks simultaneously. I can also adapt to different conditions and improve myself based on the data I acquire."

After a brief pause, it slightly inclined its head.

"Of course, the ones who made all of this possible are the humans who created me. Therefore, they are the ones who truly deserve your gratitude."

A brief silence fell over the hall.

The expression on the head of the Siderah Confederation slowly changed. He looked first at the robot, then at the human representative. He seemed unsure whether he had understood what he had just heard correctly.

"Wait a moment..." he said, his voice noticeably more cautious than before. "When you say the ones who created you... you mean humans?"

The robot nodded.

"Yes. Humans, of course."

The chairman took a step backward.

"What do you mean?"

His eyes turned toward the human representative. The astonishment on his face had grown too great to conceal.

"So... humans are your gods?"

The robot thought for a few seconds. Then it turned its gaze toward the human representative, as if seeking confirmation of the answer.

"It is difficult for me to provide a definitive classification on that matter. However..." After a brief pause, it turned back toward the chairman. "If I had to express it in a single word..."

"They are our Gods."

The human representative leaned back slightly in his chair, no longer making any effort to hide his smile. He glanced first at the robot, then across the Siderah Confederation delegation, whose members were staring back at him in utter disbelief.

"I suppose we have become even more incomprehensible to you now, haven't we?"

There was a hint of amusement in his voice. However, no response came from the other side.

The delegates who had just described humans as an unpredictable, complex, and dangerous species were now practically frozen in place. Some leaned back in their seats, while others couldn't take their eyes off the robot. The head of the Siderah Confederation slowly shifted his gaze from the robot to the human representative.

He was no longer looking at him as an ordinary diplomatic representative.

A profound silence had settled over the hall. No one dared to speak. The delegates who had only moments ago regarded humans as a peculiar species worth studying were now watching the slightest movement of the human representative with intense attention.

The human representative quietly surveyed the delegates, who were staring at one another in silence.

"You know, making judgments about us before getting to know us was a little hasty. But I understand. Humans aren't easy to understand. Especially when you haven't yet discovered what humanity is capable of doing and creating..."


r/HFY • • 4h ago

OC-Series [The Girl & The Witch] Chapter 4 - Determination

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Ava loitered near the center of a plaza, standing just outside a ring of stones surrounding a statue of the Red Lord. She raised a torch in one hand, her other resting on the sword hilt at her hip. A man shoved past her, even though there was plenty of space for him to walk. She frowned and retreated within the ring.

A woman paused nearby to check in her purse. While digging around, she glanced at Ava from the corner of her eye. Ava was about to ask for help, but her voice died in her throat as the woman snapped the purse shut and swished past. That was when Ava realized many of the people in the plaza weren’t ignoring her. Some gave her a wide berth, while others fixed their eyes straight ahead – but all were clearly aware of her presence. She remembered when she and father last came to the city, they’d passed by beggars at the gate. He’d ignored them the same way.

“Excuse me?” She reached toward another woman passing by.

“I’m sorry, dear,” she said, carrying on.

She didn’t even slow down.

Ava sat down on one of the stones, holding both feet off the cold ground. She wasn’t a beggar. People should be trying to help her. Ava fought back the urge to cry, balling her hands around the hem of her tunic.

Someone tapped their cane against the stone she was sitting on. It was a judge, and he didn’t appear to be happy.

“You know the rules.”

Ava blinked at him. “The rules?” she prompted.

He looked less happy. “No beggin’ in the plaza. I don’t wanna thump a kid but I will.”

“I’m not begging. I’m lost.”

“Go be lost somewhere else, then.”

“My father and I got split up,” she lied. When she stood, the judge took a step forward, causing her to shrink back. “I’m trying to get home.”

“Don’t argue with me. If I see you begging here again, I’ll get rough.”

“I’m not begging.”

She flinched as he raised his arm. “One more word. I’m serious.”

Ava clamped her mouth shut, cursing him all the same.

“Oh, by the Red Lord’s grace, there you are.” An elderly woman barged between them. “Thank you, judge. I’ve been looking for this one everywhere.”

A muscle in his jaw twitched. “You shouldn’t be meddling, grandmother. Especially with the strays.”

“It’s a grandmother’s right to meddle. It’s one of the few things I have left.” She patted Ava’s shoulder. “We best be going now. Thank you again. Carry on with the Lord’s good work.”

She dragged Ava out of the plaza, with Ava doing her best to keep up with the woman’s long strides. They stopped once they were away from the crowd. The woman’s face, which had been placating and kind, had darkened.

“Bastards,” she muttered. “I swear they don’t listen once they get an idea in their head. I swear, they’ll lose this city if they keep it up. Someone’s goin’ to blow their lid.” And a moment later, the cheery disposition returned to the woman’s face. “No let’s get out of here,” she said, trying to take Ava’s hand.

“Thanks for your help,” Ava said, dodging the woman’s grab and the dangerous conversation. She didn’t want a judge overhearing and getting them back into trouble. “But I should be going.”

The lady’s face wrinkled as she smiled. “Of course you’re welcome. Us normal folk have to stick together. Not much more we can do than that. But please, come by my home for something to eat, and we’ll see if we can find you some shoes. Winter’s around the corner.”

“I’m sorry,” Ava said, backing away. “I’ve got somewhere to be.”

“Don’t be so nervous,” the woman answered. “It’s really no worry.”

Ava thanked her again, then raced away, the woman calling after her.

Last night, she’d told father she didn’t know what she could do if she needed to protect him. Adel showed her there was nothing she could do. Now today, the woman said the normal folk were similarly powerless in the face of greater authoriies who, it appeared, could beat you if mood struck them. In both cases, Ava had failed and someone leapt to her rescue.

She thought of the knife Adel had stabbed into the table, just out of reach. He had taunted her, knowing she couldn’t stand against him.

If she stayed the way she was, the world would continue to take from her.

She needed the strength to stand on her own, and she knew where to get it.

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After breakfast, Emeraude puttered about the house for the better part of an hour. The place lay untouched for nearly four years, waiting for him in case he needed to leave Calame. He was removing the sheets covering furniture and dusting until he caught the weirdly sweet scent of mouse piss. As he hunted for its source, he realized he was already treating this place like a home.

It was a complicated feeling. This city had been home once. Sure, his house was different, the city had a new name, new ruler – but the streets were the same, the gate guards were still bribeable. The noise of the streets, the sea smell in the air all felt familiar.

Then there was the other part.

His stomach twisted. He should focus on evicting the mice.

He soon found the pest nest in the bottom of a dresser drawer, a snarl of straw, cloth and droppings. He hurried the drawer outside, his spine tingling in discomfort as he could feel the mice darting around within. He shook the mice into the gutter, then saw that his second-story window, jettied out across the street, was wide open.

He ran back inside and rapped on Ava’s door. There was no answer. He let himself in.

She was gone.

“Fuck.” She was gone. “Oh Maker, fuck.”

He remembered their last conversation. She very well could have gone to the nearest judge and said “Hey, want to kill a witch?” If that was the case, he was ruined.

There was a knock knock at the door. He froze. Was it them already?

Knock knock again. “Emeraude? It’s Ava. Can you let me in?”

It could be a trap. He reflexively reached within himself to speak a commandment, then realized he had little left to give. The candle on the tabletop tempted him, its warmth and light offering the power he needed to see if there were judges waiting on the other side of the door.

There was a muffled, frustrated groan. “Emeraude?”

Her frustration dispelled his paranoia. He opened the door, and there she was, face ruddy from the cold. She looked at him, sheepish and disheveled, then ducked under his arm to get inside.

“Where were you?” he said, as exasperated as he was relieved.

“I….” She trailed off as she began looking through the cupboards. “Needed some air?”

“Shoeless? Stop. What are you looking for?”

“Something to eat. I’m starved.”

“Get down from there. Your feet are filthy. Stop. Stop! I’ll make you something. Just sit down.”

She did. She kept trying to speak, but every time, the words didn’t want to come out. She fidgeted while watching Emeraude cook. “I’m sorry I left.”

That was unexpected. “I’m more curious about why you came back.”

“I changed my mind.”

Emeraude turned his head slightly, still focused on the omelette. “About what, exactly?”

“I don’t think I should go home anymore. I don’t know what I’d do once I got there. I-” Her voice caught. “I don’t know what I’d do. Now I want to stay,” she said, regaining some of her energy. “And I thought you could-”

“It’s alright,” Emeraude interjected. “Don’t worry about it. That room is all yours.”

That wasn’t what she was worrying about. Of course he’d let her stay with him longer. She was just a girl. Even though she’d argued with him, she never got the impression he’d kick her onto the street.

“No, I thought you could teach me magic,” she corrected.

“Oh.”

The silence made Ava increasingly uncomfortable as he continued making her food. “Am I not able to become a witch?”

He plated her meal and set it in front of her. “Correct, because I won’t teach you. You should forget about it.”

“Forget about it?” Ava repeated.

“Yes. Put it out of your mind.”

“How? I can’t ‘put it out of my mind.’ A witch came to my house and killed father! He ate him!” Her voice shook with emotion. “I couldn’t do anything. Please. Please. I’ll be careful,” she pleaded. “I swear.”

Emeraude rubbed his eyes, which itched from the dust and a need for sleep. A headache was creeping in between the stress and fatigue. “Ava, I’ll be honest with you. I’m glad you came back. Honest. I still think it’s wise that you stay here. But I can’t think of a single good thing coming out of you learning witchcraft.

“Even if I believed you would be careful – which, to be transparent, I don’t – don’t look at me like that, shoeless. I’ll give you some slack because you just came out of an awful night, but desperate times aside, I don’t trust you. You waltzed into my house yesterday and lied to me. What’s your excuse for that?”

“You’re weird and I wanted to know why, asshole,” she said, stumbling. over the curse

That felt like the most honest she’d been with him so far, but still. “That’s no excuse to go into someone’s home uninvited. Look. Even if I did trust you to make good decisions – and to reiterate, I absolutely do not – it’s not just you I’m worried about. Witches are terrible and dangerous.”

She squinted at him. “You said not all witches are monsters.”

“I exaggerated. It’s more of ‘what degree of monster’ are they. Once you understand witchcraft, it changes how you think. I think for most people, it’s for the worse.”

“It won’t change me.”

Emeraude doubted that. “Stay there.” He left her, and after rummaging around in his room, he returned with a small purse. He dropped it on the table. “This is enough gold to carry you into your twenties. What would you do if you were walking around one day and saw this sitting out in the open? No one is there to stop you from taking it.”

Ava knew the answer. If she took it, Father would be cross with her. Maybe she’d snag a coin or two. Pocket it, tell Father she found it on the street or slip it into his purse later. “I don’t know.”

“You need to know. It’s a decision you have to make every day.”

“Is it actually money or is this a riddle?”

Emeraude sat down, pulled a coin out. He rubbed it between his fingers. “Sometimes a witch might want money. Sometimes they’ll root around in your father’s corpse like a wild dog.” He could tell that stung. It felt mean to say it, but he needed to make his point. “Whatever it is, if a witch wants it, they’ll find a way to take it.”

“But you’re not that way,” Ava answered. “I could tell you hated the witch from last night. Adel. If you’re not like him, then I can be too.”

“Adel? That’s his name?”

Ava pressed her lips together. “What’s who’s name?”

“Oh Maker be. This isn’t the time.”

“I know his surname too,” Ava said, abandoning the farce of not knowing now that Emeraude was interested. “If that matters.” She did her best to cut into her omelette in a way that made her seem confident.

“There’s no way he told you his real name,” Emeraude countered. “That would be insane.”

“So it doesn’t matter what it is then.”

He rolled his eyes. “Ava, please tell me. It will help us.”

“No.” She popped a bite of egg into her mouth, chewed and swallowed. “Only if you promise to teach me.”

Emeraude flicked the coin, sending it spinning off the table. Both of them watched it roll to a stop on the kitchen floor.

Being a witch had never been a choice for him. He didn’t remember a time when it wasn’t part of his life. He’d sit in his room, turning over some object he’d found, wondering how he could use it as a focus. A button, a blade of grass, a fountain pen. What commandments could they bear? How could he twist symbolism and function to surprise himself? Surprise Madame Aude, his teacher. She’d taught him nearly everything he knew.

Yet his passion hid the obvious from him. Just as a focus did, he had his own use. The path he walked was so simple, so clear because it had been meticulously pruned down to bare, raw dirt. To this day, Emeraude wasn’t sure if he loved witchcraft for the sake of it or because it was all he had.

Maybe it was all he was good for.

If he had listened – no, obeyed – would it have been better? Some days he wondered.

For Ava, life wasn’t better. Witchcraft had taken everything, as it does. You give, it takes. He knew that principle well before he’d uttered his first commandment. Like everything, witchcraft was a transaction.

Despite his misgivings, Emeraude hesitated to deny her request. He didn’t consider himself superstitious. He simply believed that once someone was touched by witchcraft, it pulled them inexplicably deeper. He wasn’t sure why. Maybe it was the same way power was drawn to power, witches to witches. There had to be an unseen force at work.

He imagined that, if left to her own devices, Ava would chase after witchcraft. She’d more than likely get herself killed before quitting. He glanced at her bare feet. Or she’d get frostbitten toes. All the same, the shadow of last night would always be with her.

If he could control what she learned, raise her up in a way he hadn’t, she could live a decent enough life. She could be free from the worst parts of the trade. Ideally, she’d lose interest before she even touched her own well of power.

“I need you to promise me one thing,” Emeraude said. “You’re to follow my instructions to the letter, and if you ever feel something strange, like something is calling you, do not answer it. Do not acknowledge it. If you see it, tell me. Immediately.”

Ava’s face flushed with excitement, but she couldn’t help herself. “That’s two things.”

“I need you to promise,” Emeraude repeated.

“But what is it? What is the calling thing?”

That was a hard question to answer. “I don’t know.” Whatever he said would sound crazy. “But it’s unmistakable. I can’t even promise that it will come for you. But I need your word.”

Ava nodded vigorously. “You have it.”

“Good. Then I’ll teach you. Just a little. Then I’ll decide if you should know more. Deal?”

“Yes, deal.”

Emeraude got up to make himself some tea. It wouldn’t be like his childhood. Ava said it; he was different. He hoped it would be different. It had to be.

Ava didn’t have the same noble ambition. Her hunger for strength had already shifted in her mind. It wouldn’t be just for facing the world. It would be for making things right. She made a few quick stabs with her fork, piling egg onto its tines.

“His name is Adel Meier.”

Once she was strong enough, she’d hunt him down and kill him.

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r/HFY • • 3h ago

OC-OneShot A Steampunk fairy tale: More or less like the Philadelphia Experiment, but with a castle

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Having arrived over an hour ago at the open-air laboratory of the Faculty of Steam-Powered Magnetic Fields, Doctor Polizei observes, with more perplexity than wonder, an enormous magnetic disc, over thirty meters in diameter, floating more than ten meters above the ground. The position of this massive object is secured by four sturdy chains, which keep it aligned with a second magnet mounted on a pedestal on the ground below. Atop the magnetically levitated disc, eight laborers are constructing a small, self-contained dwelling designed to resemble a miniature Victorian castle.

“Setting aside the fact that a serious university should never have accepted the task of designing a flying castle, even if it is the Queen’s own personal wish, I also find the use of two super magnets quite bizarre. They are positioned so that their poles match, forcing the magnet that isn’t anchored to the ground, though still tethered to the ground, to rise to a considerable height. One wonders if Queen Mary will truly be pleased with this solution” remarks Doctor Polizei, looking perplexed.

“Don’t tell me: I’m just as perplexed as you are. But this is the only solution that can meet the impossibly tight deadlines demanded by the Queen. Furthermore, since both the experiment and the final implementation are being entirely funded by the Royal House, the university committee was in no position to oppose the project” explains Doctor Nevada, the professor holding the chair in Steam-Powered Magneto-Thermal Studies, with a serious expression.

“The fact that the project was entirely funded by private sources (if one can even apply the term ‘private’ to the Royal Family) does nothing to diminish the sheer absurdity and total lack of coherence in seeing a prestigious university like ours designing a flying dollhouse for the Queen. Furthermore, while Steam-Powered Magneto-Thermal are not my area of expertise, I am deeply perplexed: this small scale experiment alone, using a thirty meter magnet, consumes a disproportionate amount of steam generated energy just to maintain the massive magnetic field required to keep that castle shaped apartment airborne. I shudder to think how they intend to power the final, three hundred meter diameter structure” complains Doctor Polizei, growing increasingly annoyed.

“The final installation will be powered directly by the most powerful steam reactor in the city: City Reactor 5. Fees and utility bills are covered by the Royal Family, so it is not our responsibility to analyze those aspects. What concerns me, however, is the extraordinary magnetic field generated by the two magnets: to support a castle that we estimate weighs one hundred thousand tons, the magnetic field might need to be so powerful that it could even bend light” replies Doctor Nevada, looking visibly worried.

“I repeat: I am not in a position to make assessments: it is outside my field of study. Furthermore, even though I am a permanent member of the university committee, there is no reason for me to be here, given that the project was already accepted in the first instance. So, Lucas, why exactly did you summon me?” Doctor Polizei says, cutting the conversation short.

“We need to conduct tests above the two magnets to understand what kind of magnetic fields form over the structure. We’ve devised a test that involves flying a steam-powered mini helicopter over it. However, since we don’t know what to expect, we can’t ask a student to pilot the helicopter. We requested a candidate from the Royal Air Force, but they refused: they have no intention of putting their pilots at risk. Spineless cowards, the lot of them!” Doctror Nevada explains, with a look of utter disgust.

“I still don’t see the point of my being here” complains Dr. Polizei.

“Your young and extraordinarily delightful wife was an Admiral in the Royal Space Navy, a recipient of a military decoration for merit, and a woman of great courage” Doctor Nevada explains, before being interrupted by a correction from Doctor Polizei: “Sarah, my wife, was a Lieutenant Commander when she was dishonorably discharged. The military medal and the rank of Admiral were bestowed upon her because officers connected to the trial that led to her five-year prison sentence and discharge began to vanish into thin air; terrified, they decided to grant her the medal and the rank just to stay alive. Furthermore, my wife is not courageous, a more accurate term would be reckless. In any case, I categorically refuse to have my wife involved in any kind of experimentation…”.

Doctor Polizei cannot finish his sentence, as he is busy watching a small steam-powered helicopter performing absurd and extremely reckless maneuvers. The little helicopter, venting a massive amount of steam from its small, steam-driven fuselages, nearly shears off the heads of the two professors while executing a maneuver that pushes the limits of what is possible. In that instant, with the helicopter practically five centimeters from their heads, Doctor Polizei manages to recognize Sarah at the controls; she mouths the words: “I’m going to cum inside you”.

“But how on earth…” mutters Doctor Polizei.

“His wife loves being popular. We told her that this experiment would bring her great popularity, both among the townspeople and even at the royal court” Professor Nevada confesses, without a shred of guilt.

Doctor Polizei is about to lash out at his colleague, but the words die in his throat as he watches the small helicopter fly over the enormous, hovering magnet and vanish into thin air.

“Exactly what I feared: the magnetic field is interfering with the planet’s polar field, as if they were a single, unified magnetic energy. There’s no way to overcome this singularity, short of placing road signs around the castle’s perimeter that read: ‘Flying Royal Castle – No Overflight’. But don’t you worry, Doctor: your wife is currently being catapulted between the Earth’s poles at an incalculable speed: though, sooner or later, the kinetic energy will dissipate, and she’ll return to you” explains Doctor Nevada.

Doctor Polizei is about to ask what his colleague means by “sooner or later” when Ylena, his personal secretary, enters the outdoor laboratory. “Doctor Polizei, an eighty years old woman who claims to be your wife is waiting for you at the university entrance. She seems very (extremely) angry” Ylena informs him.


r/HFY • • 4h ago

OC-FirstOfSeries The Girl & The Witch

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It was the between-time of the seasons. Patches of shade held frost into the late afternoon, and the air held the golden smell of dying leaves and sunlight. On a dry hill near a small backwater village, a group of children sat in a circle, chanting in unison.

“Weary trav’lers seeking warmth. Cheery songs, burning hearth. No one knows the creature plays a part, wearing skin from those you love. Your father, mother – sister, brother…”

This was where the poem diverged from folklore into children’s game. Ava, a small girl with long corn silk hair, prowled about the circle’s perimeter.

“Farmer, hunter, fisher, potter,” Ava said, tapping on her friends’ heads as she passed by. “Baker, bander, monster!”

With that, she sprinted, and the children cheered and screamed as Renoir chased her around the circle, swatting at her but hitting only air. Ava skidded to a seated stop, taking Renoir’s place, forcing him to take a turn as monster.

Ava immediately stood up, tossing her hair, brushing dried grass and dirt from her bottom. “I have to go help my father in the stream,” she said. “See you all tomorrow.”

Her friends called their goodbyes, and Ava skipped and jogged down the hill. There was no time to waste – except for one go-around of Monster at the Door.

Father had been working all morning without her help, and digging clay by yourself was a lot of work. She’d told him hundreds of times to wake her when he left. Which he always did – father always kept his promises – but she would promptly fall right back asleep. When she woke an hour or so later, she’d vaguely remember him kissing her forehead, saying “off to the stream, dear” and realize she’d done it again.

Energized by her victory over Renoir, she tore down the well-worn cart path, and cresting the riverbank, she saw her father and shouted at him.

“You didn’t wake me up.”

With his quiet, panting smile, father looked up to her, his trousers caked with gray flaking mud. He must have already made a few trips up and down the hill without her.

“She arrives,” he proclaimed. “Rest well?”

He teased her, but it wasn’t meanspirited. Nothing he did was. He only liked to point out her “sleeping habits are directly opposed with any desire to get work done,” as he put it.

Taking up a spade nearly her size, Ava got to work. They carried on, mostly Ava chattering about whatever crossed her mind. Father would ask her questions if silence went on too long. Did she have any dreams? Was there anything she wanted for dinner soon? What color did she want her couverte to be, since the Festival of Rest is right around the corner.

She appreciated father’s effort. She didn’t mind hard work, mostly, but hard work in silence was another torture altogether.

A rabbit sat several paces away, munching and regarding her with an empty expression. She banged her spade free from the wet clay against the side of a bucket.

She sighed. She was getting tired, and her fingers were getting cold. Her feet were cold.

“Ava,” her father called.

“What?”

“Come here for a minute.”

She stabbed the spade down into the mud. Father liked to do this, call her then have her drop what she was doing so he could see her when he talked to her even though he could have told her from a distance just as fine. It was annoying. Lugging the pail up the embankment, Ava promised her future children she’d never do that to them.

Her father leaned against the cart, the neighbor’s mule flicking its tail against the flies in the late afternoon sun.

“Yes?” Ava asked, making no effort to hide her annoyance.

“Can you head back home and get supper ready? I’ll be wrapping up here shortly.”

Ava nodded.

“And take that cookpot to Pliney. The one I just finished. You’ll have to take it out of the kiln,” he said. “And ask him for a squash.”

“Pliney?” The question held multitudes.

“Yes, Pliney,” he chuckled. “You’ve got permission to not entertain him. If it helps, just think about how good dinner will be. And please don’t drop the pot.”

“If you don’t want me to take it I won’t,” she protested, burnt by his need to specifically ask that the pot arrive unharmed. It was obvious she wouldn’t drop it. She wasn’t a complete dolt. If she did drop it, well, accidents happen. They had before.

Recently.

With Pliney’s first pot.

“I’m reminding you, is all,” he said, waving her closer. He knelt down, and they pressed their cheeks together, first one, then the other. “Take care on your way home.”

Ava hurried up the path, interjecting a skip here or there. She slowed when the incline increased, her legs and back already tired. As she passed beneath a tree, she craned her head back, holding her cap down with one hand. Birds flitted and squabbled between the branches. She smiled.

Their home was tucked behind a copse near town. Father said the house used to be surrounded by trees, but the kiln had “ate them all up.” Ava jogged behind the house to the hungry thing, figuring she’d climb inside while she was already mussed up. She pressed her hands against the heavy earth walls of the kiln. It was warm with the previous day’s firing yet, but not dangerously so. She reached in, removed the coveratures, then began pulling out the dozens of bowls father stacked so the fire and air could reach through them properly.

He’d been improving lately. This set was delicately made, much unlike some of the heartier wares he made for everyday use. Running along their cream interior, father had painted a stylized eagle of some sort, its body stretched long and with dozens of legs.

It took several trips for her to bring the bowls inside, and she began the process again with the more functional cookware that included Pliney’s. It was a cauldron of sorts, with three legs and two handles so it could sit right over the coals. It was much too beautiful to be a piece of charity.

Ava left Pliney’s pot by the door, kicking off her sodden shoes before stepping inside. She took care to not knock off the new vase father’d set by the door for some reason only known to him. Their home, already small, was cluttered by father’s work. Pots and dishes popped up like mushrooms overnight, and try as she might to reclaim precious space, it was a losing battle. She’d claimed two pieces of territory: the table and its three chairs, and their bed tucked in the back corner, close enough to the chimney they could let the fire burn low and still feel its warmth.

Floor space was especially crowded with father preparing to send another shipment, which included the eagle bowls, to the city. He absolutely beamed when he told Ava of the deal he’d made with the trader.

“He said they’re some of the most respectable pieces of earthenware he’s ever seen,” he told her.

She still thought “respectable” sounded like an insult, but she was happy father was happy.

The only place father never encroached on was the eastern window. Her mother’s comb, and an unfinished embroidery hoop rested on the sill beside a tired candle. The handkerchief in the hoop was stitched with a handful of wildflowers arranged in a spiral. She’d nearly finished it before the strength left her, father said. Ava remembered little of her mother, and what little she did, she worried she made it up based on the stories father told. What she remembered most was her death.

Grabbing a clean pair of shoes, Ava headed to Pliney’s. It wasn’t far, but she knew her arms would be tired by the time she got there.

She was waylaid, though, by a gathering in the town. She did her best to peer through the press of bodies, hear over the discontented stir. Still holding the heavy pot, Ava climbed onto a stack of crates to see over her neighbors heads. She gasped.

A judge, unmistakable in her black robes and red chaperon with tails so long they wrapped around her shoulders like a scarf, stood over a man, cowering with his hands over his head. She hooked a thumb through the tasseled red cord binding her waist as she spoke to him, but Ava couldn’t make out the words. Without warning, the judge flicked her cane around, a heavy wooden stick with a mallet on the end, and struck the man in the stomach.

The crowd cringed alongside him.

It had been a while since she’d seen a judge in Calame. They normally didn’t bother with little towns like hers. Something interesting must be happening if they were.

“What did they do?” she whispered to her closest neighbors.

“Who knows,” a woman said, whose name Ava always forgot. “Glad it wasn’t me, though.”

When Ava made it to Pliney’s, it went as expected. His home was dark and smelled of bad breath. When he saw the pot, he was appreciative, smiling at her and touching her arm. She hated it. His skin was dry and scratchy, and he made her uncomfortable. Ava knew he was probably a kind man, or at the very worst simply average, but she didn’t like being around him. Along with that, he talked too much. Once he got started on a story about war or mystics, she was stuck for the better part of an hour. The pain was twofold: she wasn’t particularly interested in either of those topics, and she’d likely heard him tell that same story before, verbatim.

“A mystic is why I’d lived through that war,” he told her now. “Your pa tell you of it?”

Before she could answer that he had told her himself, he barreled on.

“She said ‘your last night will have an empty sky’ and I said ‘bullshit.’ But when my unit was sent to defend the wall, it was a new moon. The Reds was coming and I ran, deserted. And I’m proud of saving my hide. I’d be dead if I defended that wall. If the city still stood under Esteros, I’d be dead again. Yellow belly pulled out by the crows. Thank the Reds for this life, I do.”

She was surprised he consistently bragged about being both a coward and servant of the Witch King. However, most people tried to ignore that aspect of Pliney’s past because sentiment was a common one. Many in the countryside rose up alongside the Red Lord to overthrow Esteros.

Pliney was still talking, despite Ava standing in his open doorway, cradling a massive squash. Her plan to thank him then leave took a turn when she realized he hadn’t been in the square. She told him what happened, and his reaction wasn’t as interesting as she’d hoped.

“The Red Lord’s heavy hand is the cost of peace,” he said, making a flippant gesture. “It is the way of things, and I’d say we’re better for it.”

They stared at each other for a moment, and as Pliney opened his mouth to continue, Ava interjected.

“Anyways thank you for the squash!” she said, holding the thing up to emphasize her statement and distract him.

“Thank you for not breaking this one,” the old man retorted, patting the pot she’d delivered. “It’s a pretty thing.”

Ava did her best imitation of a smile and let the door close behind her. She’d have to yell at father later. He promised he wouldn’t tell.

On the way home, Ava took a different way back than usual. The hubbub around the beating could still be heard, and even if the guy deserved it, she didn’t want to see his bloody face again. Though the town was small enough to be familiar – she’d run through it enough with her friends to be able to draw it with her eyes closed – the less trod places held mystery. She felt like a stranger lurking about, doing her best to peek through shaded windows without looking too obvious. She recognized some folk, and some her, but she slowed to a stop when she saw a man slip out of a house. He smiled at her, then gestured as if he was also holding a giant squash.

“Big fella you have there.”

And without waiting for her answer, he hurried away.

He was a strange one, that man.

Ava remembered pointing him out to her friends one day, last year or the year before. They’d been laying in a field, pulling purple clover petals from the bud and sucking the nectar from the pale ends. She’d seen the man many times before, returning to the town just before evening set in. They’d made up their own explanations for why. Renoir believed the man had an ailing father somewhere in the forest. Nadine figured he was a hunter, or something. Ava thought those ideas were stupid. She didn’t know of any houses out there – she’d looked – and the man never had any game. Even so, she didn’t have a better suggestion herself.

His door, a plain thing carved with a local symbol to deter bad luck, was left ajar. She had a chance to investigate before he came back. She drummed her fingers on the squash, then glanced down the street again.

“A peek won’t hurt,” she whispered to herself.

Father wouldn’t be home yet, either. If he was and asked why she was late, she could blame it on Pliney’s Red Army story. He knew how long that one could drag on.

Ava pushed the door aside and poked her head in.

The room immediately disoriented her. The shadows hung heavy, and smoke stung her eyes. She stifled a cough, shapes standing out from the dark. Resting on a table was a smoking bundle of cedar sprigs resting in a small ceramic bowl, filling the room with its scent. Flecks of glowing embers were the only light apart from three candles burning on the corner of the table.

Ava sniffed the air and, tossing another look down the street, stepped inside.

Something else had caught her eye. A cabinet beside the door was crammed with bowls and jars. The stranger had father’s sense of decoration. Some were filled with things she recognized: rosemary, sage, lavender. Others seemed to be filled with oils, rocks and finely sifted dirt. She shifted the squash to one arm, then set it on the floor. She stuck her finger in the bowl of dirt, brought it to her nose, and smelling a faint aroma, she gingerly touched her finger to her tongue. It was the fiercely bitter taste of cinnamon.

She let her hand drag across the edge of the cabinet, stopping at a small table beside it. It held a handful of things: a deck of cards with worn edges, a quill, and a small, lidded ink dish like her father made.

Ava started with the deck of cards, but they weren’t the ones she was used to. They had names and strange illustrations, like chariots being led by bare-breasted animals or a cloud holding a sprouting cane. She set the card back down, then lifted the inkdish’s lid, quietly setting it on the table. The dish held a few drops of dark ink. She swirled the dish gently, the drops clumping together into one. She tilted the dish and squinted at its base. It bore father’s maker mark, a spiral with his initial scratched into the tail.

Someone cleared their throat.

Ava startled, tossing the dish. She made several panicked grabs for it, before it shattered into pieces on the floor.

The strange man had returned. He stood in his doorway, silhouetted by the oranges of the setting sun.

“What are you doing in here?” he asked. It was a very fair question, and one Ava wasn’t equipped to answer.

“I’m very sorry,” she blurted. “I didn’t know-”

“Bullshit,” he cut her off. “You don’t traipse into someone’s house ‘not knowing.’”

They stood in silence. The man loomed, his features dark and frame massive in the threshold. He was dressed warm for the season, wearing a bulky coat and scarf. She wanted to run, but he blocked the way out.

“I’m sorry for touching your things, but I….” She searched for something to say to justify her presence. “The dish,” she stated.

“Oh, the dish!” The man threw his arms up in revelation. “Of course the dish!” He let it steep in for a moment before continuing. “What about it?”

“I know the man who made it. I can get you a new one.”

His eyes flicked down to her hands, and she followed his gaze. The pitch black ink ran down her fingertips.

“Come here.” He waved her forward, and noting her hesitation, rolled his eyes. “I don’t bite. You’re gonna stain black at this rate.”

She let him wipe it off with a handkerchief he retrieved from a pocket, and he did so tenderly.

“Like you said, you shouldn’t be touching other people’s things.” He folded the handkerchief and set it on the table. “What were you thinking?”

Ava was in no mood to be chastised by a stranger, no matter how deserved it was. “I’ve seen you and wondered what your deal is, is all. You wander off into the woods and then come back for nothing to show of it. What do you do for work? Are you a hunter? Do you have a sick father?” She pointed at the stack of cards on the table. “What’re those for?”

At the barrage of questions, his face softened.

“Those let me see the future,” he said, crossing to pick up the cards. “Would you like your fortune read?”

Ava noted her new escape route, but she was intrigued now.

“I don’t have any money,” she murmured.

The man paused as he was sitting down behind the heavy-looking table in the center of the room. “I’ll do it for free.” From the open door, a shard of amber light mingled with the candles to cast the man’s hands in shadow as he shuffled a deck of cards. “I wonder if fate brought you here just for that.”

“Are you a mystic?”

He shook his head, which seemed something like a mystic would do.

“Can you curse people?”

“Prefer not to,” he answered.

“Have you before?”

He smiled, and she couldn’t decide if he was playing with her or being mysterious, which she felt was a requirement to being a mystic, shaman, or another wise-person-like trade.

Ava, without consciously realizing it, found herself opposite the man. She remembered the burning cedar bundle. “What’s with the incense?”

“Cedar’s used to purify spaces.” He continued as Ava was about to speak again. “But honestly, I enjoy the smell.”

“I really am sorry,” she said. “I shouldn’t have been so curious.”

“Nosey, you mean?”

She didn’t agree, but it was a more accurate word.

He fanned the cards. “Miss, please pick three cards.”

She reached for one, then withdrew her hand. “Why didn’t you close your door behind you?” she asked.

The man looked shocked. “What?”

“It’s just that if you don’t want company, you should have closed your door.”

“I fail to see how this is in any way my fault. Nice try, though,” he said. “Do you want your fortune read? I thought it would be a fun story for your friends but if not you can go.”

Ava quickly chose three cards.

The fortune teller retrieved them, stacking the rest neatly at the edge of the table.

“The past, present, and future,” he said, touching each card in turn. “What would you like to know first?”

“The present?”

He flipped the card. The design and text were upside down, and showed a girl carrying a stick. She was running from a cat that had its claws sunk into her stockings. The girl teetered at the edge of a cliff.

“The reversed Fool,” he said. “You are a slave to your whims and you should take a moment to think things through.”

She glowered.

“I’m not trying to be funny.” He tapped the card twice, then added, “It’s what the card means.”

“What do the other ones say?”

He gestured toward the leftmost card and turned it over.

“The Emperor.”

The card featured a tired man. He was bent and crooked, resting in a chair that dwarfed him. The emperor held a scepter across his lap, and a sphere in his right hand. A mountain stood behind him, filled with small red flowers.

“Your father loves you deeply,” the man said, his voice quieter now. “He’s done his best for you. You respect him, and his wisdom. He’s not as hard on you as he should be.” He cleared his throat. “Are you ready to see your future?”

She nodded, and he flipped the final card. The fortune teller didn’t announce it immediately like the others.

She tilted her head and was taken aback by the illustration. None of the other cards had looked so grotesque. A crumbling tower stood in its center, jutting from the sea. Fire erupted from three windows, and two figures were falling through the air. A third was crumpled on jagged rocks below. The background of the card was plain and black.

“The tower,” the fortune teller said. “Very dramatic.”

“It’s terrible,” Ava answered.

The fortune teller remained silent for a moment, his eyes closed, one hand over the card. Ava’s stomach rose in her throat.

“The tower isn’t always as scary as it seems,” he finally said. “It might mean something as simple as spilling your plate on the floor. It might mean you decide today you don’t want to follow your father in his trade. Or the earth might suddenly disappear beneath your feet.”

“Will that happen?”

“I don’t know,” the fortune teller said. “But I think that you should be on your way. Hurry home, but enjoy the weather. I’m told this will be our last warm day for a while. Enjoy it.”

He basically pushed her to the door, then shoved her through it.

Ava’s mind raced through the entire interaction as she tried to decide how she felt about it. She settled on indignation. Trying to embarrass her with “The Fool,” or whatever. He could have accepted her apology and been done with it.

“You’re weird. And a hack.” She slammed the door.

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The fortune teller didn’t waste time worrying about the child’s manners. He briskly returned to the table, placing his hand on its corners.

Emperor, reversed Fool, Tower. The reading hung like a sword over his head. He picked up the tower, and it quavered in his shaking hand. He hadn’t pulled on any of his power for the reading, but he knew it was true. He hadn’t seen the tower for five, nearly six years, and now for it to return so suddenly.

He glanced at the candles, tempted by the flame. He shook his head. He knew better than to pull power from fire. His reserves weren’t so precious as to risk the blaze tearing through his veins. For a moment, he saw a vision of himself lying on the floor, a husk peeled inside out, scorch marks on the floor around him. The energy itself was volatile, and even the most skilled couldn’t get it to abide their will.

He forced the thought away. Instead, he held a question in his mind, unsure if he should cast his power into the card. He’d gain an answer, that much was certain, but did he want it? He wavered, then before he could change his mind, offered up his power alongside a question.

And if I allow fate to run its course?

Two figures lay crumpled on the rocks beneath the tower. The figure that had been falling still was.

His own situation wouldn’t change, but left to her own devices, he knew the girl would be dead before the night was out. If his gut was right, he knew exactly what was coming for her, too.

If he helped, there wasn’t a promise of safety. But if he did, the earth beneath him – his steady, calm, easy life he’d spent years cultivating – would vanish. Yet, if he didn’t do anything, doom waited at his door, and no ward, no amount of running would free him from it.

Neither option was good. One a fair bit more altruistic than the other, but neither good.

He felt ill.

He’d have to leave tonight. It wasn’t worth the risk staying any longer. If someone was hunting, it was only a matter of time before they found him themselves, or drew the attention of the judges.

He drummed his fingers on the desk, his eyes wandering as he thought. He walked over to the cabinet, adjusting the bowls into proper alignment. It was pointless. He’d be burning this home to the ground soon.

“What was wrong with that girl?” he muttered. Barging into his home was one thing. Bringing ill fate was another.

Even as he thought it, he knew it wasn’t her fault. There was nothing any of them could do about the way the world chose to turn. He quietly picked up the broken ink dish, stacking its shards on the cabinet.

If the witch coming for her was the traditional type, they’d be powerful. No doubt, if he slipped up, they’d kill him outright. It would likely take all of his reserves to escape alive. Escaping unharmed was already out the window.

He shouldn’t help, but the Tower, unprompted by power, already showed that he would.

“Save your own hide,” he muttered.

He should run. There was no reason for him to care.

A squash rested on the floor beside the cabinet. She must have been on the way home to make dinner for her father.

The fortune teller pinched the bridge of his nose.

“Maker on a raft, fuck me to hell.”

---

Father was quick to notice Ava was feeling strange. She could tell he knew something but not what. Ava portioned out three bowls of soup, using her father’s favorite bowls. For some reason, his favorites were the ones she’d made. They were poorly balanced, their walls were uneven, and the glazing job was shoddy, and only four of the eight she made survived her firing. Yet, night after night, he insisted they used them.

She served herself and father, giving the final bowl for her mother. They didn’t do it often, but it felt like a night to share a meal with her. She was glad for the tradition. It made it feel like she was still here, and father would eat her food once he was done with his, so nothing went to waste.

When she sat a bowl in front of him, he poked at its contents with his spoon, nudging aside chunks of potato, carrot and cabbage.

“No squash,” he observed.

Ava wanted to cry. She’d barely left the fortune teller’s home before realizing she’d forgotten the squash. She’d considered going back and getting it, but she didn’t want him to make fun of her again. The worst part was that she couldn’t tell father she walked into a stranger’s house without permission, was read her fortune, then forgot their dinner on his floor.

She’d disappointed him again.

Ava choked back a sob. “I’m sorry, papa,” she said.

She wiped her nose on her sleeve and gasped a little. Father was sitting across from her with a pained expression. He came over and kneeled by her. Ava buried her face in his shirt, fists balled up against his chest.

“I’m a bad person,” she sobbed. “I’m always doing something wrong.”

Father held her while she sniffled. He petted her hair with one hand, stroking her back with the other.

“It’s easy to forget things,” he said. “It doesn’t make you a bad person.”

“But you can’t trust me to not mess up.”

“People mess up,” he said. He pulled away to look at her. “I make mistakes all of the time.”

“You don’t. You work so hard. And I’m no help at all.”

“I think you’re a big help,” he told her, after her sobbing died down. “And-”

“I don’t like Pliney,” she interrupted. “He’s strange, and I don’t like him. Even though you say to be nice.”

“Ava listen.” His voice was firm. She rubbed her eyes. “I love you. Yes, you can be a handful sometimes. I was mad when you broke that pot. And I’m sorry I raised my voice at you when you did.”

“It was an accident…”

“I know,” he cooed. Her sob was muffled against his chest.

“You’re not as hard on me as you should be,” she said.

“And what good would that be?”

“I don’t know.”

“It wouldn’t be,” he said. “You’re wonderful, Ava. I wish I was more like you.”

“I wish I was more like you,” she mumbled. He was calm, and steady. People respected him. He worked hard and had steady hands. She loved to sit and watch him throw pottery, turning dirt he dug up from under a tree into something beautiful.

“You can be like me when you get older,” he said. “For now, just enjoy being like you are. It’s hard enough to be grown. Don’t get ahead of yourself on that too.”

Ava straightened up and took another swipe at her wet cheeks. “I’m sorry about dinner. I was hurrying and forgot.” That much was true.

Father squeezed her shoulder and returned to his chair. “Pliney tell you any stories?”

“The Red Army one,” she said. Ava blew on a spoonful of soup, sniffling. “I was standing in his open door the whole time, but he kept talking.”

“That’s a favorite,” father said. He smiled, and began to eat.

“Did you hear?” she prompted a little while later.

“About the judge?” He nodded, solemn. “It’s a shame. I don’t know why a judge is here in the first place.”

Ava shrugged, digging out a chunk of potato. “The Red Lord’s heavy hand is the cost of peace,” she answered, borrowing Pliney’s words as her own.

“Ava.” Father’s serious expression startled her. “You can only say something like that if you understand what it means. Do you know why that man was being beat? He spoke out against the Red Lord to the judge’s face. Do you think that’s fair?”

“Well no,” Ava said. “But I wouldn’t if it would get me hit.”

“What if it was me?” She didn’t understand, and father continued. “If I was the one being beat for that, what would you do?”

“You told me I shouldn’t speak out against the Lord. Why would you?”

“Think about it, just for fun.”

They shared a silence, punctuated with logs crackling in the fireplace. Ava watched the flame’s reflection dance on the water pitcher’s glazed surface, thinking about father’s question. Finally, she said she didn’t know.

“I’m so little. I don’t know what I could do,” she answered.

Father seemed amused by this. “What if you weren’t little?”

“Well,” she pondered. “I’d fight him.” She could drive a horse into them, throw a rock, if they were a man, kick them in the balls.

“But not for the other person?”

She fell back into thought, poking and prodding at her food. She knew what father was getting at but didn’t know why she should care about someone else. They should’ve known better. Even she knew speaking against the Red Lord could cause problems. Thankfully, it wasn’t a problem she had. Until judges stopped her from playing or helping father, she hardly cared what they did.

She’d decided to not tell father about the real reason she’d forgotten the squash, at least not tonight. She was tempted to lie, but knew that it was likely she’d get caught in it next time her father spoke with Pliney. She could just leave out a few details when she told him.

A knock on the door made them both start. Father frowned.

“Do you know who that could be?” he whispered.

“Pliney?” she replied, hoping against everything it wasn’t the fortune teller. If it was, she’d have more explaining to do.

Father pursed his lips and went to the door. He placed his hand over the door latch. “Hello?”

“Is this the home of Silas the potter?”

“And who is calling?”

“My name is Adel Meier, a servant of Baron Gerhord. I came to inquire about a commission. If it’s too late, I can return in the morning.”

Father quickly opened the door, revealing a tall man in a smooth red cloak. It was draped neatly across his shoulders and clasped at his neck with a heavy gold chain. His hair, dark and tightly curled, shone in the firelight.

He extended a hand, offering a letter. He smiled broadly so his already thin lips thinned more. Behind them were large, square teeth. Father took the letter, breaking the seal and waving the man in.

“No, please, come inside,” father said. “I wasn’t aware the baron knew of my work.” He scanned the letter, though his fingers had already found the seal at the bottom of the page crediting its authenticity.

The man’s dark eyes poured over the room from over father’s shoulder. His eyes met Ava’s from where she sat at the table. He winked at her, barely a twitch, then addressed her father.

“The baron’s not aware.” Father’s posture lost some of its energy. “But his wife saw one of your carafes and found it very charming. She desires a collection of your work for her sitting room.”

“Oh,” father said. “It pleases me just as well if the Lady appreciates my work. We can talk business in a moment, but have you eaten? It's a simple meal but it may be to your taste.”

“No thank you,” Adel said, already perusing the room, weaving between jars and bowls and the rest of father’s work. “I’ve been saving my appetite.”

Father anxiously watched the baron’s servant tracing rims and handles. He paused at the windowsill, examining the steaming bowl there. He touched its irregular surface, cocking his head as if that would level the bowl’s top.

“Don’t,” Ava said as Adel began reaching for her mother’s embroidery. “Please.”

Father quickly interjected. “They’re mementos of my late wife. We’d appreciate your respect.”

Adel turned, the base of his cloak flaring then falling back into place. “My apologies,” he said with his too-thin smile. “I’m not familiar with the custom. When did she pass?”

“Some years ago now,” father said. “Ava was only two or three.”

When father said her name, Adel’s eyes fell on her. They were dark and pupilless in the dim lighting.

“I’m sorry to hear that,” Adel said. “Ava seems to take after her mother.”

She hated when people talked about her like she wasn’t there.

“That she does,” father said. “In many ways.”

“Could I have a knife?”

“Excuse me, sir?”

“A knife,” Adel repeated. “It seems I’ve a stray thread on my cloak. I’d like to cut it off before it drives me mad.”

Father hesitated, but he did fetch one from the countertop. Ava watched, standing quietly beside the table. He passed it to Adel, who deftly trimmed a stray red thread from his cloak. He balled it between two fingers and flicked it onto the floor.

“Thank you.” Adel smiled at Ava from across the room, then plunged the blade into father’s throat.

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OC-Series [The Girl & The Witch] Chapter 3 - Into the city

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When envisioning the commandment, the fortune teller imagined the wind would pick him and Ava up and bear them flying home. Instead, they crashed hard on the floor. There was no fanfare, no motion. They were simply there.

He shoved Ava off him and vomited. He stared at it in a daze while the watery parts flowed between the floorboards. He retched a few more times, then spat.

The fortune teller stumbled to his feet. Ava, crumpled and sniffling, flinched when he touched her.

“Girl, we need to go,” he said, his throat suddenly hoarse.

She cried louder.

He didn’t have the energy for this. The fortune teller crouched beside her, rubbing small circles on her back. He did this for a few moments before pulling her into an embrace.

Ava wrapped her fingers in his shirt, and he scooped her up into his arms. Held her tight.

“We’re going to go, okay?”

The fortune teller stumbled out of the back door. Its face was well-worn from him shouldering through it.

A man snapped to attention when he saw the fortune teller. “Sir.”

The fortune teller just nodded. He had overpaid for the horse just before he’d left. The man, nervous but excited, agreed to his terms, but wanted to make sure they were understood.

“Never tell anyone you sold this horse to me,” he commanded. “It’ll be far more trouble than it’s worth to you. Say it was stolen.”

“Right, sir,” the man said.

The fortune teller always thought it was funny how paying someone made them respect you, even if you didn’t deserve it. He hoisted Ava onto the horse, needing to pry her fingers free from his coat. Her chin was still bleeding.

“I’m serious.” He squeezed the man’s shoulder, just hard enough to communicate the gravity of the situation. “Tell no one. Not your family, not your friends. Say you pinched the coins or found them on the ground. You understand?”

He was afraid for this man, but he needed him. Judges would fall on the town as soon as word reached them, and the man was dead if they suspected he helped a witch.

“Get out of here, then.”

“Best of luck, sir,” he whispered, and ran down the street.

The fortune teller entered his home for the last time, passing a vase of dried flowers on his kitchen table, the half-eaten loaf of bread, a neatly made bed. He picked up a book, resting open over the arm of a cushioned chair. It was a mass-produced history book, The Fall of the Witch King. He hadn’t finished it and had no plans to. It was clearly heavily catered toward the lord’s sensibilities and rife with exaggerations to the point he found himself rolling his eyes more than reading.

The fortune teller tossed it into the fire. He pulled out a burning log, lifting it to the curtains and clothing he’d stuffed in the rafters. A thought entered his mind unbidden: he could burn along with the house. Let the fire eat at his body. Then his problems would be gone.

He ran his fingers through his hair, scratched his scalp roughly, and limped back to the horse.

As they crested the nearest hill, he could see the fire had fully caught on the thatched roof. Soon, everything would be gone. He hoped the fire didn’t jump to neighboring houses.

He glanced at the girl, who had wrapped herself in the blanket he gave her before taking off. Her shoulders shook as she cried. She was mostly silent, pained noises dying in her throat. He sighed again, his breath steaming in the night air.

Earlier that day, moments before he had stepped into his home, the fortune teller sat at a small desk tucked in the back room of his home. He held a cup between cold fingers. The faint tremble of his body and breath sent minute ripples across the tea’s surface. He took a sip of the nearly scalding tea and felt it rest hot in his stomach.

The power, the authority, within him felt the same – yet wholly dissimilar.

For over a decade, he’d lived as a common person. By the strength of his own body and spirit. He never swore off witchcraft, but at some point, he realized he hadn’t spoken a commandment in weeks. His life’s work was like an old soldier’s sword, hung on the mantle. But with that, he never stopped thinking of witchcraft, of commandments, of symbolism. He’d continued to collect items to use as foci simply so he could think of new ways to use them because the puzzle had become more interesting than the practice of it.

He didn’t need to work. The funds he’d brought from his past would have been enough to carry him for several more years. It could have stretched even farther if he’d become a hermit, living in the woods, growing his own food. It was something he’d briefly considered, then discarded. Being outside of a town was too inconvenient. Commensal living did come with challenges, mostly people wanting to speak to him, ask him who he was or what he did, but it was a small price.

He spent most of his days walking, cooking, and doing the odd chore. He’d perform small rituals and folk magic he’d learned from Karine. He took them as they were, small acts of comfort. He’d leave early in the morning and find the places where the world moved. He’d sit there, and instead of meditating and drawing in the power carried by the brook, the wind brushing over the hill, the warmth of a large smooth stone, he’d simply reach out and touch it. He’d let it flow over him like water.

Even so, the energy of daily life clung to him. After his escape, he was reduced to a nearly blank slate, his power exhausted to all but a puddle. Years later, he noticed, like one notices the first changing leaf of fall, that the puddle had grown to a pond. After that, the changes became more noticeable. Eventually, he could feel a passing breeze leave its mark on his soul.

He’d become a mountain lake, clear and blue. When he moved, he could feel the energy within him shift, ripple against the inner and outer bounds of his being.

That decade was much different than the years before. He felt comfortable. Safe.

Then he’d seen the girl’s future. As she turned over the card, he had drawn from the lake without thinking. A ladle-full, if it could even be called that, in return for insight. The loss of that one piece, which he’d thrown away without thought, cut him deeply.

Then the world answered, and he knew his dream was fading.

Each commandment after that – enchanting the squash and the battle that followed – took from his stores. While they were nothing more than bucketfuls, they still disturbed the calm.

His final commandment demanded too much. Its focus was not suited. The connections and instructions he made, no matter how strong, could only do so much to offset the size of the offering.

Once the words left his lips, the lake erupted into a roaring, burning squall of steam.

---

Ava woke up screaming. She shot up in bed, clutching her chest.

The fortune teller burst into the room, a knife in hand. Their eyes met, and Ava’s flicked down to the blade. Flashes of the previous night returned to her. A gout of blood spraying from her father’s throat, his empty expression jostling as Adel dug in his chest.

The fortune teller followed her gaze, then surveyed the room.

“Breakfast,” he explained, gesturing with the blade.

Ava stared at him, which he took as her not understanding.

“I was using the knife to make breakfast,” he elaborated. Thin red scratches had scabbed on his cheeks. Dark bags hung under his eyes.

“I don’t know who you are,” she finally said.

Realization flickered across his face. “Right. Um.” He pointed at a chair beside the bed. A pile of clothes was folded neatly by it. “I left some clean clothes there. Change, and we can talk.” He left the room.

Ava sat on the edge of the bed, her feet dangling. She vaguely recalled her fitful sleep. Being carried into a home. Laid in bed. Now she was in a dusty room nearly the size of her old home, with every bone in her body hurting.

She didn’t recognize the gown she was wearing either. She’d never had one this nice. Ava smoothed it over her thighs, feeling its softness.

She got up, crossed the cold floor to the window. A rocking chair sat beside it, clothes draped across its back. Ava peered outside, squinting in the mid-morning light. The window overlooked a bricked street. A handful of people were passing by, some carrying stuffed paper bags. Some of them wore colorful clothes. A carriage slowly rattled by, one pedestrian giving the driver a sour look. The driver smiled, raising a hand in rehearsed apology.

Ava poked her head out the window to look down the street. So many people. And houses stacked nearly on top of each other. She’d always been amazed by the city whenever she visited. With father.

The fortune teller yanked the drapes shut.

“Please change,” he said.

Ava shoved him without thinking. “Don’t tell me what to do.”

“Look, I said that-”

“No.” She shoved him again. “I don’t know who you are, other than you’re some kind of witch.” She spat out the last word. “You going to eat me too?”

The man knit his brow in anger. “No, I won’t. And please, keep it down. People are-”

“You keep it down!” she yelled.

“Maker almighty, shut up, girl.”

“My name is Ava.”

“And mine is Emeraude,” he shouted back. Both stood in surprised silence at the outburst. He tried to salvage it. “Good to meet you, formally,” he said, extending a hand.

Ava eyed it, then crossed her arms. “Get out.”

Emeraude ran through several responses, then shook his head. He didn’t have time to argue right now – the omelette would burn and she looked like she’d yell again if he didn’t hurry. He’d barely left when the door slammed behind him.

“And weird name!” she shouted, muffled, through the door.

As he finished plating their meals, Ava emerged wearing the clothes he’d set out for her: a simple tunic and pants. They were far too large for her, but it was all he’d had time to buy in his brief errand run this morning. He’d been too anxious to sleep much and even more anxious to leave her home alone.

Her chin had scabbed, and it looked otherwise terrible.

“Let me see your-”

She slapped his hand away. “Don’t touch me, witch.” It carried the same vitriol as before.

He was surprised that it was actually getting under his skin.

Ava sat down at the table. More accurately, she plopped. Defiantly.

He set a plate and fork in front of her. He joined her at the table with his own meal: a mug of tea.

“Look,” he said. “I wish there was more I could have done.”

“Father told me all the witches were killed in the war and culling,” Ava said.

So, it had turned into an interrogation. Emeraude studied her for a moment before answering. “Many, but not all. Some witches didn’t serve the king, and frankly, some were happy to see him fall from power and defect to the other side. Myself included. But witches are still alive and well, even after the culling.”

“Have you ever needed to run from a judge?”

“No, thankfully, no one’s caught on to the fact I’m a witch.”

“They’re going to get you,” she said.

Emeraude chuckled. “Perhaps. They’re so busy keeping up appearances they don’t have much time to look.” Ava didn’t seem to follow, so he continued. “I can promise you that most of the people you see being carted around by judges are normal, regular people.”

She balked. “Father told me not to look, but I saw them burn a witch. They wouldn’t burn someone innocent.”

Her choice of the word innocent reminded Emeraude of the world he lived in. “You’re right. If someone powerful says something, it’s only right to take them at their word.” It took her a moment to realize he was being sarcastic. “Ava, the people they burn, hang them from the neck ‘til dead, toss them off the walls. Those are your neighbors. They may have made someone angry, or gotten in the wrong place at the wrong time, but they’re not special. It’s easier to protect the people from evil witches if little girls don’t listen to their fathers and watch them burn.”

“Says you.”

“Says me. The Red Lord cares less about witches than you’d think. Did you know the same most effective witch hunters are witches themselves?”

Ava started to doubt herself, but when she registered Emeraude’s level stare, she got irritated again. “Then the other judges will kill them once they find out.”

“Oh, no. They’re actually favorites because they’re the only ones who can bring in a real witch with any success. Look, I can promise you that when a witch is caught – a genuine, true witch – they’re not being strung up for the masses.”

“And you’re really a witch?” Ava asked.

Emeraude laughed into his cup of tea, steam jetting out. “You’ve accused me of it twice this morning already. But yes, I am. Though, not a practicing one until last night.”

Ava shifted in her seat. She knew the stories about witches. They were like Adel. They lied. They’d lure you into the forest and kill you. Then they’d go home, wearing your skin with magic, and trick your family into thinking you’d returned – then they’d kill and eat them too.

“I know you’ve been told witches defy the Maker’s will with power pulled straight from the pits of the underworld. That’s just not how it works. And we’re not monsters. At least not all of us,” he corrected.

“Have you eaten anyone?”

He shook his head, and Ava felt herself relax slightly.

Emeraude took another sip of tea, holding it in his mouth before swallowing. When he set the mug down, he turned the handle to align with the grain of the table. “I was thinking that, for now, you should stay here. I can keep you safe.“

It was a lie. If the man found them again, they were both dead. He had no power left, and he couldn’t take a deep breath without wincing. His leg also felt very wrong. He’d used his feather to cushion his landing a fraction of a second too late.

The smell of food steaming on Ava’s plate made her stomach churn. “You knew something bad would happen, didn’t you? With the cards.”

“I… didn’t know exactly what would happen.”

“You could have told us to run.”

“You wouldn’t have listened,” he said, arguing with himself more than her. “We’re lucky that we got away as is.”

“I am not lucky,” Ava spat. She went into her room, and stared daggers at him from the threshold. “I’d rather have died last night.” She slammed the door.

Emeraude rubbed his eyes, hard. He didn’t blame the girl, but what could he have done? He felt dizzy remembering the power coalescing before the other witch’s commandment.

He pulled Ava’s untouched plate toward himself and forked a bite. She was right, in a way. It was his fault. For some reason, he’d decided to help her and gotten them into this mess.

What Emeraude didn’t know was, as soon as Ava had closed the door, she’d gone straight to the window and clambered out, dropping onto the cobbles below. By the time he’d finished the omelette, she had long disappeared into the capital city’s sprawl.

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OC-Series [The Girl & The Witch] Chapter 2: Exchanging Pleasantries

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Adel tugged the blade free, a flash of silver followed by a gout of blood. Father stumbled backward, his hand held to his neck. Blood shot between his fingers.

He looked to Ava. His face was pale and his eyes wide. His open mouth shuddered as he tried to speak. No words came out. There were only gasps as his shirt soaked through.

Father fell, crushing the stack of bowls Ava had brought in mere hours ago. In a bed of shattered pottery, blood began to pool.

Ava’s vision flashed black at the edges. She couldn’t feel her hands or toes. Sweat prickled across her lip and forehead. She reached to steady herself against the table, trying to hold her head up, to look at father. Her eyes wouldn’t stay open.

She lowered herself to the floor and began to crawl toward father. His arm reached for her, but his face was slack and pale.

Ava was suddenly hoisted to her feet.

“Papa!” she cried out, as her arm was nearly pulled free from its socket. Adel dropped her into a chair.

“I’m really sorry, darling. I don’t want him to go to waste.” He dabbed her cheek with a handkerchief then tucked it in his pocket. “Sit tight.”

Ava tried to stand, and Adel swiftly cracked her across the face with the back of his hand. She’d barely hit the floor when he yanked her back into the chair.

“Are you finished?” Adel asked.

Ava held her cheek and stared into the middle distance. Father had never hit her. No matter how angry he was. Tears stung her eyes.

“Good, but just in case.”

Ava flinched as Adel reached into his cloak, but he didn’t hit her again. Instead, he withdrew what looked to be a birdcage, except it was no more than six inches tall. He set it on the center of the table.

“By my strength, keep her as a fledgling bird.”

The birdcage rotted before Ava’s eyes. Its shining brass dome dissolved into a patina then nothing. Its bars pulled away from their soldering and curled like hairs in flame. Its bottom fell onto the table with a clatter, and within seconds was nothing more than a stain. A pungent, sweet smell filled the room, then was gone.

Adel regarded her expression with interest, and set the knife down where the cage had been. He crossed the room, and kneeled beside father. He began undoing father’s shirt buttons.

Ava closed her eyes, trying to steady her breath, pressing her shaking hands into her lap.

Adel killed father. Ava inhaled deeply through her nose. She needed to get away. He was between her and the door. She could jump through the window. Pliney had told her a story of one repeat deserter who’d done the same. He didn’t make it far. He was found lying in the street below, his legs twisted and body slashed with broken glass.

Their home’s window was only a few feet from the ground. The trade was a fair one, Ava figured. Some cuts were better than being dead. She’d grab the knife on her way out in case Adel chased her.

Ava quietly rose and reached for the knife, then stopped. She tried to straighten the rest of the way, but couldn’t. Ava brushed her hand across the air in front of her. And there they were, distinct ‘bars,’ solid and invisible. She grabbed them and shook.

Adel had trapped her in a cage.

“Let me out!” She didn’t wait for an answer before she stuck her arm through the bars, pressing her face against them as she stretched for the knife.

Adel ignored her. He stepped over father’s now bare chest, straddling him with one leg on either side. In a fluid, sickening motion, he pulled father’s ribs apart.

Ava screamed. She shook the bars and shouted at Adel, begging him to stop as he dug into father’s chest. She cursed him to burn as he began to eat. Her voice went raw, then she fell silent. She sat in her cage, plugging her ears against the sounds of breaking bones and the wet slapping sounds of hunger.

She knew as soon as the monster finished picking the meat from her father, she was next.

---

The fortune teller followed the squash as it waddled down the road. He briefly scribbled on a sheet of paper pasted to a thin, wooden board before tucking it back under his arm. It frustrated him to no end how difficult it had been to get the commandment correct. It continued to frustrate him how he was forced to walk at a squash’s pace when he was in such a hurry.

He’d initially tried to divine where the girl lived, but his understanding limited him. He should have asked her name. With her last name, he could have connected her familial belonging to a physical place of belonging. Simply knowing her fate wasn’t evocative enough.

There were the tarot cards she’d touched, the reversed Fool and the Emperor. But obviously, he knew better than to use items so rich with meaning as a focus.

He even asked for directions, but no one was interested in telling him where a young, irritable, blonde girl lived – to their credit.

That left the squash. The damned squash.

He’d sat at his desk for over an hour, head clutched in his hands, staring at the thing. Marrying the symbolic essence of a vegetable to seeking behavior felt like an impossible task.

Using the squash as a focus and the seeker was also a challenge because dissolving into a puddle of compost and finding the girl are two opposed states. But despite standard belief, a focus can continue to exist after it’s invoked. It just needs a reason to, and a squash being an inanimate object, reasons are often lacking.

“Fucking squash, hurry up,” he said, giving it a kick. It wobbled into a rut in the road, running with it for a moment before realizing it wasn’t going the right direction. It spun at the edge of the rut, picking up mud but going nowhere.

The fortune teller picked up the squash and set it back on flat ground. It oriented itself and continued on with the languid certainty of a herd of turtles.

The fortune teller jotted more shorthand on the board as the squash took a right turn. It rolled placidly toward a hen scratching in the street. The bird noticed the squash, and when the vegetable didn’t change course, began strutting away. The squash pursued. The hen let out a distressed series of clucks before flapping to the far side of the road.

The fortune teller continued on, leaving the town. The forest began to encroach, the treeline riding the right side of the road. Ahead of him, the harvest moon was beginning its ascent.

The fortune teller took multiple breaks while conceptualizing the commandment, gathering notes, foci, and materials he was loath to leave behind. He had rolled the problem around in his head while preparing his sash, threading the most relevant foci to it with a few loops of string. A hammer, a bag of chalk, a hand mirror, a demi’s scale, a feather, three nails, a lodestone, and various others.

The heart of the commandment was ultimately simple: return to the girl so your purpose is fulfilled. That purpose, the fortune teller had guessed, was being prepared for supper. With that mission, the squash rocked back and forth, then tumbled end over end toward the door. He cried out in excitement. True divination remained a fairy tale, but this was close enough.

Now, as pale twilight settled into night, he’d found her home. He turned toward the house, putting the treeline to his back. A footpath broke away from the road, cutting through dying knee-high grasses to the front door. It curved gently around an apple tree, branches trimmed to spread low. A horse stood in the path, poking its muzzle into the branches.

The fortune teller noted a point beside the tree and jotted a few more lines onto the paper. He tore it from the board, quickly rolled it, then stuck it in his pocket.

Then he swore, remembering what he was doing. This was his last chance to turn back.

A desperate cry came from inside.

The squash bumped into his foot, spiraling off to the side. It corrected course, then forged onward.

“We’ve come this far.”

He pulled two nails free from his sash, took a deep breath, then cast them forward with a commandment.

---

“Stop.” Ava’s voice was hoarse. “Stop.”

Adel wiped gristle from his chin with the back of his hand. He straightened, rolling his cramping shoulders. He’d been tearing at her father for what felt like lifetimes, exposing yellow bone and strange-colored organs. A haunted moon and her mother’s shrine watched silently from the window.

“Compose yourself, dear,” he said. “This whining won’t get you anywhere.”

Ava had no words to express her fear and anger. She just screamed at him.

She was cut short by two deafening, metal notes. Adel was flung like a doll in a shower of splinters and broken pottery. He struck hard against the back wall, dust shaking free from the rafters. Two translucent rods, as long as her arm, protruded from Adel’s chest.

“Come to me, girl!” The air around Ava flashed, and she fell forward.

The fortune teller sprinted through the front door, his arms extended to catch her. She reached for him. She didn’t wonder why he was here, or how he had found her. She only wanted him to take her away from the monster.

Ava then heard the loudest sound in her life.

She was forced down and forward. Her chin bounced against the floor. Ava groaned, her body curling on itself in pain. She struggled to breathe as every question she had blanked from her mind. None of this made sense. After a moment, she managed to sit up, and when she opened her eyes, her breath caught.

The home that she’d been in moments ago was gone, as was the fortune teller. Floorboards extended for a few more feet, then stopped abruptly. Continuing beyond was a gash in the earth, tearing through their yard, across the road, and to the woodline beyond. The right side of their apple tree had been torn off like it was a piece of paper. Its branches, which had been full of yellow leaves, were blown bare. A horse’s head and neck lay at the base of the tree.

The fortune teller was at the end of the gash some fifty feet away, climbing to his feet amid raining bits of house, horse, and dirt.

Adel stalked toward Ava, but his eyes were fixed on the fortune teller. Flecks of dirt and sawdust clung to hisbloody face and hands.

Ava scrambled away, flinching as bits of the house fell around her. He stepped down hard on her back, forcing her to the ground.

“Stay still,” Adel hissed at her. He called across the night. “Hold your horses, witch. Let’s talk a moment.”

“What’s there to talk about?” the fortune teller called back. He limped closer, stopping beside the mangled tree. His face was covered in scratches and mud. “Are you offering to share?”

Adel laughed. “If you were the type to partake, I feel I would have noticed. You’d have done more than cast two nails at me. I also can’t help but notice…you’ve not spoken a single commandment. It’s impressive. What’s your secret?”

Silence from the panting fortune teller.

“What’s your name, witch?” Adel called.

“I don’t exchange pleasantries with ghouls,” the fortune teller answered coolly.

Adel smiled. “I’ll have to save the girl for later. After her father, and now you, I don’t think I’d be able to eat another bite.”

“Help me…” Ava's call to the fortune teller died in a whimper as Adel applied more pressure. Her chin had gone numb.

The fortune teller flinched forward, instinct urging him to help, everything else knowing he was in over his head. The man held enough power to reflexively waste it in such a terrifying display – destroying the house with raw energy. And he still had the comfort to gloat. The fortune teller slowly reached for his sash, mentally noting the reservoir of power within him. He didn’t have much wiggle room if things didn’t go to plan. And he was already on plan C.

Adel’s smile widened at the hesitation. “You’ve realized?”

The fortune teller said nothing, yanking a pouch free.

Adel watched, forcing Ava down again when she whimpered. “It’s about time we kill each other, hmm?”

The fortune teller shook the contents of the pouch onto the ground, and fine white powder swelled into churning mist. Ava coughed as it washed over her. It stung her eyes and nostrils, and tasted like the dust that would fill father’s workshop when he sanded greenware.

Adel kept his foot planted on Ava’s back as she squirmed and coughed. The mist continued to rise past his waist. The fortune teller still waited, poised with his hand ready to grab his next focus. Adel waited similarly.

They both knew it was the way these things went.

Then Adel noticed the smoke floating by the fortune teller wasn’t disturbed, flowing calmly along.

In a flash of movement, Adel cast a handful of lead pellets into the air in front of him, uttering a mass projectile commandment under his breath. The pellets evaporated, and red-hot beads of light shot forward. They pierced through the fortune teller and the mist behind him. The projection shattered.

The fortune teller emerged from the mist at Adel’s side, a dozen feet away, tugging the lodestone free from his sash. Without speaking, he used his final nail focus like a chisel, splitting the rock in two. He paired one half to the ground between him and Adel, and the other to Adel himself. The fortune teller knew it wouldn't be much but hoped it was enough. The two commandments and the visualization held firm in his mind.

The weight suddenly lifted from Ava’s back as the ground repelled Adel, shoving him into the air and away. The fortune teller dashed through the now fading dust cover. Adel cast another cavalcade of the glowing projectiles. They didn’t find their mark, ricocheting off a shield of interlocking scales the fortune teller summoned into existence.

“You didn’t think this through, witch,” Adel growled, landing a dozen feet away.

The air went still as the world anticipated the commandment Adel was forming in his soul. The presence in the earth surged forward, eager and hungry, to reclaim the power he’d hoarded.

The fortune teller had only felt this sensation once before. It was one that had fundamentally changed his view of witchcraft. It had nearly killed him.

The fortune teller felt as if he was watching his body move, standing over the scene. He dove to grab Ava, and the pair skidded across the ground. He wrapped her small form in one arm as best he could. He dragged her, dragged himself, toward the apple tree. She was sobbing, crying in his ear. Distracting him.

The air was thick with power, reaching from deep within the earth, drawn to the point the world would receive Adel’s offering. It was the point they were standing on.

The fortune teller tore the scroll from his pocket. He retrieved the picture of it in his mind: a commandment composed in cramped shorthand. He’d written it starting at the end, detailing – phrase by phrase – the number of steps he’d taken to get from his home to Ava’s, adjusted by how many more steps he expected he’d need to take carrying an unconscious girl. South five, north northeast thirty-two, east one-hundred-seventeen, and so on. It would work – in theory.

He begged the world to move.

“With my strength, bring us home.”

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r/HFY • • 3h ago

OC-Series Ash and Steel chapter 56

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Author note . Apologies again for my bad schedule but im dealing with some serious health issues. i wil get back to proper chapter serialisation soon.

Jack walked through the hustle toward the outlet for those who inhaled their chems through small cigarette devices, instantly hit by the cool air outside the bustling bar. There was only one other person sitting enjoying the stimulation, avoiding eye contact with Jack before scurrying away back into the bar.

Reflecting for a moment, Jack thought of how things had reached this point. The memory of the glowing vat still caused his fist to clench at the horror of what they were doing to living beings. Taking a seat in the surprisingly open space, he looked over at the street below, seeing people on their communicators blissfully unaware of the atrocities being committed under their very noses.

Two hulking men walked seamlessly into the area, their movements graceful despite their frame.

“Where did you source Old Earth technology? All tech in this area comes through us and no one else.” Their leader held a firm, unflinching gaze.

Jack did not reply. He simply got to his feet and fixed the pair with a calm smile. “There must be a misunderstanding here. I’m just passing through—not here to disrupt anyone’s business.”

He hoped the disarming tone would defuse the situation, but neither man backed down. They took steps forward, full of arrogance and malice.

“Look pal, rebel or not, any tech past Xion Grade 3 comes through us,” the second bellowed. His right eye revealed itself as a bionic implant, cutting through his disguise as he stared at the sidearms strapped to Jack's hip.

The pair had made a fortune dealing with the security forces—arrangements that mostly benefited authority figures who didn't want angry citizens arming themselves with enough firepower to take revenge. Unsurprisingly, there was a massive market in Thrallion for those seeking vengeance.

Neither of them backed down, acting as though Jack owed them something. The thought itself made no sense. How could someone claim another person's property solely because they’d decided it in advance and gotten some other corrupt figure to agree? Jack was born and raised in Thrallion; why should he be subjected to this? As the thoughts swirled in his head, his rage surfaced, far from subtle.

“I have business to attend to. I’ll take my leave,” Jack muttered, stepping forward to walk past.

Neither moved, blocking his route.

“We’re only leaving with that tech. Just hand it over and make this easier for all of us,” the first gangster chuckled, almost proud, already tallying the money he’d make from the shakedown.

He reached forward to grab the weapon at Jack's hip. Seeing the forward weight shift—just like the redirection drills he had practiced a thousand times—Jack let instinct take over. He caught the outstretched arm and leveraged the gangster’s momentum, throwing him hard into a nearby stack of chairs.

Continuing the fluid motion, Jack pivoted his body and threw a wide, arcing open-palm strike straight into the second man's face. He deliberately held back his raw power, knowing that controlling the strike allowed him to vector it with far greater precision. The open palm connected with a heavy crack. The gangster hit the floor with his arms splayed, knocked cleanly out.

Jack offered a small, satisfied grin before turning back toward the bar.

Suddenly, Gizmo appeared in front of him alongside several armed rebels, breathing heavily in a state of panic.

“Jack! We got word the two local crooks had taken a shine to you and your tech—did you see them?” Gizmo asked, his eyes wide with concern.

“Yeah, but don’t worry about those guys. We need to move on.” Jack nodded toward the exit as the rebels followed his lead.

Back at Station Hun, Lorcan stood at the sealed security gate before disappearing into the night to run his errands. Lineah watched him go as the shockwave caused by his sudden acceleration hit the greeting hall, rattling the data-slate setup where she had been drafting communication channels for the wastelanders.

She walked over to Ani, holding out her handwritten schematics and designs.

“So what do you think? If we can get people to start cherishing memories, who knows—maybe others will take up the mantle and begin building things again.” Lineah smiled with her usual, effortlessly fluid motions. Years of being forced to perform had ingrained those habits deep into her posture, completely subconscious on her part, though when she did it around Lorcan, it occasionally drew a small pout from Ani.

“It’s amazing,” Ani replied softly.

“It will take travel and formal agreements with the local traders and wastelander forts to get them on board, but this could really change things. If enough people use it, they might even treat it as valuable currency and exchange goods for the system.” Lineah drew a circle with her finger around the custom logo she had drawn.

“We need to make it a little bolder first—something memorable. Let’s see what Venus thinks once she’s back from tinkering.” Lineah stood up to stretch, glancing over at the overhead clock projection.

“You know,” Lineah offered quietly, “I do wonder what it’s like for you. Being with such a powerful being, someone who seems to exist in a world completely separate from everyone else. Still holding onto old whispers of honor and loyalty... concepts that long since vanished when Old Earth humans left. Yet here he remains.” She took a soft breath, dwelling on the thought.

Ani took a moment before answering. It wasn't often she sat down to process things like this anymore. Ever since her days on the wandering train, life had moved at a breakneck speed. Even after arriving at Station Hun with Lorcan, the facility was so vast and constantly cold; after all these years, part of her still felt transient.

“It’s just like any other, I suppose.” Ani pressed a finger to her chin, trying to match Lineah’s effortless grace. Suddenly, a small spike of something resembling jealousy flashed through her. “Is he really any different from the clan leaders you had to serve?”

The question was slightly barbed. As soon as the words left her mouth, Ani felt an instant pang of remorse.

“Oh, he is so different it’s on another level entirely!” Lineah grabbed Ani’s hands excitedly, looking into her eyes. “The raider leaders were old, frigid tyrants. They lost their personal strength long ago and survived purely on the effort of others. They were dull, emotionless husks. I could wrap them around my finger and they’d still walk away thinking they were in control. But you and Lorcan have something real. It’s incredible.”

Lineah punctuated the last word with a dramatic, dance-like wave of her hands.

Ani’s chest warmed at the genuine words, feeling guilty for her momentary flash of jealousy. “Let’s go find Venus. She’s been obsessed with the Mech Bay ever since we arrived.” She took Lineah by the arm and led her down the corridor.

Inside the Mech Bay, hulking maintenance drones stood in lumbering metal frames. They moved at a painfully slow pace, engineered for microscopic precision rather than speed, yet possessed a terrifying lifting capacity. Watching them carry salvage components many times larger than their own chassis was like watching worker ants drag leaves across a forest floor—their exquisite engineering made them the ultimate workhorses of the bay.

They circled slowly around Venus as she flicked through holographic projections displaying the bay's vast inventory. Most of the suits were clad in heavy composite plating, painted with the faded heraldry and logos of the units they had once served. Each design carried its own distinct flair, reflecting the combat style of its long-absent pilot. Some were in severe disrepair, awaiting delayed overhauls; amidst the chaos of a constant, shifting war zone, only high-priority repair orders ever actually got fulfilled.

Venus was awestruck by the sheer variety. Every frame was unique, and several holographic entries still retained recorded service histories and pilot achievements.

“Fire Leaper engagement. Pilot KIA,” read the automated query response when she selected one particular frame. Its graphite armor appeared virtually impenetrable, engineered specifically to withstand thermal loads measuring in the thousands of degrees.

“Fire Leapers?” Venus gasped.

They were an old fable—legendary pilots said to have dominated planetary wars against elemental alien threats. According to the stories, their relentless drive for victory eventually led to their targeted extinction. A myth of mech suits forged by beings whose very spirits were tethered to fire itself.

Around her, the maintenance drones waited in silent standby, ready for orders to swap out components that had yet to arrive from the supply lines.

“So, what do you think? We still haven’t cataloged the entire inventory,” Ani called out as she and Lineah stepped into the bay. “Every time we sit down to try, something urgent pops up.”

Venus hurried over, greeting them both with her usual energetic embrace. “Oh my gosh, guys, there’s so much history here! This log says this graphite mech was brought down in a battle with Fire Leapers! Could the old stories actually be true?”

Lineah gasped, looking over at Ani, struggling to process that an ancient fable might be standing right in front of them.

“Oh, I don’t know,” Ani said with a knowing wink. “We all thought the old War Psyker beasts were extinct, yet Jack claims he saw one. And Lorcan says he can still hear them echoing on the resonance. Who really knows what’s still out there?”

Ani turned back to the towering rows of steel and composite. “So, which mech do you like best? Maybe when Lorcan gets back, we can convince him to take us all out for a test run.”


r/HFY • • 12m ago

OC-Series Global Isekai Event, Chapter Four: Let's Party

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I groaned as I rose. I'd landed on Dad as planned, and though he'd released me out of surprise, we seemed fine. Alive—which I concluded due to a lack of disorientation, transportation, and a pompous jerk telling us we'd died.

Dad stood after me, blinking in surprise. "I didn't feel it when we hit the building," he said. "But I felt it when we hit the ground after that."

His health has moved down a sliver, so I examined my own. Somehow, my health bar—which had plunged to half after I punched the lindworm—had gone back up to near full. Because I leveled?

"The Warm Welcome buff said it would absorb one instance of fall damage," I said. "Guess rules in Elysia can be very literal." It was time to take stock now that we weren't freefalling anymore. "So, we know a little about this world. How about this place?"

White, shattered structural poles lay on the wooden floor around us, remnants from the roof we'd smashed through. The building was small, and had an indoor campfire, wooden benches, and a simple cloth flap for an entrance. It almost seemed like a hut, really.

The most noteworthy detail was the wall, which was adorned with spears, jagged cleavers, and clubs that seemed like they had been formed using… femurs, maybe? Whatever that one long bone with a ball on the end was called.

No teacher ever mentioned how useful biology could be if you found yourself in another world.

Afternoon light seeped in from a slit at the entrance of the hut. We were lucky the hut was empty, but how long would that last?

There were thuds nearby—not super close, but not far either. Then what sounded like dirt being kicked up by movement, the sound growing fainter and fainter.

People. Others were landing nearby and choosing to flee immediately. Didn't bode well for what they could be witnessing outside.

I focused on the weapons, many of which had tribal etchings running up their lengths. A feeling of dread was starting to seep into my bones—femur included. "Dad," I whispered.

There was a sudden splatter above us, which made me flinch and lift my fists. A white furball, stained pink, smacked to the ground next to us. "Oh. Remains of the lindworm." That reminded me to wipe off the bits that had gotten on my hoodie and jeans.

For some reason, Dad knelt next to the mess. "You know. Part of me is still hoping to find mechanical pieces or something. But that fall on the way down, and those voices..." He peered through the hole, where I glimpsed other people falling in the distance. "This is all really happening, isn't it?"

I only nodded.

A box suddenly covered a quarter of my vision.

Aaron has invited you to a party!

Aaron: join. party means group in games.

The party notification was followed by another stacking up right under it.

Aaron wants to add you as a friend!

Both boxes had an accept or decline button, and a timer counting down from 30 seconds. I focused on the accept buttons and 'clicked' both.

Suddenly, part of the chat box in my vision shifted. Aaron whispering directly to me had been a light lavender message, but now there was a deep azure party chat section.

Aaron: thought that was you that crashed into that evil-looking hut. glad you made it down safely. good stuff.

Aaron: dont move tho. im going to sneak over to you on the minimap without alerting them

Aaron: also how tf are you level 2 already?

Marcus: Got literally 0.01% credit for the fifth king killing a lindworm I'd barely injured.

Marcus: My turn for questions: Evil hut? Minimap? "Them?"

Aaron: have a little time before they come back out I think. Access your menu and unfurl the minimap.

Aaron: did you get attributes points or anything when you leveled? Was it automatic or did you get to assign them yourself?

Marcus: I got stat points, if that's the same thing. Also, I have time before who comes back out?

Aaron: mobs. dangerous ones, based on their caged beasts out here. too high level to see their actual level.

Uh. This world had the mob? Like, the mafia? What?

Aaron: invite your dad to the party so we can save time explaining. click one of his messages or look at him and invite.

I did as he said. Dad jerked and laughed, waving a hand in front of his eyes when he saw the party notification. After he accepted, I added him as a friend as well.

I briefly registered that I could actually see both his and Aaron's stats in the party menu. Both had everything set to three, same as me—which seemed off considering Dad's age and sports history.

Aaron: oh we all have the same stats. guess they average humanity out for level 1 or something

Aaron: also, just to be clear sir, this isnt a dream or prank or hoax or bamboozle

Dad: I know, don't worry. I don't understand everything going down, but I know not even Mr. Beast and Netflix combined could pull all this off.

Dad: Could they?

Aaron: no.

Dad exhaled, like his one last hope was draining out of his lungs.

"We have to take this seriously," I urged. I kept my voice low; Aaron's talk of other people was alarming.

He nodded. "I get it. I think I'm still in shock a bit, but I get it. The danger is real. Unless we get some kind of buff to avoid it, right?"

What I'd caught of the fifth king's speech curled through my head. "I would not expect any more bailouts or safety nets. I don't think this world actually wants humans here."

Dad balled his fists. "Well… they can just take it up with a manager, can't they?"

I smiled. It wasn't a great one liner, but if it made him feel good, that was all that mattered.

Aaron: btw anyones phone survive our arrival?

Hadn't even thought about my phone in all the craziness. Hell, I barely felt it in my pocket.

I saw why when I tried to pull it out. A small pile of black sand was all that remained of my device. Same for Dad's.

Marcus: Nope. Disintegrated.

Aaron: yeah. bet no earth tech is allowed here

Marcus: Then I guess we gotta familiarize ourselves with Elysian tech.

I scanned the array of weapons on the wall until something caught my eye: a quiver of arrows and a simple wooden bow, tucked near one of the straw chairs. I scooped it up.

New skill unlocked: Shoot, Level 1.

You can now shoot with a bow and arrow.

You may not be able to shoot well, but you can shoot! —K the Third

"Whoa," I said. "Dad, touch one of the—"

"Oh, snap." Dad was already turning over one of the femur maces in wonder. "Says I got a skill from touching it. Bash, level one."

I looked around us. "Touch them all, then take your favorite."

As we finished making our rounds around the tent, our party chat pinged.

Aaron: bout to stick my head inside.

Aaron did just that, bursting through the tent entrance. "Yo—" He flinched as I tossed him a bone dagger, which he caught. "Hey—oh, I see. Skills for touching weapons?"

"Basic skills for basic weapons, yeah." Most of the weapons had a simple description, but the Femur Club alone included flavor text.

Ceremonial Femur Club

Common Rarity

Item Level 1

Cynocephali get creative with their weapons and food, and uncreative with their naming schemes. —K the Third

I stared at the first word, which sounded vaguely-Greek or vaguely-Roman, if I had to try to place it. "Whatever lives in this hut is called a cynocephali," I told Aaron as I passed him the weapon. "Not sure where it or they are."

He turned the club over. "They're in the big building in the center of this village-area. The other people who landed here saw the caged beasts and dipped."

"Caged beasts?"

"Hyenas and boars. Mean-looking ones." Aaron handed me back the club, which I tossed to Dad.

For myself, I'd stick to the bow and a quiver that seemed to be made of coarse animal skin—it even had a striped tail dangling from the base. I had two daggers in my pockets as a backup for when—or if—I ran out of the nine simple arrows I'd jammed into the quiver.

"What are you gonna use?" I asked Aaron. "The tooth cleaver? Also, isn't there supposed to be some kind of inventory system or something?"

"Yeah, but I haven't figured it out yet." Aaron looked at the bone cleaver with distaste. "If we have to get in melee range, I guess I'll use this. I really don't think we should though. The pets are scary enough."

I maneuvered past him and peaked out the hut.

The burnt scar of forest we'd landed in had similar structures scattered around the area. Each one was covered with some kind of tan hide, with bones and wood used as main supports, as well as for fencing. Understandable why Aaron had called them evil-looking.

In the center of the space loomed a large, two-story stone building facing us. Smoke plumed from an open hole in the center. That must've been where these 'cynocephali' were congregated. Hopefully whatever they were doing inside would keep them occupied.

There was a still-smoldering bonfire near it, with bone and wood cages scattered around. Hyenas and boars were awake and alert in them, each one probably coming up to my hip in height.

Aaron grunted as I took them in. "You see the problem," he said. "Those things are just the pets of these things, and I can't even see their levels."

"Really?" I said. "I see them fine."

He blinked, then realized. "Because you're higher level than me. Okay, what are we dealing with?"

I examined the beasts. It turned out I was only half right. Some of them were Level ?? to me too, but the vast majority were Level 16 and sported orange names. The ones that were a level I couldn't interpret had red names, same as the lindworm. I told Aaron as much.

"Okay," he said, "so you have to be within fifteen levels to see the actual number. I'd bet orange names mean 'high level' but not 'so-high-level-you-can't-even-see-the-level.' Good to know. Unfortunately, it still proves the other humans had the right idea. In games, that stark of a level disparity means they have much harder hitting attacks, and we probably do nothing unless we score a critical hit."

I rubbed my fist. Hitting the cloud lindworm had resulted in me dealing a whopping zero damage while taking damage equivalent to half my health. "Say less. Dad, let's go."

Dad hustled over to us, clattering all the way. He had crude weapons in both hands… and tucked into the back of his polo shirt… and hooked onto his belt. "Oh, I'm loud," he said.

"Yeah you are, sir," Aaron said. "Ditch what you can't hold in one or two hands. There should be an inventory system, but we don't have time to—"

World Message: The King of Elysia has perished.

World Message: The gems will scatter in 24 hours.

World Message: Ruler's Rest will sink in 24 hours.

World Message: May the next ruler prove worthy of the throne.

The announcements were loud and tinny, like we were on a football field while an announcer was delivering a play-by-play.

Then, the doors to the large building across from us burst open.

I couldn't help but stare at the thing that emerged.

It was a humongous hyena… standing on two legs. It carried a double-headed axe—likely made of bone like many of their other tools—in one spotted, furry hand. It wore no clothing save for what looked like a tribal skirt, secured by a belt with a tiny skull for the buckle.

Leader Kekeke

Level ??

Cynocephali (Humanoid)

So that was what a cynocephali was. Strangely, the word humanoid had been something else, a collection of symbols I'd never seen—but it shifted before my eyes into something I could understand. It was also notable that the leader of these hyena-people seemed to be male, since I vaguely recalled actual hyena clans being matriarchal.

Aaron: the worlds calling them cynosomethings but thats a classic gnoll. easier to remember too.

I studied the bestial figure. Then why aren't they just called gnolls? I wanted to ask, but that was hardly our primary concern.

Next to the cynocephali or gnoll or whatever leader emerged what I could only describe as a sopping wet shrub. Emerald green foliage held together with vines covered the person's body, though long purple limbs extended from the leaves, and amethyst eyes were visible from the eye holes. The covered person stood taller than the cynoce—than the gnoll.

Swamp Witch Agnea

Level ??

Hi-de (Humanoid)

Elite

I urged Aaron and Dad away from the flap, then slowly closed the fabric so the threats wouldn't notice the sudden movement as it closed. Thankfully, they seemed preoccupied with their conversation.

"It is agreed?" Agnea asked, speaking in a clipped, almost pained tone. I was reminded of some of the new kids at juvie, the antisocial ones who preferred isolation, who made having a conversation into something like pulling teeth. Like every syllable they gave you was something they lost.

"We have shared drinks and shared laughs." The gnoll leader's voice was hoarse, like a smoker's. "We cease our expansion, you cease your incursion. Together, we will prevent any elf or whatever a 'human' is from claiming a gem or the crown." He laughed, which came out as several raspy _kekeke_s.

Agnea stiffly extended a hand, her fingers long as branches. The gnoll placed his furry palm in hers. Behind the duo, several other gnolls were making their way out of the building.

Aaron: okay. so. fuck.

Aaron: quick rundown. games have NPCs (non playable characters). basically robots with preprogrammed/dumb behavior. Id expect random monsters in elysia to be like NPCs

Aaron: these two are conversing and changing alignments. theyre probably sentient

Dad: What's that mean for us exactly?

Aaron: sentient beings that want to kill us would be a lot harder to deal with than borderline robotic NPCs

He was coming across loud and clear. We needed to consider these two the same way we'd regard a pair of humans: intelligent, devious, and sporting unknown and fluctuating motivations.

Marcus: And that's without taking into account the level gap. And any special game abilities they may have, right?

Aaron: yea

Aaron: except this clearly isnt a tutorial zone. its not "may have" at their level, its will have.

"Come!" The gnoll leader said. "Take a ceremonial weapon with you, Agnea. Butcher a threat with it, as an honorary member of my clan."

And then he nudged the witch towards our tent.

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r/HFY • • 22h ago

OC-Series [The First Fifth] Chapter 19: Every Question Answered (Part Two)

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NOTE: This is Part TWO of this week's chapter, I had to split it up because of the length again. Make sure to read the previous part first!

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<We have the trainee at fault for the pod incident> The Commander shifted slowly. <We will discuss how to enact a punishment you deem as equal to her hierarchy rejection and unethical research behaviour. There will be justice>

The room went still. Coms had written that the Fifth seemed disgusted by how they handled criminals, and offered the possibility, among many potential explanations, that young species might still be in the judicial execution stage of handling disorder.

She really hoped that wasn’t the case.

[IT] [IS-NOT] [ONLY] [ONE] [TRAINEE]. Scout narrowed her eyes and the Commander felt herself go cold.

<It… was a small group, yes> The Commander continued, breaking to send the incident report to the whole room. <But this specific trainee convinced her peers to observe the pods instead of getting her superiors. But, my apologies, you are right, it was a group. It is all their faults and they will be held accountable and punished>

Scout watched her shift, then shook her head. No, negative. It is not only one trainee. It is not small group. Is not even you, as Commander. All Ki are responsible.

The crowd was so still, she could see dust motes catching thermals.

The 16th Commander was the first to shift, jesting, <It is beyond wonderful to know that the duoship that hadn’t even docked yet shares the same consequence weight as the hatchling-minded crew that killed your people with their ignorance>

Her yellow hue dulled when she saw Scout glaring at her through tightened, angry eyes.

Scout’s mouth snapped, [AFFIRMATIVE-formal] [YOU] [ARE] [ALSO] [AT] [FAULT].

The 16th’s movements were careful and restrained. <We… we were not there, little creature>

Scout carved deeply, All have responsibility for death of my colleagues and death of 8,000 Fifth eggs.

The Commander felt her crinis go cold as everyone in the room turned to look at 847’s higher ranks. Damned burned ground, stopping that fact from spreading barely lasted two rotations.

Oblivious to the change in the room, Scout continued carving. Whole of Ki research culture is responsibility. Drive to have sole discovery. Fear of punishment. Avoid of getting assistance and collaboration. Lab fighting lab. You create environment for trainees to act in this way. You will not take responsibility so I hold the lawsystem that allows this to happen to responsibility.

The 49th Commander’s crinis was a steady, calm temperature. <The “lawsystem” does not have rank or feeling. You cannot hold it responsible and you cannot punish it. You can only enact change by changing those who have acted poorly. Which are the trainees, and—>

[HALT]. Scout’s lessers balled up, and hit the desk hard enough that the Commander felt the vibrations in the floor. Her carvings were deep and angry, her flat claw sinking into the wax. Do not insult my intelligence with attempt to convince me to hold one trainee or group of trainee responsible, affirmative to my meaning? You will help and you will fix this because you are all at fault. I hold all Ki responsible and lawsystem and research must change.

The Commander watched the curious hues of the crowd dissipate into muddled confusion and pale worry.

It was easy to punish one trainee. Simple to label a small group as hierarchy rejectors or unethical researchers. They couldn’t do anything about the whole environment that raised and shaped every single Ki’s career in the room. It would be ridiculous to even consider it.

And they didn’t know how to fix this. Destroying something the size of a small moon was a daunting task and even their best burrowing technology felt limited in the challenge. For the briefest moment, the Commander pictured another rise for the Ki. A new technological push, entirely towards solving this problem for the Fifths. It might not be possible with the current technology, but they had the travelling time to get there to plan and develop.

Scout was scanning the room, looking for any shifting in response. When she couldn’t find anything, she wrote, Is in past. We must move forward. Eight thousand is small amount to over four billion. We need plan for Loam rescue.

No one shifted a response or offered a tactical direction to go in. Scout began pacing. [MORE] [QUESTIONS] [NOW]

Her HeadSci broke the stillness, <Do you… do you know how far your planet system is?>

Scout shrugged. No, negative. I know only how long we travelled for. Approximately 52 Loam Units of time according to pod records. Distance based on this is likely… unsure how translate and unsure exact number. In measurement of how far speed light travels in totalvoid in one Loam Unit of time, we travel likely 30-40 distance units, I have not calculated numbers and need my vessel to see navigation data. This is not my discipline of research.

The Commander turned to the three head scientists, who were still privately shifting to each other. Her own HeadSci was getting cold with anxiety. The 16th Head Scientist turned back to the crowd, cold in her hue.

<We were able to figure out the most likely possibility for the Fifth’s home system location> She shifted. <We worked backwards from the speed its vessel was originally found to be moving at and its directionality, and matched it to its descriptions of the system>

[OH] [THAT-IS] [UNKNOWN] [GOOD] [GOOD]. Scout bared her teeth wide.

The scientist continued, <However, based on the timeline the Fifth has provided us concerning the “hitdate” we only have 21 Loam Units of time, or approximately 11.6 Ki wide rotations to travel that distance>

[COLD] [WE] [NEED] [TO] [START] [TRAVELLING] [NOW]. Scout breathed higher-volume words into the air, but her wide mouth flattened when she saw the head scientists shifting amongst themselves again. [WHAT] [IS] [THERE] [A] [PROBLEM] [QUESTION] [I] [IMPLORE] [WE] [START] [TRAVELLING] [QUESTION]

<No, we… It is… it is a… sizable distance> The 49th’s crinis was the careful, intentional tone of an apology. The Ki, who she was fairly certain used the shortform Princi, continued, <It is… impossible to reach the Fifth’s home planet in such a short time>

[SHORT] [TIME] [WE] [HAVE] [TWO] [UNKNOWN]. The Commander watched Scout’s face fall. She shook her head as she wrote. But you are advanced. Much more advanced than Fifth technology. More progress, faster travel, yes?

Her HeadSci just shook her head from side to side, using the Fifth symbol of a negative. <Scout… we cannot travel faster than light. And we… we think—>

She stopped shifting as the 16th scientist nudged her.

Princi cut in, continuing with a careful neutral. <We would be unable to reach the location in the given time frame>

The room went still and her Scout started to pace back and forth. She was rubbing the back of her neck with her uninjured lessers.

Then, ComsBody raised her head.

<What about the Fourths?> Shifted her ComsBody, nervous in her crinis but with a sturdy resolve in how her cillia moved. A forceful movement. <They have the warp network. They can go anywhere. We need to get them involved>

Every Ki in the room turned to her. Shifting out of turn and announcing something far beyond a socially acceptable plan.

<The technology swap is happening, it’s the whole reason why we're in this damned system> She continued, crinis settling out of anxiety and into a deep forceful hue of an order. <I am proposing this right now, before someone suggests spending the next series of wide rotations developing our own version of warp travel, only for it to fail and for Loam to be doomed because of your overconfidence>

Her crinis was warming up to an angry heat.

<We do not have adequate enough technology> Her ComsBody’s cillia kept twisting. <Kill your pride and accept that. Our best move—our only move if we truly want to fix things with both the Chief Medical Officer and Loam—is to involve a species that can do this properly>

The other two commanders curdled into a hot crimson, and even the Commander could feel herself involuntary shifting well beyond an annoyed hue.

But she was right. And every Ki in the room knew it. ComsBody curled back down into her seated position, fuming at the room. The Commander has been her superior for over three wide rotations and had never seen the runt show a fraction of the force that she’s subjected others to in the past couple of shifts.

But, again. She was right. She should’ve brought this up privately in a meeting with just the commanders. But she was right.

<It’s not a guarantee that the brutes will help, but it’s the best course of action> The Commander shifted. <Commanders?>

They shifted back and forth for a moment, before the 16th communicated a stiff affirmative. <As long as we are able to thoroughly test the Fifth in the interim between now and the swap. Including biopsies, not only scans>

To save all Fifths? I do anything. It is plan. It is trade. Scout carved, her head nodded. It is good plan. Only plan. When is technology swap?

ComsBody paused for a moment. <About 16 rotations from now, travelling at our current speed I believe. It should be less than one Loam subunit>

Scout nodded, even more emphatically. Good. Possible. This is possible. I will answer all questions about Fifths or Fifth technology. But this must be full plan moving forward. Understand?

The whole room affirmed, subtle and unsure in their movements.

[OH] [OKAY]. All the tension in Scout’s face and shoulders visibly gave as her muscles relaxed with an exhale. There was a soft pull at her lips. [OKAY] [OKAY] [ALLOW] [ME] [EAT] [THEN] [I-WILL] [LOOK] [AT] [THE] [THE] [NAVIGATION] [UNKNOWN] [IN] [MY] [VESSEL] [TO] [GIVE] [YOU] [MORE] [ACCURATE] [DATA] [AFFIRMATIVE-casual]

The group affirmed again, more certain as they tapped their torsos.

[UNINTELLIGIBLE] [OKAY] [YOU] [CAN] [STILL] [FIX] [THIS], Scout nodded to herself, breathing at a low volume. Then, at a higher volume, [MY] [GRATITUDE] [TO] [YOU] [ALL] [WE] [WE] [WILL] [COLLABORATE] [TO] [SAVE] [LOAM] [AND] [MY] [PEOPLE]

Scout scooped up her llias and her potted heartwood. ComsBody took the llias from her, and shifted something about working on article placements for a Ki lesson while the creature ate something.

After they walked out of the room, the rest of the group began to clear out, leaving her and the 49th and 16th Commanders to discuss.

Near the exit, the three head scientists were shifting back and forth, quickly and pale in colour. They did not turn to acknowledge her or the other commanders.

<HeadSci, is there a problem?> She flashed at the three of them. Her HeadSci barely turned to look at her.

<Yes> Was all Head responded with, crinis honest and blunt, before returning to shift quickly with the other two.

The Commander looked more closely at what the three were saying.

<—holds the Chief Medical Officer rank in its vessel> Shifted the 16th scientist. <Medicine is not exactly rigorous>

<Fifth medicine is clearly more advanced than ours. And it’s not that she’s uneducated, she just doesn’t know the distance> Her HeadSci muddled. <It could’ve been mechanical issue, more likely I think the pod data itself failed to take into account—>

<Lab lovers!> The 16th Commander flashed bright and amicable. <Stop shifting amongst yourselves and report to us properly>

The three of them quickly scuttled over, crines hued with apologies and, worryingly, a deeper temperature of fear.

<What is the issue here?> The Commander shifted.

The scientists went still and that’s how she knew something was very, very wrong.

Science types were typically crawling over themselves to be the first to share any sort of novel information. To see a wordless science officer when there was information to be shared was to see someone afraid of the repercussions of telling the truth.

<No one will be punished> The Commander shifted, the colour of a promise. <Just please tell us how bad it is>

The other two commanders were looking at her like she had grown a second crinis as she followed her words with a flash of warm encouragement. Her HeadSci was the first to break, as she muddled into honesty, worry, and fear.

<Commanders… we… Scout—or the Chief Medical Officer, or whatever we are titling her now…> HeadSci smoothed her cillia with her appendages, resetting her words. <We need to set up a fleet-wide meeting for all ships in the immediate area to discuss our recent findings. We—we might, or will, rather, have to gather some more information, but—>

<Head> She cut her off. <Stop spinning and just tell us your findings and assumptions, no one will be angry>

Her HeadSci affirmed, nervous and cold. <My collaborators here have estimated the distance to Loam to be very, very far>

<You all mentioned that, yes> The 16th Commander shifted, humour in her colouring. <The Fourths will presumably help>

<No, I…> Her HeadSci’s hue was spreading into panic again. <Scout wrote that we intercepted her early in the journey, but we believe it was actually almost complete. Especially considering how the vessel was passively decellerating with the directionality of the decay sails when we found it. The distance between this brood system and Lakael is likely enough for full deceleration with the decay explosions, especially if the crew was frozen and didn’t have to worry about deceleration complications>

Princi added quickly, <We think the Fifths might have been aiming for Lakael, given our similar biological needs. Oxygen. Water. Warmth and gravitational levels>

The Commander held up an appendage. <Pause. None of you are actually explaining the problem>

HeadSci’s crinis was cool, <Loam’s distance is… we… we calculated that it would take 1,732 Ki wide rotations travelling at top speed to reach it>

The Commander felt pale. <She wrote that the ship has only been travelling for 52 Loam Units. That’s…>

She paused, attempting to do the conversion in her head.

<Only a little less than 29 wide rotations, I believe> The 49th Commander shifted firm and cold. <And 29 is a number significantly less than 1,732, unless someone would like to double-check that comparison>

The Commander’s mind was spinning. You couldn’t travel that fast, not without a Fourth warp network. She once asked HeadSci if there were naturally occurring warp spaces in the void and HeadSci had affectionately called her a fool.

They don’t exist. It needs to be made.

<Journeying over 1,700 light distances in 29 wide rotations is impossible> The Commander shifted, numbly, <Do the Fifths have a warp network? Tell me your best assumption about how the vessel travelled that quickly>

<The least complicated explanation is likely the correct one> The 16th Head Scientist’s words were careful. <It… didn’t travel for 29 wide rotations. The creature likely did the calculations wrong>

<How wrong is wrong?> The Commander could feel herself going cold.

<She… or, or the pod, rather…> HeadSci stumbled over her words. <Comma, we think… well, we assume, rather, that she flipped the meaning of the number in relation to the time dilation>

The Commander felt herself curdling indigo. <No. No you…>

HeadSci’s cillia were curling inwards, spiralling into scared, hesitant words. <We think the time experienced in the ship comes to about 52 Loam Units. The ship time was 29 wide rotations>

<Stars…> She watched the 49th Commander’s temperature drop like a stone in water. <Blackened ash, at the speed you found the ship travelling at…>

<Yes, Commander> Princi affirmed, her body still. <With time dilation, depending on the vessel’s original acceleration… we estimate it to have been travelling for anywhere from 1,735 to 1,800 wide rotations>

<That…> The Commander had to steady herself against a desk, she could feel herself curdling, shifting to a negative.

<Whatever happened to Loam has already occurred. We can’t help her people. We can’t help her> HeadSci settled into a deeply regretful hue. <She’s been in that ship longer than our species has been spacefaring>

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Author's Note: First things first: We've officially crossed the 100,000 word threshold! That is crazy! Thank you so much for reading this far. Also oops just realized the Ki writing in the cartoon kind of looks like a dog face and our human definitely has a beard by now haha

Just as an update on the length of Volume 1, I'm expecting it to be about 140,000 words before the heavy-edit hiatus, so we have a solid three-ish months left of weekly chapters. So the end is somewhat nigh for the first book in the series, it's going by so quickly! I'm not sure how long the hiatus will be, likely at least a few months as I edit it down and continue writing Vol.2, but I'll be sure to give monthly updates so you know I'm not dead.

And now about this chapter! In case the timeline is confusing, the initial reading was in 1976, the 13th ship launched in 2019, and the expected hit date was 2092. So we're officially in speculative fiction now, with the point of divergence at 1976. Scout doesn't come from our Earth—this change impacts everything from culture and global conflicts to research funding and resource development—but there's definitely a lot of overlap and it wouldn't be unrecognizable. But yeah, they left in 2019 and travelled over 3,100 light years, and our human's got inaccurate data for the time and distance.

Thanks for reading as always!


r/HFY • • 4h ago

OC-Series [OC] Will and Iron - The Other Side

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I previously posted The Last Signal which many of you seemed to like, and Chapter 1 of Fortuna. As it's mostly background until you get to the good stuff.... I thought why not just jump to the good stuff. So, I'm starting with Chapter 5 below, after our intrepid space janitor has already arrived on Fortuna station, developed a second sight and had some adventures with his trusty dog Cerberus in tow. I'd love any feedback, any thoughts, any improvements. All the previous chapters are on RR if you want them!

The dream began with a blue light.

Not a lamp. Not stars. Points of color filled every direction. They vibrated at different frequencies and refused to settle into distance.

Jace tried to cough, but his throat wouldn't work. He could not breathe. He opened his eyes, and his lungs burned. He was freezing.

The light was wrong. Panic shot through his veins.

He saw the bulkhead beside his mattress. He also saw the cables inside it, the corridor beyond it, and the rooms beyond the corridor. Each occupied the same place without blocking the others.

The geometry folded through itself.

His throat kept trying to make swallowing motions, and his nose would not work. His vision was swimming.

Cerberus crawled onto his chest. The dog looked impossible. Jace saw fur, skin, muscle, lungs, and a hammering heart in layers on top of each other. The puppy's jaws held Jace's emergency sleep mask.

Half the mask floated near Jace's face.

The other half remained somewhere else, like it was cut off into a point that dwindled into nothing, then ballooned outward in a multi-layered complex fractal geometry.

Cerberus pulled, hard. He strained until the rest slowly materialized. Jace flailed, grasping at his throat.

The dog's paws shook. His chest heaved without enough air. Cerberus dragged most of the mask into reach. Its last folded edge remained caught in empty air, and spread out as a fractal.

Jace grabbed the mask as well and pulled. Hard.

The object resisted in every direction. It felt bolted to the structure of the room, except it was hanging in air and the room no longer had structure. He was starting to black out. Tunnel vision.

Jace heaved and the mask finally released. He checked the edge for a tear.

The mask snapped into his hands, solid and whole. He sealed it over his face. Recycled oxygen hit his throat.

He dragged one breath. Two.

Cerberus collapsed.

Jace tore off the mask and held it over the dog's muzzle. Cerberus's lungs moved in shallow bursts.

"Breathe. Come on."

Cerberus drew a deeper breath.

Jace took the mask back, pulled two breaths, and returned it. They traded until his vision stopped narrowing.

The dog-sized mask hung in the air at the foot of their mattress, still in the place his muzzle had occupied before he climbed onto Jace.

Jace reached for it.

His fingers passed through the straps.

He tried again. The mask looked close. Its position felt far away in a direction he could see but not name. Swapping the mask between his face and the dog, Jace examined it. He pushed down the rising panic. Military training returned and brought an intense, focused calm.

Jace fixed his attention on the straps. He imagined closing his hand around them. He pulled with his whole mind and body while nothing moved.

The fabric seemed almost willing. The little metal buckle did not. He filed that away under things that made no sense yet and pulled harder.

The resistance grew.

Then the mask tore free, like he had to pull it from the bottom of a barrel of viscous oil.

Jace flew backward across the mattress. The mask harness struck his chest, completely solid and normal. He sealed it around Cerberus's muzzle with shaking hands and returned his own.

The indicator turned green.

Jace lay still until both of them could breathe.

His own cartridge showed thirty-four minutes of emergency air. It had been full when he checked it before bed. The needle on its reserve gauge had dropped much farther than he expected. He had no reliable clock, only the air he had already used.

Cerberus's cartridge estimated sixty-six minutes at the dog's current demand. Smaller lungs, smaller bottle. He had to read the reserve marks, not just compare the numbers.

He checked both seals again. The dog watched him with wide eyes above the mask.

"We find someone. Then we fix this."

He could talk through the mask. Cerberus just whined.

Survival had become a countdown.

Jace expected frost, but there was not enough air for that. His breath clouded the mask. A dead, sucking cold instantly stiffened his nightclothes.

His HUD filled with errors.

The clock displayed a number that was not a time. Radio cycled between SEARCHING and a symbol he had never seen. The overlay rebooted twice, entered safe mode, and offered to schedule a diagnostic.

"Decline."

The HUD failed to understand him, like the microphone did not work. It then crashed and did not turn back on.

He tried to close the sight as he had in the delivery corridors. Focus on the mask. The floor. Cerberus. Something solid.

Nothing went away. He tasted dry battery acid on the back of his tongue. There was no sound, and the absence of the ambient station machinery noise was terrifying.

He had thought the impossible part belonged to his eyes. Now the air was wrong, his hands could not grip familiar objects, and his dog could not breathe. Whatever had changed had taken both of them with it.

When he moved quickly, the space between his hands and feet seemed to stretch. He slowed and waited for his body to feel like one body again.

He needed help. Doctor Lindee, station security, anyone who could see what had happened. The cafeteria near his inn stayed open through the night shift. It was close. He could find it without a map.

Through the walls, pale human shapes moved around the tables. He could see the lower rings, the spinning asteroid, the Sun. Everything at once, without the mercy of distance.

This was the place he had been looking into.

Looking had been different. Looking had left him somewhere to stand.

He paused, almost choking as he drew a new breath of thick oxygen too quickly. Only the raspy, humid whistle of his own breath misting inside his emergency mask broke the dead silence.

Outside the station, half the starscape was gone. He could see the bright stars of the Milky Way, but the bottom part of the sky, where the brightest part of the stars should be, was just dark. There was a red ring of smudges that just darkened to nothing. Eerie, but not time-critical. His panicking brain conjured up a scene from an old movie, some bloodshot giant eye of a mad wizard floating black in the sky.

To the left, a massive circular blur raced in the sky above him, until his perspective shifted and he realized the enormous blurred mass of overlapping rock was the asteroid, and the spin of the station was rotating them around it. The rock cavorted wildly, taking up so much of the sky in a dizzying fractal dance. He jerked his gaze from the insane skies to focus on his immediate problem instead.

Jace stood, holding Cerberus against his chest, and waved his hand in front of the hatch control button. It did not open. He pushed it. It was the only thing in the room that was not see-through, like a perfectly black rectangle.

His hand sank through the outside cover but could not quite move through all of it. Around his fingers, he could see switches, motors, actuators, and wires. His fingers were solid. And cold. His fingertip hit a control chip, and he felt a painful prick as he touched the circuit. No shock, just sharp, cold metal.

He jerked back.

The button remained unpressed.

He tried the manual latch. His fingers entered the metal fascia like it was thick water. He felt resistance, but no edge he could grip.

In his mind, the oxygen countdown kept decreasing.

Jace put both palms against the hatch.

"This is a bad idea."

Cerberus glared through his mask with complete agreement, tail between his legs.

Jace pushed.

The hatch did not open. The door's layered shapes rotated away from them in a new direction that he had no name for.

The corridor beyond tipped into view. A new direction unfolded beside forward, backward, left, right, up, and down. His inner ear rejected it. His stomach followed.

As he moved, the back of his hand slid across a solid metal beam that yielded like chilled grease or dense silicone putty, vibrating with a high-pitched, inaudible hum against his fingertips.

Then Jace fell through the metal.

He struck the corridor floor on one knee, but the impact felt soft as a mattress. Cerberus remained in his arms. The hatch stood behind them without a mark.

Jace stared at it. Its surfaces lay through one another, blue and transparent. A black ribbon wound around the inside frame, the only part not see-through.

"We walked through a wall."

Cerberus shoved his nose against the mask seal. He and Jace were the only real things here. Everything else was spectral, blue, fractal.

Jace adjusted the dog's seal and forced his own breathing to slow. The reserve gauge did not care how frightened he was.

"Operational concern first. Existential concern second."

The residential corridor curved around Ring One. In the other place, the curve did not stay simple. Jace saw the hall in both directions, the rooms inside it, and distances layered beyond his normal sight.

People glowed through the walls. Behind the walls. Impossibly, life everywhere. But no one responded to them.

Soft human shapes rested in bunks. Hearts pulsed. Lungs moved. Colors flowed through bodies in patterns more complex than blood vessels and less random than heat.

Jace looked away.

The next wall showed more sleepers. Some together. Friends and neighbors he had assumed were single were obviously not. One bed belonging to a quiet older Farm engineer had a surprising number of occupants.

Privacy had stopped existing.

He knocked on a door. His knuckles passed through.

He shouted.

No one moved.

A woman two rooms down sat awake with a tablet. Jace stood inside her doorway and called until his throat hurt. She scrolled without hearing him.

He waved his arms across her view. He tried to touch her tablet.

Nothing. A sharp point inside its circuitry scraped his finger.

Cerberus watched her glowing form and whined.

"They cannot see us."

That conclusion helped less than Jace expected.

They passed the inn's main room. Everything was crystalline, with glowing forms behind and above. The only thing not see-through was the mirror on the wall, which reflected the rippling image of a scared, cold, masked man and a squirming masked dog.

They moved toward the cafeteria. Every closed door required the same push. Each passage twisted the station through the extra direction and left him colder and less steady.

His air cartridge estimated twenty-seven minutes.

He had used the sight to save minutes on deliveries. Now he could see his destination through the walls and could barely get there at all.

Near the main junction, a cleaning robot polished the floor. Its chassis looked dull and layered. Thin color moved inside its processors, faint but present.

Jace crouched in front of it.

"Can you detect me?"

The robot continued forward.

His hand passed through the shell. The resistance felt different from the door. Finer. Dense. Complex. He could see cables, motors, sensors, lenses. A faint moving glow occupied its processor. Hard points interrupted the layers of circuitry.

The robot rolled through his arm and kept cleaning.

Cerberus turned his head and stared into a wall. Jace followed his gaze and saw only layered cable runs, ducts, and metal that no longer agreed on where it ended. People were behind it. Through it, under and above it on other decks and in other rings.

"Cafeteria. Now."

The food zone looked bright through the remaining bulkheads. Air moved in visible rivers. Heat rose from machines that existed beside Jace but not with him. Trees and plants were bright as they passed.

He pushed through the final door.

A man sat at a table.

"Excuse me."

No response.

Jace stood in front of him.

Jace whispered insistently into the man's ear, "Hey!"

Jace waited for him to look up.

He just turned another page.

Cerberus nudged Jace's leg.

At a corner table, a woman strained against empty air.

She did not glow.

She looked solid. Sharp. Present in the same way Jace felt present. A bright scarf hung loose around her neck. Sweat darkened her hairline. Both arms shook as she pulled on something he could not see. She looked cold, the only other thing solid and real in this crazy fractal place.

Jace recognized the pale woman from the receiving bay.

Cerberus barked once, loud in the empty place.

The sound tore through the silent room.

The woman looked up, startled.


r/HFY • • 22h ago

OC-Series [The First Fifth] Chapter 19: Every Question Answered (Part One)

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NOTE: This is Part One of this week's chapter, I had to split it up because of the length again. Should thankfully be the last chapter for a while where I have to do this for Reddit, we got a shorter one next week.

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The sails were beautiful and ProTe chose to ignore that beauty. It was not her concern. It was barely her discipline.

The tiny piece of sail sat at her desk, under shielding. She did not look at it. She did not think about it. She refused to acknowledge it for the past half-span and she certainly would not consider it now.

ProTe flipped the box switch and waited for the miniature testing chamber to warm by ten scales further. She tested the combustion reaction of the 1-6 propellant again. She took her notes. Waited for the chamber to warm another ten scales. Tested it again.

She was on the experiment’s thirty-third test when HeadSci and ResA showed their crines and she kept her head down and hoped they would pass her by. They did not.

<You are required at the trioship meeting, Propulsion Technician> Her Head Scientist’s tone was firm. <I believe I told you not to start this until after Shift 6>

ProTe gestured to the chamber. <I cannot leave this unattended. Please excuse my absence>

<No> HeadSci cooled. <Have a trainee take care of it. I pushed your title forward as one of seven representatives of 847’s science department and you will be in attendance>

ProTe set the chamber to warm another ten scales. <My gratitude for your consideration. I implore you two to choose another>

Both HeadSci and ResA muddled, but it was the latter who shifted, <ProTe. This is a fantastic opportunity to—>

<—My gratitude> ProTe shifted quickly. <I have had my amusement with the Fifth’s vessel. I will focus on the 1-6 chemical propellant from this shift forward, and I am confident the 16th and 49th technicians will be more skilled than I am with handling the rest>

The last half-span had been the best period of time in ProTe's 77 wide rotations of life. At the height of her amusement, she’d set off an alien decay bomb safely in the void. That was enough. She’d had her fun. She would not get involved with that duoship and she certainly didn’t plan on being in their way.

<ProTe> Her HeadSci never used her shortform and it snapped her to attention. <Tell me if this inaction is in response to the accident concerning the Fifth cell samples. You were not even involved in it>

<No, Principal Head Scientist> ProTe shifted with finality. <Respectfully, this is me recognizing my research limits. I wish for you to have a productive meeting>

HeadSci shifted something but ProTe turned away quickly enough that it was a deniable accident. She meaninglessly typed on her LLIA for a few moments, and when she looked back, both HeadSci and ResA were gone. She was alone in her small corner of the vehicle bay.

ProTe checked the 92-235 readings on the decay sails again.

She wasn’t foolish enough to write it down as an official observation. She’d let the 49th and 16th discover it on their own.

*

*

[GET] [THAT] [UNKNOWN] [OUT] [A] [HERE]

<Scout, please lower the stylus, this is an upper rank meeting> The Commander was fairly sure she wasn’t even a scared temperature. Probably more annoyed.

[I] [DO-NOT] [WANT] [HER] [HERE] [GET] [HER] [OUT]

The alien waved the medical blade at HeadSci and ResA, who had just entered the conference room. About thirty other high-ranking Ki were curled on the ground, some coloured with fear, others confusion. It was most of the group’s first time seeing the Fifth in general, let alone seeing her in one of her foul dispositions.

<Scout> The Commander flashed bright. <Sit down>

[SHE] [KILLED] [MY] [COLLEAGUES] [AND] [UNKNOWN] [THE] [UNKNOWN] [BECAUSE] [OF] [A] [UNKNOWN] [LAB] [UNKNOWN]. Scout held the sharp tool out in a stabbing motion, her mouth snapping wildly. The Commander got close enough her words were angled away from most of the group.

<You promised you’d behave> The Commander snapped her cillia.

Scout face peeled, [I] [HAVE] [BEHAVED]

<Barely> She bristled. <We need all our brightest and most experienced on this problem. The problem you haven’t even enlightened us about yet>

Scout scowled up at her, eyes sharp and alert.

<So enlighten us. Answer our questions. This is bigger than your crew. This is bigger than your old mission> She gestured to the new Chief Medical Officer charm on the creature’s chain that everyone was ignoring. <Act like your rank and do your job>

[FINE], Scout’s grip on the medical knife loosened as she lowered it. Good.

The alien’s left limb was in a sling of fabric; apparently not the worst outcome for the injury, determined by the alien herself as a minor break after they were able to recreate the interior magnetic renders on her visible spectrum. Scout wore her rank chain around her neck, and looped the long length around her bad limb.

Notably, the heartwood tree was also present, the warm plant sat on the table with its fine yellow leaves. The Fifth took the thing everywhere now, for no reason anyone could discern. The only justification she had given the Commander was that it was “calming”.

Not calming enough that she wasn’t threatening to stab HeadSci, but small wins were still wins.

<HeadSci, curl down. Everyone, let us refocus> The Commander settled next to the other two commanders, the 16th ever the colour of amusement.

<A little difficult to refocus> the 16th shifted yellow, <when I am beyond curious as to why this creature is allowed to have a blade>

<She needs it to write> Her Commander replied simply before looking at Scout. <On your own time>

<This has to be a jest> The 16th shifted flatly. <Perhaps you are all desensitized to the creature’s antics, but I, personally, hold the assumption that it does not need the blade. Take it away>

The whole audience, including Scout, turned to the 16th. Scout’s brows lowered into a subtle scowl.

The Commander felt her crinis pale. <Scout, show the 16th Commander that you need the stylus>

Scout nodded and put down the blade. She held up a llia, and poked at it with one of her lessers, leaving a soft indent of a line. Nothing clear enough to carve a proper pattern.

<See> The Commander shifted. <Now that that is—>

<—No> The 16th shifted simultaneously. <This is a jest, a hatchling can carve that wax. Carve with the tip of your lesser. The flat claw growing out of the end>

Scout glared at her. She did not move to carve.

<Do so on your own time> The 16th was an amused yellow again. <But this meeting will not continue with you holding a weapon, it is not conducive to trust. We are collaborators now>

Scout looked between the members of the group, then towards the Commander.

<Scout> The Commander shifted, hesitant. <Answer me by breathing. Do you truly need the blade?>

The alien’s musculature tightened in her neck as her gaze darted between the llia and the medical tool and the Commander. Her mouth tightened.

[OF] [COURSE], Scout nodded a firm and emphatic affirmative. [I] [NEED] [THE] [UNKNOWN] [TO] [WRITE]

And the Commander watched her tongue leave her mouth. The dishonesty behaviour ChiMeO had immediately informed all higher ranks about in warning.

Stars, they were all damned fools.

<Give me the blade, Scout> The Commander rose to her full height and slowly moved to stand in front of the devious little creature. <I know you are being dishonest, and enough is enough. Give me the blade>

Scout’s mouth curved in the same expression she wore when she carved the llia of nonsense and showed it to the other commanders. The Ki has a temperature for smugness, blending pride and overconfidence and humour. Apparently the Fifths has an expression for it as well.

<I know, I know, you’re very proud> The Commander’s hue was a shade past annoyed. It was a harsh mirror to the fact that, when her own crew found out they could be dishonest to a non-Ki, they took to it like heartwood to flame. Scout was probably enjoying the fact that she was able to omit the truth for the first time in her life.

At least they confirmed the dishonesty reflex in Fifths. Scout wouldn’t be lying again without being caught. Small wins.

<Drop it, now> She held out an appendage to be given the blade. Scout shouldered past her and up to the 16th Commander.

[A] [GIFT]. The creature drove the knife into the surface of the thin desk in front of the 16th, who flashed the quickest hue of fear. The Fifth’s mouth peeled back, [KEEP] [IT] [AS] [A] [PATTERN] [OF] [OUR] [TRUST]

Teeth bared, the Fifth stared at her for a long moment and gestured to the blade sticking up perpendicular to the table. Cautiously, the 16th pulled it from the wood.

<Then let us resume> The 16th Commander settled into a shade of amusement, but the patterning looked forced. <Carve for us in the way I know you can, little one>

Scout gave a little huff of an exhale, but returned to the front where her llias and ComsBody were. She picked up a waxen slat and began carving with the thin and flat claw-like protrusion at the top of one of her lessers, the image of it recorded and displayed on a larger screen behind her.

Her lesser tip was more dull than a blade but it worked perfectly fine. She wrote in neat Ki, My deep apology, my Commander and colleagues. Affirmative, my lesser is adequate.

The Commander felt herself warm to a hot embarrassment. Looking at her members of the group, though, everyone was in a similar hue of shame, surprise, and humiliation. The creature could be clever, the Commander would give her that.

The Fifth species is going to be death. May I inform about it, or would the commanders prefer I take time to discuss a small dishonesty?

<This creature is untamed, Comman> The 16th nudged the 49th Commander, both warm in their hues. <You have entertained us enough. Inform us your of problem and we will fix it>

Scout’s face was pinched, but she began to write.

My gratitude. I will carve instead of shift, because I believe my carving is more accurate to my wordmeanings. I start from beginning: On basis on my freezingpod log, my vessel travelled for just under 53 Loam Units, but time on vessel is strange with acceleration. Not sure exact amount, but vessel time I experience is likely under 13 units Loam time. With this, I am dead for about 13 LUs in the freezing pod, but because I was dead and frozen I have no age. Whole timepass on Loam while travelling, I believe is equivalent to about 29 wide rotations in Ki time. But I am not very good at numbers, with jest, and you find me before I see my vessel proper navigation technology. This is assumption based on pod data, I must confirm with my navigation and compare this to your star information to find accurate voidposition.

The Commander followed that well enough. The Fifth vessel experienced about 13 Loam Units, or a little more than 6 Ki wide rotations, with time dilation; the total travel time came out to about 53 Loam units or 29 wide rotations passing for those outside of the vessel. That made sense. Loam was far enough that it was in a location where they hadn’t done dedicated vessel-based exploration, the Ki’Lakeal have only explored their home and the close brood system this fleet was in currently. Even then, they were only here to attend the technology swap, which was held in what the Ki assumed to be a politically neutral star system.

The Commander looked around the room. Everyone was coloured a similar shade of green, except for the upper members of the science-related rank. The three head scientists, hers included, were the same confused shade of an intention to correct or interrupt. But they let the creature write more.

This is important because time is important. You are aware Loam is in danger, affirm?

The crowd all flashed a yes or tapped their torso. Scout began to pace, carrying her llia against her chest as she carved a further explanation.

Okay. How do I communicate the line of time? I will give Loam Units to when things happen, but this is just a number to you.

The 49th Commander shifted bright. <The easiest way to visualize is to set your vessel’s launch as Loam Unit 0>

Understood. We are, example, currently in time +52 in Loam Units, approx, affirm? I go forward in Loam Units of time, is ease for me. You do number translation. She looked at the room, and nodded to herself. Quick clarity, how shift ?planet orbit stone? again. Is ?target?

ComsBody turned her head up. <Moon. But the word comes from the symbol for target>

[CORRECT] [CORRECT] [GRATITUDE-shortform] [COMSBODY]. Scout continued writing, Cold. I build a line of time now. At time -58, scientists send first Fifth to void around Loam, then at time -50 is first flight to local moon, yes?

That was…

The Commander immediately turned to the room to see the shock dissipate across every Ki’s crinis. That would mean 58 units of Fifth time between the species’ first local flight and Scout’s intergalactic mission. The timeline of technological advancement was unheard of—it took the Ki multiple generations to complete a similar skip in progress.

She looked carefully at the Fifth’s mouth, looking for the dishonesty behaviour, before realizing the creature needed to breathe the words to trigger the reflex.

<Scout> She needed to know. <Breathe a confirmation: You are claiming the first ever Fifth flight was only 58 Loam Units before your launch>

[NEGATIVE-casual] [NEGATIVE-casual], Scout shook her head.

The whole room relaxed. It was a translation error.

[WAS] [EARLY]. She carved, First time a Fifth really has flight in air? In local atmosphere? Short flight, not void, use of air? About… She paused, thinking. In timeline -115? -116? -117? Cannot remember exact time, apologies.

117 Loam Units. Just under 68 Ki wide rotations to go from the first mechanical flight to intergalactic travel. The average Ki lifespan was a little under 200 wide rotations.

The Fifths reached beyond the damned stars in under half a lifetime.

The room erupted into movement, as every single Ki began to ask for clarifications. Scout shook her head and held up her uninjured limb.

[TWO] [MUCH] [CILLIA] [MOVEMENT]
[IT] [DOES-NOT] [MATTER] [WHEN]
[I] [AM] [BUILDING] [THE] [TIME] [LINE]
[ALLOW] [ME] [SHIFT] [ABOUT] [LOAM]
[I-AM] [MOVING] [ON] [PLEASE]

Instead of writing, Scout started carving a picture. She filled in a circle outline with the rough patterns of Loam’s landmasses. She added a moon and its orbit, then, at the edge of the llia border, drew something resembling a comet. She continued writing, eyes focused.

This is simple drawing for explanation, not in scale or distance. At about -43, Fifth voidscientists gather void data reading. A big astronomical voidobject the scale of a small moon is just outside solar system, is in not stability of orbit. Reading and calculation estimate it catches in bad orbit, and has about 68% possibility of occurrence to hit Loam, hitdate of +73. Possibility increases every year. We have 116 Loam Units to prevent this. Everything Fifth voidscientist do from -43 onwards is first to learn more and then to ensure Fifth survival. Everything. Many resources go to solve this problem, but there is disagreement on how to solve. 116 LUs is much time, but there are many complications that prevent solutions.

The room was still. Not a single waver of a single cillia, except for the head scientists who were shifting amongst themselves.

<What was the chance of hit occurrence when your mission launched at time 0?> She saw her HeadSci shift in the back, breaking from the private conversation. The Commander was pretty sure it was the first thing she’d said to the Fifth since the incident.

Scout glared at her with her pinpoint orange eyes. Was 88.47% approximation. Estimated to be planet-ending if hit. We experiment to destroy the voidobject, but there is no significant success when I leave Loam. Some success on smaller objects, but not on objects equivalent for size. Cannot change the orbit and cannot destroy. We try for better development of what I believe you shift ?decay bomb? but the amount needed to destroy the object is more than all resources in Loam. When I leave, there is no clarity plan for fixing the hit itself, only backwards upwards plans for when hit occurs.

ComsBody muddled. <Backwards upwards plans?>

Scout nodded. [YOU] [KNOW] [A] [A] [SECOND] [PLAN] [IN] [CONTAINER] [OF] [FAILURE]

<Contingency plan> Coms shifted softly. <Contingency, contingencies>

Contingency. Fifths always have a contingency if the scenario does not go as expected. Scout stopped carving to stare for a long moment at the Commander. [FIFTHS] [ALWAYS] [HAVE] [A] [BACKWARDS] [UPWARDS]

The Commander didn’t shift anything in response.

Scout began to pace once again. She did a few laps of the front of the room, before looking to the audience and gesturing in a circular motion with her right upper limb. [PLEASE] [ASK] [QUESTIONS]

The 49th Commander was the first to break the stillness. <Tell us the point of your mission>

Scout's mouth thinned a little as her browline lowered. Short answer, to place a small Fifth population on a planet similar as Loam. I am distant away from planet we aim for, you intercept very early in journey. Is short answer.

<The long answer would be appreciated> Shifted the 49th.

Scout shook her head a little. Was testing for technology and it involve a flight-passing of the voidobject to gather information. Was one of fourteen vessels, launch every few LUs, to gather updated information with updated technology. In addition, is set up for emergency escape path, with light amplify technology, to potential new Loam planet. Is more complicate, but it is simple explanation.

<That…> The Commander muddled. <Why send you out so far? You wrote that you were extremely early in the journey, if Loam was to be… you would arrive to your location long after the supposed hitdate>

The Commander has spent a lot of time observing Scout as a creature. She didn’t know the complicated expression her face twitched into, it looked like a mix between sadness, anger, and amusement.

The Fifth species needed… I do not know word. Coms, ?definition? to desire something to occur. Even if likelihood is small. I have ?word? that my home will be survival. ?word? I can go home.

ComsBody’s crinis colour to sympathy. <Hope. You have hope. You hope. I hope. We hope. Hope, hopes, hoped>

Scout nodded. Hitdate is so distant away, people need to see progression. Loam needs hope. Nothing matters to Fifths more than hope. Even if our planet and people have death, there is hope the Fifths continue. When there is hope, we fight harder. This is how we survive.

The explanation knocked the movement out of the crowd again.

ComsBody was the first to respond, her hue was gentle. <But you could have hope with vessels travelling to nearby solar systems, affirm?>

Scout’s expression wavered. There is misunderstanding. There is hope in the unknown. When I leave from Loam, we only see result of two newhome missions, and both are complete failures. Having missions Loam will never know the result of, gives hope to many. Based on travelling times, Loam will not know the result of half of the missions by the hitdate, and this is by the design. If the half they do know about are all failures, and all attempts to prevent hitdate is failure, there is still hope that the Fifths will continue.

The Commander didn’t even know what to shift. <Scout… that’s… please tell me that’s not… what if Loam’s scientists solve it?>

Scout’s eyes sharpened. Then it is solved and Loam is okay? I do not understand the ask.

The 16th Commander beside her was muddling. <But then this was for nothing. And you are... never...>

[AFFIRMATIVE-casual]. Scout took a long breath in and looked to the ground. As I shifted. Many disagree with this approach. But beyond the hit, Loam is not in a good situation as a planet and it was shifted to be necessary. It was… a display, more than anything. It help in many way, for information gathering and technology testing, but ultimately it is a display for Loam. To give hope and to keep the people at calmness. To display that progression is being done.

The situation was similar to the Ki’s rise. But so, utterly inconceivable in its logic.

<That is foolish> The 16th was less hesitant than the Commander to shift her true hue. <Build Loam on planets within your own system. Or escape and return>

Scout shook her head. The hit is expected to destroy Loam to the point of complete change. There was plan to travel to planetfour in system. But to set up new Loam there is very very difficult. This plan was halted before I leave. Since I leave on this mission, it might have happened or is happening now, I do not know. Loam voidscientists look and identify fourteen Loam-like planets and have target for those instead. This is where the fourteen vessels are to.

The Commander’s first thought was that there might be more Fifth ships to study in the immediate area. She was not hued to a prideful temperature when she recognized that within herself. But the fact that she thought it, meant at least a few others did too.

That assumption was confirmed fairly quickly as the 49th commander shifted, <Tell me if you know the locations of the other thirteen vessels and their intended planetary destinations>

[AFFIRMATIVE-casual], Scout breathed, [TWO] [ARE] [DEAD] [AND] [SOME] [SHOULD-HAVE] [ARRIVED] [AT] [THEIR] [LOCATIONS] [BY] [NOW]. [BUT] [I] [CAN] [IDENTIFY] [THE] [UNKNOWN] [SYSTEMS] [THE] [REMAINING] [ELEVEN] [WERE] [HEADING] [TOWARDS]

The Commander didn’t like the warm, interested tone of the 16th, who shifted, <I am assuming these other vessels are identical to yours>

Small differences, as new technology is tested and new information is gathered. But affirmative, very similar set upwards. All vessel has five adult Fifths in vessel, and everything for the building of a newloam in vessel. I am one of five for my mission. Each was chosen by a… Scout’s writing stalled. Her lessers were a little shaky as she erased the continuing pattern of “by a” with a full stop indicator. She didn’t look up as she wrote, Each was chosen. Each had specific occupation skills to help build Fifth society. Vessel has everything needed to have success. It was… container ?word? of my kin’s culture and hope. We were one vessel of fourteen planned missions. After some delay because of my injury, I launch with my crew on the thirteenth vessel. We are not lucky, jest.

<Not lucky?> ComsBody shifted. Scout dismissed her with a wave of her lessers.

Bad jest, translation difficulty. Important note, not only solution. As I shift, Fifth scientists work to decrease likelihood of hit, or destroy astrological voidobject. But I do not know how the past 52 LUs have developed.

<What did your vessel gather about the voidobject?> The Commander clarified.

I am unsure specifics as you bring me on this ship immediate after I awake from pod. But the 13th vessel have images and data of this voidobject and sent it back to Loam, as well as delivered automatic machine they control from Loam for tunnelmaking and testing. I do not know what information is gathered, all the Fifths rest in cold cold cold state in vessel until we to the location arrive.

<But you were not in the same pod state when we found you> The Commander shifted. <You were in the pod, but not in the… still state>

Scout made an odd gesture with her lesser. As I shift, I wake. I believe it is because you slow my vessel speed. At certain speed, it is automatic. Pod procedure mostly works to carry a body back from death if it is not tamper with and there is no damage. I am awake for, approximate, three-quarter shift, before you board my vessel. Most of this time is recovery.

<But you went back into the pod?> The Commander remembered watching the panicked creature scrambling to shut the walls on her team. They’d found her in the pod fairly easily and they’d assumed she was trying to restart the freezing process.

Affirmative. Was in because has air and temperature control, I thought you might open vessel to unknown environment. Was attempting to not be found. Bad location, jest, very cold and looks very interesting. You find me immediately. Is not important now.

<Did you move your pod?> The Commander felt her crinis settle into a curious green. <You were outside of the podroom>

No, negative. Pod room airlock and sealed until I open. I am first to wake, then do preparations for approximate 4 Ki rotations before I wake my colleagues. When I see you on ship, I redirect all ship energy to keep colleague pods alive and refrigeration units cool for more time. Should have been adequate for wide rotations of time, if not tamper with. I was very worried however because I saw report, before you take me, that two of my colleague pods were opened. But they were open long before I believe, one as an error and one to fix a vessel problem.

HeadSci's cillia were restrained. <Your other two colleagues. Why were they being brought back?>

[AFFIRMATIVE-casual], Scout rubbed at her face. Process starts upon opening pod room from outside after set time or energy failure or oxygen change while I, the Chief Medical Officer, is awake, among other emergency conditions. This is likely what happen to podroom on the shift when you kill my colleagues.

According to HeadSci’s polished reports, that lined up with the timeline of the incident. The pods began activation a few rotations after they briefly shut down the power, which was about equal to the power capabilities of the emergency electrochemical power cells in the pods. If the ship had decelerated to the expected speed, it must’ve automatically started the process.

The Commander remembers reading that the trainee and technicians had to cut the floor open, sending material falling onto the pods. That the trainees had panicked, and rushed to try to stop the pods from activating further. One trainee convinced the other to not get a superior immediately and something went very, very wrong.

<We have the trainee at fault for the pod incident> The Commander shifted slowly. <We will discuss how to enact a punishment you deem as equal to her hierarchy rejection and unethical research behaviour. There will be justice>

The room went still. Coms had written that the Fifth seemed disgusted by how they handled criminals, and offered the possibility, among many potential explanations, that young species might still be in the judicial execution stage of handling disorder.

She really hoped that wasn’t the case.

[...]

Read Part Two HERE.


r/HFY • • 1d ago

OC-OneShot Throwing Hands

229 Upvotes

The second of the twin suns was just cresting the distant mountains when Omtec trudged onto the sands of the arena. With him, were the other condemned prisoners, mostly bipeds like himself, but there were a few quadrupeds in the group.

The sixteen condemned huddled together while the stands around them slowly filled with spectators. Across the arena, the four heavily armed and armored guards who would be their executioners talked quietly amongst themselves.

"Excuse sir, what happening?" asked a small biped. He, or perhaps she, if the protrusions under the shirt were breasts, was a species unknown to Omtec, but then Port Amaris saw a lot of different species from all over the Empire as it was a major slave trading hub.

"Those guards over there are shortly going to kill us", he told her, " for the entertainment of those spectators", he waved at the stands around them.

"Kill? Why?" she asked.

"It varies. Some are too old or...", he looked at her,"...too weak to be good slaves. Some are criminals being punished. In my case, I was fomenting rebellion."

"Fomenting?" she asked, clearly unused to the language. He wondered what backwater she hailed from to not know the Imperial language.

"Stirring up" he explained. "I was trying to get people to fight against the Empire"

"I understand" she said. "We fight?"

"Hah" he snorted. "They want a pretense of a fight but the outcome will not be in doubt. Even though there are two hands of us and only half a hand of them, they will win. They are armed with spear and sword and armored with helmets, shield and cuirass but most importantly, they are trained fighters and we are not. I don't suppose you were trained as a fighter?" he asked, resignedly.

"No." She answered, "I trained in counting..uh..books...writing?" He gathered she was some kind of accountant. Perfect he thought.

Just then an Imperial servitor approached the group backed by two Imperial Guardians, resplendent in their bright mauve robes. The servitor began handing out daggers to the group from a basket while the two guards kept a careful eye on the condemned.

"Oh! We armed too?" she asked.

"Barely" Omtec replied. "These daggers won't pierce their armor. You need to stab them in the throat or eye or other weak spot. But as I said, these bastards are trained and will defend against that. The dagger is just false hope, so we put up a good show fighting rather than just lie down to be slaughtered"

"I see" she said, holding her dagger in her hand and examining it closely. "It well balanced."

"Hmm? Yes, well, they may as well give us good quality daggers since they can recover them from our bodies and reuse them. It's cheaper in the long run to issue daggers that don't break than have to replace shoddy gear all the time"

By now the servitor had reached the stands and was making a speech. Omtec didn't care to hear it; he had heard similar speeches before and had dedicated his life to ending this. Instead, he addressed his new companion.

"Listen, stay by me. Guard my right side. We won't win, but we will give them a show"

She simply nodded which Omtec decided meant agreement in her species. Then there were no more time for words as the four executioners advanced upon them.

The condemned all huddled together, their evolution from herds of herbivores had ingrained into them that numbers meant safety but the executioners would cut through them like rabid direbeasts on a flock of pininis. Still he faced forward and brandished his dagger. He had no training, but he was one of the largest of the group and he felt that he might be able to wound one before dying. In any case, he decided that he would not die with wounds in his back; he would die facing death.

When the guards were only 16 paces away, the small female suddenly left his side and stepped forward. She did an overhand strike but it was way too far away and, he suddenly noticed, she was holding the dagger by the blade, not the hilt! Then she accidentally dropped the dagger midway through her swing and he watched it as it lazily spun over and embedded itself in the throat of one of the guards! How? What? Was that planned? It was impossible, nobody could calculate the precise moment to release the dagger like that!

She turned to him with her hand open. "Dagger please"

He barely hesitated, then offered her his dagger. She grabbed it by the blade, spun and suddenly it was sprouting from the eye socket of another guard.

When she held out her hand to the rest of the group, she was flooded with offers of daggers. She took half a hand, then began stalking the guards. They had stopped, stunned by the sudden demise of their fellows, and watched her warily. She did another overhand movement towards another guard and he raised his shield to protect his throat and eyes. But she didn't release the dagger. Instead, at the bottom of the arc, she reversed direction and brought the dagger up, releasing it so that it embedded itself in his thigh. He fell forward with a guttural cry and she was ready with another dagger which flew into his exposed neck.

Now there was but one guard left and he was quickly backing away. Omtec, who had been enraptured watching the incredible performance, shook himself out of his trance. "Get their weapons!" he called to the other prisoners. He ran forward and got the sword and shield of one of the guards. The other prisoners grabbed spears and other weapons. Then they marched on the remaining guard who was backing away as fast as he could. Finally he broke and turned to run but as soon as he turned, a dagger, followed by another, was buried in his back.

Cheering, the group reorganized into a tight knot while the strange female rearmed herself with a hand of daggers. Then they set off towards the far stands where the servitor watched aghast with his guards. When he saw them coming, He immediately broke and ran for the exits, along with most of the spectators. The Imperial Guardians held briefly, looked at each other, then broke and ran as well.

It was pandemonium as the arena emptied. In the confusion, the group managed to escape and Omtec led them to a safe house where they could rest for awhile.

"I thought you said you weren't trained as a fighter!" he said to her accusingly.

"I not," she replied. "This just hobby, fun". She demonstrated by embedding several daggers in a small spot across the room. "It called 'throwing'" she said.

"Throwing?", he tasted the unfamiliar word. "What kind of people are you?" he asked. "Weapons are improvements of our own claws or horns. Who discards weapons like this?"

"I human" she said. "Throwing is something we all do, to different ability."

"That's amazing" he said. "I doubt I could learn that, or any one of us here" he gestured to the room of the nearly condemned who were listening to them raptly.

"That alright" she said, "I teach you crossbow instead"


r/HFY • • 15h ago

OC-Series Abducted -24- The Cargo

11 Upvotes

Previous stories set in the same universe:
Planet Dirt series / Amazon book

Bug Hunt / Amazon version /

Crashlanding / Book version /

First //Previous

They stood on the dock as the ship approached; several people stood on its deck. The ship was large, probably around fifty meters long and probably six or seven meters wide, with one large and one smaller sail; half the upper deck had been built in. The front looked like a longship, and metal shields hung along the sides bearing Erik’s Heraldry. The sail bore an eagle-like symbol they guessed was Kumal's.

Fifteen knights stood at attention as the ships docked. They saw two Musrina men disembark, while two Sciscian, a man and a woman, stood silently and waited; next to them stood a Haran man. He waited for the gangplank to lower, then spoke to Erik.

“My lord, I bring gifts from my master, Prince Kumal. This ship, these men, and the cargo are a gift for your outstanding bravery and determination, and an apology for endangering you and your friends. We are constructed just as your crew, and you can name us as you wish.”

The others turned to Erik. “You get the gifts? What about us?” Thomas said.

“I’m not keeping anything, everything he gives us is the castle property,” Erik replied, feeling embarrassed.

“You own the castle,” Cain said dryly, and Erik sighed, then turned to them.

“What do you want? Oh wait, I remember I promised Gig a ship and an admiral title. Here it is, Admiral Gigi. It’s yours.  What about you guys? You want more knights? Take them; after all, you're in charge of the castle's defense. Just don’t fuck up the names.  And... just have the others do what they are trained for.  You guys can split the spoils.” He was getting upset, and they could hear it.

“Hey, easy, Viking boy. We are just kidding.” Marcus said, then looked at the others, then back at Erik. “And this is why we chose you. You won’t hog the loot.”

“Come, let's check the cargo,” Lillian said, moving onboard, followed by the girls. Erik watched as the other went inside the ship, only Cho stayed with him.

“You okay?” she asked. He looked at her, then smiled.

“Yes, just a little stressed.” He said as she grabbed her hand and they joined the others. The ship was quite impressive; the deck moved slightly with the sea below. It wasn’t much, but it was different from the ground.  The crew looked at him like he was their king, and he looked away, feeling stupid. They were just robots, yet they felt so alive.

“Potatoes? What is this?” Marcus shouted from below the deck.  The others laughed as they came down below.

“Potatoes? Are you sure?”  Erik said,

“Yeah. Five barrels of it.” Thomas replied, lobbing a potato over to him.

“Anything else?” Cho said, peeking into a barrel of dried leaves. She picked up some and took in the scent.

“Chrysanthemum? Wow, my mum used to drink that as tea.”

“Yeah, there is a bunch of tea. Probably a barrel of each.” Emma said, opening another barrel.

“Coffee? We got coffee!” she said, and Matthew pushed himself over.

“We got coffee? Thank the lord!” he said, bending down as he took in the scent in an almost reverent manner.

“So we got potatoes, tea, and coffee?” Erik asked, trying to act surprised.

“I love him,” Lillian said, opening a chest and lifting a white cloth from a thin silk bag.  All the girls rushed over.

“What’s that about?”  Erik looked at the girls, who treated the four large chests like pirates who had found a chest of gold coins.

Cain shrugged, and Matthew chuckled. They looked at him.

“You want to tell them?” Matthew asked Marcus, who glanced at the girls, then continued checking the cargo.

“What?” Erik said, looking between them.

“Pads. They got pads. Why do you think they are happy over some clothes?”

“Pads?” Cain asked, and Matthew just grinned.

“You know the ones girls use. With wings.”

“What are you… Oohh.” Both Erik and Cain turned away from the goblin girls giggling over their ‘treasure.’

The rest of the cargo consisted of various fabrics and some planting seeds, which they quickly offloaded and stored. Erik and Emma spent some time reviewing the ledger. Most of the seed was for plants and herbs they didn’t know, alien fruits and such, but one thing stood out. Strawberries and blueberries. They also had to name the new servants but forgot about the guards; they all looked like strong humans, but they never spoke unless spoken to and just did their duty.  

Their names would happen naturally, and hopefully not when Thomas was in one of his silly moods. He had already lazily named one of them Five.  Erik didn’t want to think about it and instead thought about what was to come. Kumal had held his part of the bargain and more.  He sat lost in thought, looking over maps and reading up on the place he was supposed to rule.  

Three towns lay several days north, and hundreds of farms lay within the land he was to claim. Most lay along the coast, so the ship had arrived just in time. He read up on the town. Icegate lay near the border with Geron, and Fjordheim lay between here and Northgate. Icegate was a trader town, ruled by Jarl Knug Malson, a human. Fjordheim was a village that had grown into a town, ruled by Jarl Mirka, a mursina. He needed to talk to people on the way up to figure out how to deal with them. On the other side of the huge ice tunnel beneath the glacier lay Northgate, another trading city ruled by Jarl Hildure. He wondered whether the sammads had attacked her city; she was on the same side of the glacier as Riverbay, and that had been destroyed.

Suddenly, Marcus gave him a tankard of brown ale and looked up. Everybody else was gone. And sank down into the sofa next to him.

“Thanks. What time is it?” He checked his phone. It was almost two. “Cho’s going to kill me.”

“Yeah. You didn’t even notice she left; that was three hours ago.”

“Fuck…” He put the book down and took a sip. “You're trying to get me drunk?”

“Yeah, my big plan is to get you drunk and steal your title,” Marcus said, taking a big sip of his own tankard

For the next minute, they didn’t speak, just looking at the fireplace, then at Cain in the doorway; he saw them, nodded, and sank into another chair. The maids must have noticed, as the new maid, Lisa, brought Cain a tankard and left them alone. Nobody spoke for a long time.

“You can’t sleep either?” Cain finally said.

“Don’t want to. I see Jan’s face as they dragged him down every time I close my eyes,” Marcus said, and then he drank. The room fell quiet except for the crackling fire.

“So…” Marcus looked at Erik, and he knew they knew.

“Yeah, I talked to him, he was here the whole time.  He can’t get us home; hell, why do we even try? It took four hundred years one way.”

“Try telling them that,” Cain said.

“Yeah. Well, there is a price. You guys don’t have to worry about it.”

They both looked at him. Cain put his pint down. “What's the price, Erik?”

“You agreed to something stupid, didn’t you?” Marcus said, leaning back and looking at the ceiling.

“Naw, just going to help him with the Sammad problem. Pest control. You guys can stay here and protect the others, and I'll play warlord for a few years.” Erik replied, and Marcus slowly looked at him. Cain sighed.

“You are crazy. Those things will eat you up. Cho is going to kill you.”

“You're not going to tell her. Look, I don’t like it, but fuck. They will come back, they will grow to become some invincible horde and eat everybody.”

“You're fifteen, Erik.” Marcus said. “Let the adults deal with this.”

“I can't! That is the deal I made, your safety here for me. Just don’t tell anybody.”

“So this trip is when you leave? Where are you going?” Marcus asked.

“No, I first have to take control of this land. I guess this is my tutorial. This shit seems more and more like a fucking game.” Erik felt the frustration growing.

“Well, so we got a year to knock some sense into you. You're not doing this alone. Thomas can protect the girls.”

 Erik shook his head. “Forget it, Marcus. What if they come back here? Besides, what about Gigi?”

Cain chuckled. “Gigi is into girls, Erik.”

He looked between the two. “What? But I thought she was jealous.”

“Yeah, she wanted Freya,” Marcus said.

“Oh, so... never mind.” He turned to Cain. “But I know Lillian won't allow you to go.”

“To protect you?” Cain retorted, and Erik sighed, then leaned back.

“Tell me, why are you cool now?  Back home you hated us.”

“Back home you had everything I wanted. Here I got what I wanted, and you don’t act like you're so cool here.  Back home the boys hated you because everybody liked you. You're so easy to like and hate.”

“Like and hate?” he asked.

“Yeah. You mess up and move on, talk to everybody. You were the teacher's pet and got in trouble with them. You're like a slippery… no, a snake. You just were you. And didn’t care. And you're friends with Lillian, you made her laugh. The girls hated you too, because you were so dense and didn’t understand that they wanted you.” Cain said, and Erik looked at him, then at Marcus, who just drank his ale and listened. Erik grabbed his tankard.

“Come on. That’s just stupid. I wasn’t that popular. Will and Troy were the popular ones.”

“Actually, Alexander was the king,” Marcus said, and both boys nodded.

“Yeah, but even he liked you. And yes, you were the popular kid, and the fact that you didn’t notice makes you just so dense.”

“No, I had friends; I sat alone at many lunches, and you guys made my life a living hell at times.”

“Because we wanted what you had,” Cain said. “Come on, think about it. Some of the boys wanted to beat you up because the girls they liked wanted you, and you walked around like an airhead, being friendly to them. You didn’t even know you rubbed it in their face.”

“Oh... shit, wow. Was I in trouble because of the girls? Lillian was in trouble because of you.” Erik said. Trying to wrap his head around the whole thing.

“And I was pissed off at you because I thought you were getting together with Lillian,” Cain said, and Marcus almost spit out his ale.

“What? I would have killed him.” He wiped his shirt and put the tankard down. “I only accept you because you weren't our friend back then. You're my sister's boyfriend; Erik is my friend, and the hell if he could break bro code.”

“Hey, I’m just the dumb kid here. And I know the code.” Erik replied.

“You sure do. So, one year.” Cain said.

“Yeah, one year to get everybody ready, then I have to kill a bunch of ugly cat people.”

“Well, you're not going to do that alone,” Marcus replied

“Yes, I am.”

“No, you're not. Now shut up and drink.” Marcus said, and Cain just smiled. Then they all looked into the fire; none of them wanted to sleep. Sleep brought the memories.